(PSN)yzfbikerboi Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 (edited) hi everyone! I've come up with a concept for a new warframe; this is what I have so far, and I hope to add to it, or make certain alterations as I go along. Also, hoping to add some concept art to it once I learn how to draw again lol I've also included an idea for a new melee weapon as Nemesis' specialized choice of melee :D so here we go.... NEMESIS WARFRAME ‘Loyalty will be the key to their survival..’ ‘But with these powers, what will we do if they can’t be controlled?’ ‘That Master, is something we have already prepared for…’ While the Naga drums rang out through the universe, honouring the Tenno for their valiant efforts, one still slept. One, to be awoken when she was needed. The one who would put a stop to the lower guardians betrayal. While he watched from the distance, she slept, waiting for her chance to rejoin her comrades, to rejoin the fight… It was long ago when the Master had chosen her, along with her fellow brothers and sisters, ‘Tenno’ they called them. Although young, all were willing to trust the Masters, to learn how to protect, how to fight. She had always been the one to watch over her siblings, to make sure no harm ever came to them on the battlefield. No one would ever do them wrong, she made sure of that. The cries echoing throughout the universe, the Tenno were unstoppable, until the day HE came… Stalking us…. Killing us… Her time had come again, no more would her brothers or sisters face his wrath, she would deliver his fate. The fate he chose for himself. ‘Rise Nemesis. It is time to rejoin your brothers and sisters, they need your help once more, He has returned’ ......................................................... Agile, and deadly, Nemesis was designed by the Orokin overlords as a safety protocol against an uprising from the lower guardians (aka. The Stalker). With speed and Tenno cunning, she delivers swift punishment to all who stand against the Tenno. Her skill set is one not to be underestimated, equally masterful with long range and able to deliver devastating inverted strikes from her preferred Critana twin blades, she is a match for any foe who would stand against her. .......................................................... BASE STATS 90 Health 100 Shields 50 Armour 120 Energy 1.05 Sprint speed ...................................... ABILITIES 1. Stalking Prey – Targets a singular enemy for immediate assassination, covering the distance between Nemesis and the target in the blink of an eye. Costs 25 energy Deals 250/350/500/750 damage, Range of 5/10/15/20m. ability has a 6sec cool down regardless of rank. possible add on for ability: if no target is selected, Nemesis will target closest enemy to her within ½ normal range and deal ½ ability damage; Maximization Maximized Power Duration has no positive effect on this ability. Reduces the attack radius to 6.8 meters. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 6.25 energy. Has no negative effect on ths ability. Maximized Power Range increases the attack radius to 47 meters. Reduces the damage to 300. Maximized Power Strength increases the damage to 1717.5. Increases cost to 38.75 energy. 2. Split Personality – Nemesis splits herself into a carbon copy, which mimics her exact movement, (able to follow, wall jump, run, sprint, shoot, melee etc.) dealing double damage at selected target at the cost of reduced health and shields; Costs 50 energy, and 1/8-1/4-1/3-1/2 shields, 1/12-1/8-1/4-1/3 health which is given to copy as health/shield capacity. Damage provided by copy is at ¼-1/3-1/2-2/3 weapon damage; copy lasts for 10/20/30/40sec (not affected by duration mods) Possible option: This is Nemesis’ only ability which cannot be dispelled by the stalker, if it is already in use before he spawns Maximization Maximized Power Duration Has no positive effect on this ability. Has no negative effect on this ability. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 12.5 energy. Has no negative effect on this ability Maximized Power Range Has no positive effect on this ability. Reduces the damage to 1/3 weapon output. Maximized Power Strength increases the damage to 100% capped. Increases cost to 77.5 energy. 3. Mystic fog – using the vents on her arms, Nemesis surrounds herself and team in a cloud of fog, any nearby enemies will become confused and unable to see the approaching tenno. Costs 75 energy Range of 8/12/17/25m Duration 3/5/10/16sec Maximization Maximized Power Duration increases duration to 41.1seconds. Has no negative effect on this ability. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 18.75 energy. Reduces duration to 6.4 seconds Maximized Power Range increases the radius to 50 meters. Has no negative effect on this ability. Maximized Power Strength Has no positive effect on this ability. Increases cost to 116.25 energy. 