Allies Of The Tenno (Putting This On Hold For Now) [Update 10/17]

[arch111]

Wow. Very Impressive.

[arch111]

I was looking at some old designs and looked at this discarded model. After a while I thought "Hmm what if I painted this? Maby the rebels of the Vandals can use it, like a space skiimask, but still sending a clear message who this is."

So said and done here it is. I figure it can be removed in a hurry whilst running from the authoritys.

I allso assume it to contain gear like enhanced vision, comsystem, voicescrambler and tracking jammer.

And the colors are just an example.

[HappyApathy]

It looks a bit too 'organic' (not enough sharp edges maybe) instead of 'techy' to me right now but that could just be the coloring though

Edited August 18, 2014 by HappyApathy

[arch111]

It looks a bit too 'organic' (not enough sharp edges maybe) instead of 'techy' to me right now but that could just be the coloring though

no you are right, its quite soft right now.

Will work on it some more and see where I end up.

Allso working on a scene with Vandals and crewmen. Still planning the scene and setting, but the title is and will remain, Death of a Crewman.

Edited August 18, 2014 by arch111

[Zero.No.Hikari]

Well even though the Fan-Fic is still going I think Zero is an Ally of the Tenno same with his newly found partner Ren.

 

Zero and Ren

Zero accidentally awakened by a Red veil member while looking for more Tenno learned of what became of the world and the events that happened after he and Ren had been the first to go through the Void.  Unlike normal Tenno Zero has a clawed hand with a 'eye' on the back of it that allows him to create constructs of the void.  though normal in all but the burnt scar tissue on his right hand Zero can manipulate Void energies to create constructs or absorb the energy of others around him to 'feed' his hand.   Still making out what happened to the world as he slept he has become allied to the Tenno for their search of balance.

 

Ren on the other hand was found by the Corpus and used to create stronger alloys and MOA's eventually a Suit that would allow a crewman to work with Harvester to hunt tenno that would be 'borrowed' by Darvo.  She escaped to Phobos launching a search by the Corpus who did not want their best weapon to fall to the Grineer or worse the Tenno.   Now reunited with Zero, Ren agreed to work with him and see what good the two can do for the tenno.

[HappyApathy]

@arch111

 

You tell me when you have a finished product for any of your models and I'll add it to the OP

 

@Zero.No.Hikari

 

I know I asked for a condensed version but I think you took it a bit too far :P, I still really have little idea who these characters are or what they've done, I mean I'm writing out a back story for ex-Crewman Zhon right now and the thing is at least half a page, your allowed to elaborate a bit more.

 

Also, I'm a bit concerned that they sound like Tenno already, not Red Veil members, it sounds like you are talking more about a story about two Tenno then two potential resistance members.

Edited August 19, 2014 by HappyApathy

[Goatasty]

Some variations on armour and helmets. I wanted to see how he would look with something a bit different. 

Plus some helmet sketches.

I should really think of a female or something really different. I don't want to clog this forum with too many variations of the same thing.

 

[emaralez87]

Some variations on armour and helmets. I wanted to see how he would look with something a bit different. 

Plus some helmet sketches.

I should really think of a female or something really different. I don't want to clog this forum with too many variations of the same thing.

 

oh I like not only to do but to watch step-by-step things too :D I always thought what process of creation more interesting and exciting then the result

seems I've just typed smthng dirty XD

I like upper helmet more. bottom one looks for me like DiCaprio mam face :) upper one more cyberpuncish though.

also I'm glad what he will be metallic-red, not just red :)

yeah, female, and, mb someone different as fat guy or short guy, augmented gal or any other guy/gal with obviously not perfect body?

Edited August 19, 2014 by emaralez87

[HappyApathy]

Add pic to the OP, very nice :)

[emaralez87]

my remake of your art. remade to Safo cyborg NPC (very unfinished and in bad quality)

Edited August 19, 2014 by emaralez87

[(PSN)Ddragon117]

Some variations on armour and helmets. I wanted to see how he would look with something a bit different. 

