emaralez87 Posted May 9, 2014 Share Posted May 9, 2014 (edited) another piece of poetry from me! and, traditionally, if you see language mistakes - please tell me how I should correct them :) inspired by this Corpus Ice Planet art: http://youtu.be/xqNEVpoElAA?t=20m55s Em B ice glows under fingers, ice calls to a battle, D A moons are rising in the cold azure Am Em war gods, who had lost their names on the crow road F# B7 are returning to touch up the balance fracture Em B there were times, when the rising stars D A were promised to protect and to save Am Em but today our blades are clearing a lane F# B7 what runs us to the death of the brave Em A someone crying someone praying : “please die” Em A someones soul is rising up to the moons Am D the war god, who promises the dawn F# I am back to harvest and dooms Em G I have no regrets ‘bout the past F# B7 ‘cause it’s gone so long time ago Em G I have no regrets ‘bout the dawn what I’ve brought Am D my blade is cutting the bullets - that’s all I should know Em B this is furious flight to the end, D A to the limit, to the outcome of time. Am Em under helmet you can’t see the face F# B7 dead can’t tell about their crime Em G just all things must pass, but the dreams fall behind F# B7 in the puddle of blood moons reflex, Em G them summoned by echo of stars in cold space - Am Em the war gods, who have lost their names Edited May 17, 2014 by emaralez87 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RadiantProxy Posted May 9, 2014 Share Posted May 9, 2014 Oh, wow, I got goosebumps at 'the dead can't tell about their crime' for some reason. Quite impressive =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emaralez87 Posted May 9, 2014 Author Share Posted May 9, 2014 Oh, wow, I got goosebumps at 'the dead can't tell about their crime' for some reason. Quite impressive =) yay thnx! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emaralez87 Posted May 10, 2014 Author Share Posted May 10, 2014 basic harmony (still working on it) Em B/D A/Am Em/F# B7 Em B/D A/Am Em/F# B7 Em A/Em A/Am D/F# Em G/F# B7/Em G/Am D Em B/D A/Am Em/F# B7 Em G/F# B7/Em G/Am Em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaSnail Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 God damn it. I like it, in fact saying "I like it" does not express the amount of feeling I have to this! Mere words can not express, I'll be sure to keep this in mind when I write fan-fiction. Oh god I can see so much pictures from this single poem... and all of them expressing emotions of the corrupted hearts that exist inside all Tenno. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emaralez87 Posted May 15, 2014 Author Share Posted May 15, 2014 God damn it. I like it, in fact saying "I like it" does not express the amount of feeling I have to this! Mere words can not express, I'll be sure to keep this in mind when I write fan-fiction. Oh god I can see so much pictures from this single poem... and all of them expressing emotions of the corrupted hearts that exist inside all Tenno. oh thank you :) corrupted hearts - well said! when I thinking of tenno it mostly about mad brains, but corrupted hearts is a more appropriate term! I was writing it for a week - was comparing facts about Pluto's atmosphere. first I though to give more dynamics at the start of this "flight" by metaphor of wind, but... there is no wind at Pluto, but alot of ice :) so feeleng of this lyrics was changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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