4. Armour blast – Nemesis tears open the upper section of her armour, exposing an energy source which disintegrates enemies around her, costs 100 energy deals 400/800/1350/1700 Blast damage to all enemies in range. Range 8/12/18/25m Maximization Maximized Power Duration has no positive effect on this ability. Reduces the attack radius to 8.5 meters. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 25 energy. Has no negative effect on this ability Maximized Power Range increases the attack radius to 50 meters. Reduces the damage to 680 Maximized Power Strength increases the damage to 3893. Increases cost to 155 energy. Alt helmet: Jaded Nemesis Helmet Critana: An orokin inspired ‘twisted’ Katana, held in reverse to a normal sword, this blade is Nemesis’ preferred melee weapon, for that up close and personal feeling. (Dual option possibly?) Impact: 6 Puncture: 8 Slash: 48 Slide: 175 slam: 55 Jump: 125 Attack speed: 1.4 Crit: 2x/7.5% Status: 10% also, special credit to my good mate Michael (PSN: Ruffy_86), for helping out with ideas for her and getting some of the finer points to where they are! May 9th 2014: Added concept drawing; please note: my drawing skills are not great!! haha, but here it is Thanks for reading! :) Edited May 9, 2014 by (PS4)yzfbikerboi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedPrimed Posted April 14, 2014 Share Posted April 14, 2014 (edited) Please change the name I only see Nemesis from darksector when I hear this name and the concept don't fit with her in the slightest Edited April 14, 2014 by Sasoka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sharp_Demonologist Posted April 14, 2014 Share Posted April 14, 2014 I was thinking about Némesis from RE but yeah that other Némesis too. Not a bad concept but definelly change her name. That mystic fog reminds me of Zabuza's Silent Killin, his Ultimate in Naruto Shinppuden UNS3. Nice to see more ninja stuff here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)yzfbikerboi Posted April 16, 2014 Author Share Posted April 16, 2014 (edited) Thanks for the feedback guys, Nemesis was chosen due to the greek mythology meaning, wiki entry: In Greek mythology, Nemesis (Greek, Νέμεσις), also called Rhamnousia/Rhamnusia ("the goddess of Rhamnous") at her sanctuary atRhamnous, north of Marathon, was the spirit of divine retribution against those who succumb to hubris (arrogance before the deities). Another name was Adrasteia, meaning "the inescapable."[1] The Greeks personified vengeful fate as a remorseless goddess: the goddess of revenge. The name Nemesis is related to the Greek word νέμειν [némein], meaning "to give what is due" I do understand though, cos immediately after posting it up, I was thinking of RE too lol. I'll try to think of another name, possibly even use Adrasteia as a placeholder name for now :) now if there is a way to change the topic title.... :/ Edited April 16, 2014 by (PS4)yzfbikerboi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)yzfbikerboi Posted May 9, 2014 Author Share Posted May 9, 2014 Added on my lame as hell drawing! I'll be working on that alot more soon, try and get a better drawing happening and working through some other thoughts for this concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Little-Cunny Posted May 9, 2014 Share Posted May 9, 2014 ability 4 blowin her top off doesn't sound too practical... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sharp_Demonologist Posted May 9, 2014 Share Posted May 9, 2014 (PS4)yzfbikerboi When you edit a post there is an "Advanced edit mode" or something like that that allows you to change the tittle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)yzfbikerboi Posted May 11, 2014 Author Share Posted May 11, 2014 cheers Sharp :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rorkyr Posted July 27, 2014 Share Posted July 27, 2014 hi everyone! I've come up with a concept for a new warframe; this is what I have so far, and I hope to add to it, or make certain alterations as I go along. Also, hoping to add some concept art to it once I learn how to draw again lol I've also included an idea for a new melee weapon as Nemesis' specialized choice of melee :D so here we go.... NEMESIS WARFRAME ‘Loyalty will be the key to their survival..’ ‘But with these powers, what will we do if they can’t be controlled?’ ‘That Master, is something we have already prepared for…’ While the Naga drums rang out through the universe, honouring the Tenno for their valiant efforts, one still slept. One, to be awoken when she was needed. The one who would put a stop to the lower guardians betrayal. While he watched from the distance, she slept, waiting for her chance to rejoin her comrades, to rejoin the fight… It was long ago when the Master had chosen her, along with her fellow brothers and sisters, ‘Tenno’ they called them. Although young, all were willing to trust the Masters, to learn how to protect, how to fight. She had always been the one to watch over her siblings, to make sure no harm ever came to them on the battlefield. No one would ever do them wrong, she made sure of that. The cries echoing throughout