Plus some helmet sketches.

I should really think of a female or something really different. I don't want to clog this forum with too many variations of the same thing.

 

The Red Veil was always a unique group but also the got tired of rescuing them. I support this idea cause they need to kick &#!!

[emaralez87]

I was looking at some old designs and looked at this discarded model. After a while I thought "Hmm what if I painted this? Maby the rebels of the Vandals can use it, like a space skiimask, but still sending a clear message who this is."

So said and done here it is. I figure it can be removed in a hurry whilst running from the authoritys.

I allso assume it to contain gear like enhanced vision, comsystem, voicescrambler and tracking jammer.

And the colors are just an example.

though this one may be useful for Changed

[arch111]

my remake of your art. remade to Safo cyborg NPC (very unfinished and in bad quality)

good job!

You are getting much nearer my vision then I was able to do myself.

[unknow99]

More life & immersion in Warframe =

 

Edited August 19, 2014 by unknow99

[HappyApathy]

Art/Summary version of this concept is up, go check it out at Red Veil Rising in the fan art section for those of you who don't want to read the whole concept.

[arch111]

I have begun to create an Iotian unit. Since it will differ from the others in terms of military high grade gear, I really would like help on this one. Perhaps even start a separate thread.

I would love some initial thoughts on them, since they leave alot of room for creative thinking.

This is my first draft with two helmets, one with visor and tubes, the other more how I see them in battle; a smooth helmet and perhaps one lone lense somewhere.

[HappyApathy]

I would like to mention that I am seriously considering shifting the colony to Callisto, not because of Io's brutal gravitational tides, or non-stop volcanic activity, that I can live with, the biggest problem I've realized is that Io is not much bigger then Earth's moon which really throws a wrench in the idea of large colonial settlements or an epic planet wide battle, I really don't want to make the change but I might have to do it because of the size factor more then anything.

 

As for your model, I actually quite like it, make sure it has a bit of that 'Corpus' feel to it as their technology is meant to be similar.

 

Also, I'm never quite sure if the models you are showing me are finished products or WIP, I would like to add them to the OP sometime so please tell me when you have finished models that I can add.

Edited August 20, 2014 by HappyApathy

[arch111]

Well thats good points.

As for models, I work in iterations usually so what you see first is a wip, then a refinement and then a posed more detailed version.

Its easier to model by reference art, but I will let you know when I have something more finished :)

[AlphaHorseman]

@HappyApathy

 

I'm gonna do a rework and fleshing out of Chancellor Elys Rose for the Colony of Io (or Callisto as you are still pondering), as their Chancellor, and maybe NPC's like some of the Council of Io members. The Council would consist of members of Io that the people have voted into office to represent different groups/areas of that moon. Of course I can't make an entire Council that large, but I can give a few NPC's to help flesh out the backstory.

 

As you stated that the Iotians fought the Grineer and were victorious a generation ago, I was thinking of making Elys Rose the descendant of the Iotian that led the moon to victory against the Grineer. It would help add connectivity to the story, and some legend that Elys would have to live up to, as the people look to her for guidance in these troubling times, just as they did her Father during the Old Rebellion.

 

Sound like something you would add to the thread? Or would you like me to shift things or change things? I'm all for whatever changes you might want, and since the Ghosts were getting some love, I thought I'd start trying to flesh out the backstory of one of the other factions.

[AlphaHorseman]

Oh the potential of this thread Happy, i cannot stress how much i want this!

 

Oh, and message me if you're cool with the Chancellor rework, or have something else in mind.

Edited August 20, 2014 by AlphaHorseman

[emaralez87]

good job!

You are getting much nearer my vision then I was able to do myself.

