HermlT Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 (edited) I CAN POST NORMALLY AGAIN!! Goddamn, it's almost been a month since I updated. Well wait no more, Tenno, Chapter 30 is out on Post #20! Who the hell really is Sebastian? Read on to find out? And also please critique this, I feel like my writing has been slacking with the advent of school and such. it seems we have uncle booben in here... i wonder when will he get some grenades. morgan is kinda creepy though. Very nice chapter overall but there is a typo where you wrote err instead of error if you want to fix. Edited September 26, 2015 by HermlT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted September 25, 2015 Author Share Posted September 25, 2015 it seems we have uncle booben in here... i wonder when will he get some grenades. morgan is kinda creepy though. Very nice chapter overall but there is a typo where you wrote err instead of error if you want to fix. Oh I meant to put err, it's a word! For example: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frostycmc Posted September 26, 2015 Share Posted September 26, 2015 Nice job on the latest chapter. Morgan is quickly becoming my favorite character. He and I share so many traits it's almost uncanny. Like him, I have a bit of trouble empathizing with people, and I often come across as creepy or emotionless when really I just don't see the point in getting worked up about bad stuff when most of it either isn't going to matter in a week, or can't be avoided. I still can't understand how romantic drama can turn otherwise sane people into lunatics... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted September 26, 2015 Share Posted September 26, 2015 Poor nekky, never catching a break..... dat shipping doe ROSING pls Hngg That was a great chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted September 26, 2015 Share Posted September 26, 2015 That confrontation with Trinity about her powers was very good... Even if it was a bit fast, it was a great exploration of her character, and I feel like I personally can strongly relate to her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted September 26, 2015 Author Share Posted September 26, 2015 That confrontation with Trinity about her powers was very good... Even if it was a bit fast, it was a great exploration of her character, and I feel like I personally can strongly relate to her. Ah, it was a bit too fast? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brokenrune Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 can we have moar plz? o.o its good >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 can we have moar plz? o.o its good >.> of course! in another month jk let's see if I can make next week *crosses fingers* *fingers break* nvm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Fast as in, story pacing. Seemed like they went from discovering the catch to Trinity's powers, to confronting and resolving her emotional issues, very quickly. There could have been more suspense if it took longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted October 6, 2015 Author Share Posted October 6, 2015 Coming in late af is Chapter 31 on Post #20! How the hell does someone as cute and sweet as Kat get chosen by the Void? Was it a mistake and she's about to be written off? Read on to find out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lankander Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 (edited) Coming in late af is Chapter 31 on Post #20! How the hell does someone as cute and sweet as Kat get chosen by the Void? Was it a mistake and she's about to be written off? Read on to find out! Funny, i was just thinking on posting here asking about the next chapter, your timing is impecable as always, Tenno. Edit: HYPE HYPE HYPE HYPE HYPE HYPE Edited October 6, 2015 by Lankander Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted October 6, 2015 Author Share Posted October 6, 2015 Crap, I did not change the title. That's been fixed.Carry on as usual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 I feel like chaining you in my basement to make you finish the story so I can devour it at once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted October 6, 2015 Author Share Posted October 6, 2015 I feel like chaining you in my basement to make you finish the story so I can devour it at once. if you can do all of my studies and find me a decent summer internship while I do then it's a deal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 if you can do all of my studies and find me a decent summer internship while I do then it's a deal I'll get you a girlfriend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted October 6, 2015 Author Share Posted October 6, 2015 I'll get you a girlfriend At this point in my life the internship has priority. what kind of girlfriend we talking tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 At this point in my life the internship has priority. what kind of girlfriend we talking tho the hot kind I mean, it will dpeend on the quality of your work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted October 6, 2015 Author Share Posted October 6, 2015 the hot kind I mean, it will dpeend on the quality of your work Honestly, I really wonder when it will finish. I know the ending, but what happens in between then and now is always growing in my head, new characters to explore with every warframe, every new feature, every tidbit of lore. Who knows what the full journey will be when we look back at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frostycmc Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 And so the first Primes are born. Makes me want to put on my Excalibur Prime and go hunt some Grineer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted October 6, 2015 Author Share Posted October 6, 2015 And so the first Primes are born. Makes me want to put on my Excalibur Prime and go hunt some Grineer.You're making me jelly. You better have some bread and peanut butter.It was pretty interesting having to describe the primes; I wanted it so that someone who's never seen them before could visualize it. How did I do on that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frostycmc Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Quite well, I'd say. Could picture it all in my head clearly. Loving every update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gintoki-Zero Posted October 6, 2015 Share Posted October 6, 2015 Did you just take sebastian from Black Butler and make him Limbo because he's a butler? 0_o ^+1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vatterix Posted October 12, 2015 Share Posted October 12, 2015 (edited) So I read the first 6 chapters when I first started playing Warframe and I completely forgot about it. Now I'm only about 30 chapters behind! hahaI copy/pasta'd it into Word so I could read it easier and you are at about 270 pages without fancy formatting :P Edited October 13, 2015 by vatterix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted October 12, 2015 Author Share Posted October 12, 2015 So I read the first 6 chapters when I first started playing Warframe and I completely forgot about it. Not I'm only about 30 chapters behind! haha I copy/pasta'd it into Word so I could read it easier and you are at about 270 pages without fancy formatting :P Excuse me I'm what? wow. Uh, and now for the disappointing news... Ch. 32 will be coming out next week. By now, this project is a slave to my other obligations so expect bimonthly chapters to be more of a thing. Thanks for you understanding. Evanescent, I am prepared to defend myself if you come after me for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frostycmc Posted October 12, 2015 Share Posted October 12, 2015 Don't worry about it too much. We understand that real life's gotta come first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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