the universe, the Tenno were unstoppable, until the day HE came… Stalking us…. Killing us… Her time had come again, no more would her brothers or sisters face his wrath, she would deliver his fate. The fate he chose for himself. ‘Rise Nemesis. It is time to rejoin your brothers and sisters, they need your help once more, He has returned’ ......................................................... Agile, and deadly, Nemesis was designed by the Orokin overlords as a safety protocol against an uprising from the lower guardians (aka. The Stalker). With speed and Tenno cunning, she delivers swift punishment to all who stand against the Tenno. Her skill set is one not to be underestimated, equally masterful with long range and able to deliver devastating inverted strikes from her preferred Critana twin blades, she is a match for any foe who would stand against her. .......................................................... BASE STATS 90 Health 100 Shields 50 Armour 120 Energy 1.05 Sprint speed ...................................... ABILITIES 1. Stalking Prey – Targets a singular enemy for immediate assassination, covering the distance between Nemesis and the target in the blink of an eye. Costs 25 energy Deals 250/350/500/750 damage, Range of 5/10/15/20m. ability has a 6sec cool down regardless of rank. possible add on for ability: if no target is selected, Nemesis will target closest enemy to her within ½ normal range and deal ½ ability damage; Maximization Maximized Power Duration has no positive effect on this ability. Reduces the attack radius to 6.8 meters. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 6.25 energy. Has no negative effect on ths ability. Maximized Power Range increases the attack radius to 47 meters. Reduces the damage to 300. Maximized Power Strength increases the damage to 1717.5. Increases cost to 38.75 energy. 2. Split Personality – Nemesis splits herself into a carbon copy, which mimics her exact movement, (able to follow, wall jump, run, sprint, shoot, melee etc.) dealing double damage at selected target at the cost of reduced health and shields; Costs 50 energy, and 1/8-1/4-1/3-1/2 shields, 1/12-1/8-1/4-1/3 health which is given to copy as health/shield capacity. Damage provided by copy is at ¼-1/3-1/2-2/3 weapon damage; copy lasts for 10/20/30/40sec (not affected by duration mods) Possible option: This is Nemesis’ only ability which cannot be dispelled by the stalker, if it is already in use before he spawns Maximization Maximized Power Duration Has no positive effect on this ability. Has no negative effect on this ability. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 12.5 energy. Has no negative effect on this ability Maximized Power Range Has no positive effect on this ability. Reduces the damage to 1/3 weapon output. Maximized Power Strength increases the damage to 100% capped. Increases cost to 77.5 energy. 3. Mystic fog – using the vents on her arms, Nemesis surrounds herself and team in a cloud of fog, any nearby enemies will become confused and unable to see the approaching tenno. Costs 75 energy Range of 8/12/17/25m Duration 3/5/10/16sec Maximization Maximized Power Duration increases duration to 41.1seconds. Has no negative effect on this ability. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 18.75 energy. Reduces duration to 6.4 seconds Maximized Power Range increases the radius to 50 meters. Has no negative effect on this ability. Maximized Power Strength Has no positive effect on this ability. Increases cost to 116.25 energy. 4. Armour blast – Nemesis tears open the upper section of her armour, exposing an energy source which disintegrates enemies around her, costs 100 energy deals 400/800/1350/1700 Blast damage to all enemies in range. Range 8/12/18/25m Maximization Maximized Power Duration has no positive effect on this ability. Reduces the attack radius to 8.5 meters. Maximized Power Efficiency reduces the cost to 25 energy. Has no negative effect on this ability Maximized Power Range increases the attack radius to 50 meters. Reduces the damage to 680 Maximized Power Strength increases the damage to 3893. Increases cost to 155 energy. Alt helmet: Jaded Nemesis Helmet Critana: An orokin inspired ‘twisted’ Katana, held in reverse to a normal sword, this blade is Nemesis’ preferred melee weapon, for that up close and personal feeling. (Dual option possibly?) Impact: 6 Puncture: 8 Slash: 48 Slide: 175 slam: 55 Jump: 125 Attack speed: 1.4 Crit: 2x/7.5% Status: 10% also, special credit to my good mate Michael (PSN: Ruffy_86), for helping out with ideas for her and getting some of the finer points to where they are! May 9th 2014: Added concept drawing; please note: my drawing skills are not great!! haha, but here it is Thanks for reading! :) I've already a "Nemesis Warframe" concept, but you're idea is interesting. (You're drawing skill are not great but not catastrophic at all :3) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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