Cobalt313 Posted July 27, 2014 Author Share Posted July 27, 2014 Made a couple more grammar edits and tweaked some of the Mission 5 dialogue in an effort to eliminate a possible plothole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S.T.M.P.D Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 Just some feedback: I don't think Vor should remember his past. It'd be a hell of a lot more interesting if he became perma-Corrupted, and now wants to use J-frames as the Orokin's revenge against the Tenno: taking his old armies, and "repurposing" them. But that's just my two cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted August 18, 2014 Author Share Posted August 18, 2014 Just some feedback: I don't think Vor should remember his past. It'd be a hell of a lot more interesting if he became perma-Corrupted, and now wants to use J-frames as the Orokin's revenge against the Tenno: taking his old armies, and "repurposing" them. But that's just my two cents. I like that concept, opens up a lot more possibilities. Might need to do some re-writing to incorporate this idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunter126 Posted August 18, 2014 Share Posted August 18, 2014 (edited) Sweet... You can get the blueprints as mission rewards immediately. Definitely better that way. Still, Janus Warframe. I guess that fits. But who will take over as the boss of the void now that Vor is gone? maybe there will be clones of Vor that he made descendants or successors of Vor Cobalt what bout what boss will it be on mercury now that Vor is gone? I like the quest, sounds awesome, looked like a wall of text but I enjoyed reading it how will you get the seer pistol then if Vor is dead? do you get it along with Janus parts? Edited August 18, 2014 by Hunter126 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emaralez87 Posted August 20, 2014 Share Posted August 20, 2014 complex adventure! from one side you get BPs immediately, from other side this quest is long enough I just realized I didn't really describe Vor's abilities anywhere in this thread. Should I make a new section for it, or just describe the powers he uses in each encounter and only mention new ones he gets in subsequent encounters? I'm for to describing in encounters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted August 20, 2014 Author Share Posted August 20, 2014 maybe there will be clones of Vor that he made descendants or successors of Vor Cobalt what bout what boss will it be on mercury now that Vor is gone? I like the quest, sounds awesome, looked like a wall of text but I enjoyed reading it how will you get the seer pistol then if Vor is dead? do you get it along with Janus parts? Considering Vor remained the boss of Mercury even after Void Vor was introduced, I imagine a similar situation would occur after this quest: canonically he's dead, but gameplay-wise you can still re-fight him as if he wasn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrhat.lf Posted August 21, 2014 Share Posted August 21, 2014 Got to Mission Five. I suspect if this were a real quest, we would have a new Warframe similar to Valkyr, but more of a mid-range type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted August 21, 2014 Author Share Posted August 21, 2014 Got to Mission Five. I suspect if this were a real quest, we would have a new Warframe similar to Valkyr, but more of a mid-range type. I had a link to the Frame I had designed as the reward at the bottom of the post in a spoiler. Might want to take a look! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted August 21, 2014 Author Share Posted August 21, 2014 Edited the missions where Vor appears to list his abilities. May need some tweaking, but it's a start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted August 24, 2014 Author Share Posted August 24, 2014 Realized that Epilgoue 3 would have made more sense as a Hijack mission and adjusted it accordingly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted October 31, 2014 Author Share Posted October 31, 2014 Well, it's that time of year again. Time for some necromancy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt313 Posted October 31, 2014 Author Share Posted October 31, 2014 I just had a thought- would mission 7 make more sense if it had an Archwing extraction since the Corpus vessel was under attack at the time and Ordis might have a hard time extracting you anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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