[Concept] Closing Measure (Siege) - Darvo Alerts + Event [Upd July6 - Badge Concepts]

[emaralez87]

place: distant colony near Pluto

 

acting figures: Frohd Bek, Darvo

 

trivia:

Bek want to expand his tax zone, but this fox too smart to start a war. he prefers another ways. so Bek starts “reconstruction” of Solar rail in the region. sounds good, huh? but all storage ways are closed! colonies can’t upgrade and repair their technical features, life support systems, people are starving… and no one can storage them ‘cause solar rail is closed. 

top managers of the colonies are ready to come quietly into the Bek’s huggies, but his son sees the opportunity for his business there (and opportunity to make things lively for his father) , and he needs Tenno to help him.

 

operation:

 

1 stage (alerts). to help Darvo’s storage ships to go through the void to the region.

trivia:  while sailing - ships attacked by infested. (mb new infested enemy type presentation)

mission: regular extermination missions “Corpus vs Infestation”. 

 

2 stage (alerts).  tenno have to land onto the Bek’s Guard Ships to sabotage SSRs (secondary surveillance radars).

(mb new Corpus enemy type presentation)

mission: regular Corpus sabotage missions. 

 

3 stage (event). deliver storage containers to the colonists. colonists will open their several gateways (one at the time) for a short time for one storage ship could to drop storage container, then gateway closes.

trivia:

Bek’s PSRs (primary surveillance radars) see the storage ships. Bek’s forces start their attack on the storage ships. tenno should repel Bek’s forces attack and make a delivery.

to open gateway one of the tenno should send special enciphered code from ship to outpost, to drop storage container other (or the same tenno, if this is solo player) tenno should  to proceed container releasing protocol in the other cargo of storage ship in 90 seconds after enciphered code was sent. then all remain Bek’s soldiers should be exterminated. 

mission:

“sabotage+”* (2 data masses, may be hold by one player), then extermination Corpus vs Corpus (or just Corpus extermination).

*“sabotage+”: after thirst data mass inputed to console tenno have 90 seconds to put in another data mass into another terminal. if tenno late - then mission don’t counts as failed and just proceeds as exterminate mission. with every mission Bek’s forces became stronger.

point count:

one dropped storage container = 5 points, one storage ship cleared from Bek’s forces = from 1 point (1 tear) to 5 points (3 tear).

 

result:

trivia: Bek realised what solar rail “reconstruction” in the region becomes unprofitable and transmits reconstruction works contract to more responsive external collaborator.

practical result: Darvo’s deal, sabotage+ and forma bps! :D (mb presentation of new infested and Corpus enemy, new tileset, same faction vs same faction mechanic, badge, weapon bp).

 

badge concepts:

 

Edited July 6, 2014 by emaralez87

[emaralez87]

result trivia added, mission variations added.

btw - grammarnazi needed :D

[emaralez87]

badge concepts added

[emaralez87]

I've got feedback where person was amazed realized, what "huggies" is a word formed from word "hug", and this is not a word what means pull-ups or napkin.

I was LMAO when imagined poor Frohd Bek with his asthma and pull-ups filled by top managers XD 

[emaralez87]

grammarnazi needed, lorewriter needed.

 

what exactly I want from lorewriter:

 

a) Darvo’s inbox messages

1) 1st stage message, where Darvo asks tenno’s help. of course, he don’t want tenno let Lotus know about this message and mission. he asks only to help him to bring his ships through the void - kinda little-little help, no more. he silent about reconstruction, colonies and his father.

2) 2nd stage message. Darvo says “thank you” for 1st stage and makes fake amazement at reconstruction of solar rail and SSRs in the region, what don’t let his ships to went into region. he convinceth tenno what this should be kinda bureaucratic mistake and he will have a permission to sail his ships into region, but he have no time for this and he asks tenno for little favor - to sabotage SSRs for his inoffensive ships with food could sail into region.

3) 3rd stage message. Darvo says all-the-truth (as he says, but in fact this is just a half of truth). Darvo lays on the sob stuff with a trowel: miserable colonists are starving! and they paid  him for the food… tenno should help him to help them. then Darvo explains how mission goes.

4) grateful Darvo says what his father drawn in and now colonists may be independent and happy again.

 

b) inmission lines

1) 1st stage lines, where Darvo says Lotus’s(sssss)stuff while infestation extermination missions

2) 2nd stage lines. smthng like “I wouldn’t nurse you like a Lotus - terminals are here, there and somewhere, datamasses in your hands - you know what to do, go”. then Bek appears and says smthng like Alad’s stuff about betrayers, who distract his business and stick their noses where they don't belong. then Darvo and Bek start their son-vs-father stuff.

3) 3rd stage lines. Darvo consistently cut a take what to do. lore opens in the Darvo-Bek dialogues.