 ^__^ I'll try to make it good :)

Edited August 21, 2014 by emaralez87

[HappyApathy]

@HappyApathy

 

I'm gonna do a rework and fleshing out of Chancellor Elys Rose for the Colony of Io (or Callisto as you are still pondering), as their Chancellor, and maybe NPC's like some of the Council of Io members. The Council would consist of members of Io that the people have voted into office to represent different groups/areas of that moon. Of course I can't make an entire Council that large, but I can give a few NPC's to help flesh out the backstory.

 

As you stated that the Iotians fought the Grineer and were victorious a generation ago, I was thinking of making Elys Rose the descendant of the Iotian that led the moon to victory against the Grineer. It would help add connectivity to the story, and some legend that Elys would have to live up to, as the people look to her for guidance in these troubling times, just as they did her Father during the Old Rebellion.

 

Sound like something you would add to the thread? Or would you like me to shift things or change things? I'm all for whatever changes you might want, and since the Ghosts were getting some love, I thought I'd start trying to flesh out the backstory of one of the other factions.

 

Sounds good to me, the way I imagine meeting her is while she is touring devastated areas of the moon that have recently been attacked (I'm still working on how the cycle of invasions/peace would work on Io/Callisto right now), I'd imagine her handing you more humanitarian missions like protecting/escorting civilians, or rescuing captured VIPs, maybe even off world tasks to build relations with other anti-Grineer groups (notably the Ghosts, I actually thought it would be an interesting dynamic to occasionally see Ghosts using Iotian/Callistean made weapons, which would indicate they are been supplied arms by Io/Callisto).

[AlphaHorseman]

Sounds good to me, the way I imagine meeting her is while she is touring devastated areas of the moon that have recently been attacked (I'm still working on how the cycle of invasions/peace would work on Io/Callisto right now), I'd imagine her handing you more humanitarian missions like protecting/escorting civilians, or rescuing captured VIPs, maybe even off world tasks to build relations with other anti-Grineer groups (notably the Ghosts, I actually thought it would be an interesting dynamic to occasionally see Ghosts using Iotian/Callistean made weapons, which would indicate they are been supplied arms by Io/Callisto).

Thanks for giving me the go-ahead, I'll write something up and either message you or post it on this thread.

[HappyApathy]

50 up-votes in under a month, that's REALLY good for a large scale concept around here

 

high-five to everyone involved

[emaralez87]

the Gray Ones quotes added

 

“You are dice with death, put at the risk lives of your kin, health of your friends and to kill your ex fellow humans for… what?!” 

- Cpt Vor whyle inquisition of the Gray Ones hostage.

 

“We have only one condition: we will never help to seize power to those, who have not enough words to argue their position - there is no place in politics for such persons. We are just the support.”

- The Main Rule of the Gray Ones.

 

“Where were you when […] ? But now you are heading against […] when [...] !”

- quote from the “Book of propaganda”.

 

“Are you ready? Huh. No one can be ready for this! Everyone starts unready.”

- The Gray Ones member talking to the rookie.

 

“Person with a weapon is a thug, except the case when government give him this weapon and delegate to use it in concrete situations.”

“We were waiting for orders were signed while our comrades, wives and children were killed. Our commanders renounced from the actions of those, who obeyed unsigned orders, and gave them for the mercy of the crowd, the extremists and the tribunal.”

- conversation of the Gray Ones’ medic about times of Vay Hek’s usurpation of the Ceres.

 

“No one innocent.”

“The main thing to understand in time where extremism ends and ****ing mess begins.”

“I may not just went out and cry out loud what I need volunteers.  Informators are everywhere. “

“Who have money for a war? - criminal leaders, corrupted politicians and industrial magnates, so we are always ask, who benefits from it.”

“Transport, communications support, weapon. This costs a lot of credits. “

“War is expensive thing - only leaders of the Board and Queens can chip in war. Even regular boardsmen  or Grineer general can chip only in little shooting to the colonists.  We can not anything. There are two ways to gain money - fundraising and crime. We are using both.”

- common phrases while taking a quest from Gray Ones’ NPCs.