Aeonkraken Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 (edited) Lien français : https://forums.warframe.com/index.php?/topic/208206-atohm-warframe-radioactive/#entry2446236 Let me introduce my warframe concept : ATOHM The first Atohm woke by accident, giving an end to his cryosleep because of his highly unstable radiation. Alone , he faced the Grineer and the Corpus , and realized he was in real danger with this weak warframe. In lack of power, he returned on the ruins of the past old war, where he modificated hi s armor with a fusion core, granting him highly destructive powers.While he was on his way to find the other Tenno , he was attacked by a Grineer squad. Surrounded, he decided to try his new p ower... The fusion core reacted in an unexpected way, destructing everything in a nuclear explosion.Only Atohm survived, his broken warframe standing in a radioactive fluid. The warframe protected this Tenno, but made them unable to seperate.Alone, he stole their ship, and got lost in the infinite space until the Lotus found him. ATOHM is a mid-armored warframe, making use of the radiations oh his armor. He is balanced between attack, defense and support, and is able to use a destructive ultimate power, that needs reasoning before being released. Stats (rank 1/rank 30): Health : 150 / 450Energy Pool : 90 /175Shields : 100 / 300Armor : 50 / 175Sprint Speed : 0.85Stamina : 115 Powers : I) Implosive Flow :1- Marks a single target with radiations, dealing [ X Radioactive Dmg / sec ] [25% Status chance /sec] during [ X sec].2- If the enemy dies while he is still marked, he explodes, dealing [ X Impact Dmg ] on [ X radius] area.3- Enemies in the explosion radius suffer from the [ 1 ] effect, but with a 50% damage reduction. II) Isotopic Emanation : 1- A radioactive miasma surrounds the warframe.2- Creates a radiation aura [radius 2/3/4 m], reducing the strenght of nearby enemies. [melee attack -45%,-55%,-65%]III) Irradiating Leak :1- Discharges a radioactive liquid on the ground. [ X radius ]2- Enemies in the radius are slowed down and are subject to radiation status [33% Status chance /sec] IV) Atonium:- ATOHM sacrifices the half oh his health, releasing a powerful atomic explosion ( damage bonus depending on the HP ). Creates a 3 steps reaction on a X radius. 1- The initial blast deals [ X Explosive Dmg ]2- The deflagration deals [ X Fire Dmg ]3- The full radius is then attacked by radiations [ X Radioactive Dmg /sec ] sur [ X sec ]. The design is based on Japanese Ninja's Armor, in honor of the victims of the Fukushima disaster. Thanks to Deadscream for the artwork and the english translation. Open to criticism ! PS : get 100 platinium Here Edited December 4, 2014 by Aeonkraken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sharp_Demonologist Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 You need to work on your grammar, just saying. I would help you fix it but im not really the one to fix gramar as im Latin and i still have much to learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeonkraken Posted April 8, 2014 Author Share Posted April 8, 2014 (edited) Im sorry but im french, I dont have the tools for mastering english grammar, translate french to english its kinda hard. Anyway thx. Edited April 8, 2014 by Aeonkraken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BiancaRoughfin Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 The Helmet looks like something stolen from The Shredder in Ninja Turtles and Tennos dont use long dresses wich drasticly reduce mobility. Other then that the drawing is great but i think Nova already plays a sort of Role when it comes for some kinda radiation/unstable Warframe? I can easly imagin this guy hugging a Nova and getting desintegrated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sharp_Demonologist Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 (edited) Aeonkraken I know it took me quite a loooong time to be able to writte this well. Dont worry if you practice enough it will become natural eventually. Good concept btw, as far as i understood XD BTW you know what helps alot? translating english songs. I memorised Get Jinx both in english and spanish. Edited April 8, 2014 by The_Sharp_Demonologist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeonkraken Posted April 8, 2014 Author Share Posted April 8, 2014 (edited) thanks for the hint Edited April 8, 2014 by Aeonkraken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karibiki Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 NIIIIIIIICE ! ! ! +1 VERY GOOD IDEA ! ! ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeonkraken Posted April 13, 2014 Author Share Posted April 13, 2014 (edited) If some one else have any comment ? Edited April 30, 2014 by Aeonkraken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeonkraken Posted December 4, 2014 Author Share Posted December 4, 2014 im still looking for reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted December 4, 2014 Share Posted December 4, 2014 I'm not partial to the lore considering most theorize that Warframes aren't just removable suits, but the idea itself seems decent as far as radioactive Frames go. Then again Oberon is technically already a Radiation user, but he isn't explicitly themed after it like Ember, Volt, Saryn, and Mag are for their elements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
connorpistol Posted December 4, 2014 Share Posted December 4, 2014 Atohm= non-stop sayrn + hydroid + non-existent ember +bad grammahr +bad grammahr Gahhhhh.... auto correct you suck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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