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Hey, alright here I am! With express permission from SpaceHelicopters themselves, I'm gonna post up one of those OC sheets and then edit it as it gets viciously critiqued. Granted, I won't mind, I'd like it to be as good as possible before heading on in. So for now I'll stop and actually post it up.

 

Name: Aegia

 

Frame: Rhino

 

Syndicate: Unaffiliated

 

Personality: Aegia is a fun loving Tenno, with a great sense of humor and a deep enjoyment for jokes of any kind. As such, she always looks forward to having a laugh with her friends or squadmates. She keeps this happy-go-lucky personality during missions as well, no matter how serious they may be (to an extent, of course). She cares very deeply for her fellow Tenno, and does her best to protect them from harm as best as she can. The thought of a friend of hers coming to harm isn't one she likes to entertain, so she's usually the first in to a swarm of foes, and won't leave until she's certain that they've been sufficiently neutralized. However, the smiling, laughing exterior is only hiding a very lonely Rhino. It's that interior she keeps tucked away that makes her hesitant to trust and open up to others. But it's rare that anyone would ever know of this side of her, the most they ever see is a cheerful Rhino, laughing merrily along with her fellow Tenno as they balance the galaxy, or whatever it is they're doing at that moment.

 

Appearance: Aegia is 5'9" tall, standing at about 6'1" when in her frame. She looks to be around her mid-20s, sporting shoulder length dark auburn hair and amber colored eyes. Her Warframe itself is a navy blue color primarily, using gray accents for secondary and tertiary colors.

 

Equipment: (I thought I'd add this in just to give an idea of what she brings along to a scuffle) Aegia's primary weapon is a Tigris shotgun with a modified barrel, making it shorter and slightly stubbier to increase spread and power. Her secondary weapon, a Marelok that matches her frame colors, is for engaging targets at a longer range in which her Tigris would be nigh useless. And her melee weapon is quite possibly her other pride and joy, barring the Tigris. It is a Jat Kittag, modified with enhanced jets and a heavier head for even more crushing and hammer-like joy.

 

Brief History: Following Aegia's awakening, she was a very scared and actually somewhat timid Tenno, not at all befitting the Rhino frame that she inhabited. On missions, she was usually the quietest member of the squad, always observing and supporting her fellow Tenno as best she could. It was only as she began the 3 year process of the construction of her dojo did she begin to mold herself into the happy-go-lucky Rhino that exists today. Why would creating a dojo take 3 years, one may ask? Well, perhaps if it was only her doing the constructing, which it was. Not a soul inhabited the cold halls of the deep-space structure, save for her. She slipped into a relative period of obscurity, where nary a sentinel would even spend the time of day with the boisterous Tenno, leaving her in a 3 year period of loneliness, save for her rarer interactions on missions. However, there was a single Tenno that did manage to get through to the gal, and right when she was beginning to open up, they disappeared without a trace, leaving her alone once more in the grand empty halls. After a slight breakdown, she underwent a one year cryosleep in the dojo, giving her time to think and dream. And that brings us to now, Aegia, post-cryosleep.

 

Relationships: None, yet. Unless anyone else has something to say about it.

 

Aaaaand I think that's about it, at least what I can think of. If anything needs to be added, removed, clarified, let me know and I will ignore it edit it posthaste!

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I read through your sheet and I just want to say one thing.

Your character and mine are going to get along great.

I figured as much, I'm reading through the whole IC thread to get a feel for what's happened so far, so hopefully I'll be caught up by the time I get in. If I get in

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Hey, alright here I am! With express permission from SpaceHelicopters themselves, I'm gonna post up one of those OC sheets and then edit it as it gets viciously critiqued. Granted, I won't mind, I'd like it to be as good as possible before heading on in. So for now I'll stop and actually post it up.

Name: Aegia

Frame: Rhino

Syndicate: Unaffiliated

Personality: Aegia is a fun loving Tenno, with a great sense of humor and a deep enjoyment for jokes of any kind. As such, she always looks forward to having a laugh with her friends or squadmates. She keeps this happy-go-lucky personality during missions as well, no matter how serious they may be (to an extent, of course). She cares very deeply for her fellow Tenno, and does her best to protect them from harm as best as she can. The thought of a friend of hers coming to harm isn't one she likes to entertain, so she's usually the first in to a swarm of foes, and won't leave until she's certain that they've been sufficiently neutralized. However, the smiling, laughing exterior is only hiding a very lonely Rhino. It's that interior she keeps tucked away that makes her hesitant to trust and open up to others. But it's rare that anyone would ever know of this side of her, the most they ever see is a cheerful Rhino, laughing merrily along with her fellow Tenno as they balance the galaxy, or whatever it is they're doing at that moment.

Appearance: Aegia is 5'9" tall, standing at about 6'1" when in her frame. She looks to be around her mid-20s, sporting shoulder length dark auburn hair and amber colored eyes. Her Warframe itself is a navy blue color primarily, using gray accents for secondary and tertiary colors.

Equipment: (I thought I'd add this in just to give an idea of what she brings along to a scuffle) Aegia's primary weapon is a Tigris shotgun with a modified barrel, making it shorter and slightly stubbier to increase spread and power. Her secondary weapon, a Marelok that matches her frame colors, is for engaging targets at a longer range in which her Tigris would be nigh useless. And her melee weapon is quite possibly her other pride and joy, barring the Tigris. It is a Jat Kittag, modified with enhanced jets and a heavier head for even more crushing and hammer-like joy.

Brief History: Following Aegia's awakening, she was a very scared and actually somewhat timid Tenno, not at all befitting the Rhino frame that she inhabited. On missions, she was usually the quietest member of the squad, always observing and supporting her fellow Tenno as best she could. It was only as she began the 3 year process of the construction of her dojo did she begin to mold herself into the happy-go-lucky Rhino that exists today. Why would creating a dojo take 3 years, one may ask? Well, perhaps if it was only her doing the constructing, which it was. Not a soul inhabited the cold halls of the deep-space structure, save for her. She slipped into a relative period of obscurity, where nary a sentinel would even spend the time of day with the boisterous Tenno, leaving her in a 3 year period of loneliness, save for her rarer interactions on missions. However, there was a single Tenno that did manage to get through to the gal, and right when she was beginning to open up, they disappeared without a trace, leaving her alone once more in the grand empty halls. After a slight breakdown, she underwent a one year cryosleep in the dojo, giving her time to think and dream. And that brings us to now, Aegia, post-cryosleep.

Relationships: None, yet. Unless anyone else has something to say about it.

Aaaaand I think that's about it, at least what I can think of. If anythign needs to be added, removed, clarified, let me know and I will ignore it edit it posthaste!

Belrev and her are going to get along great :)

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Hm. Souna and Aegia.... I can hardly predict how that's gonna work out. But at least they probably won't hate each other from the first meeting. :> 

Who what now?

 

I'm only on page 24, gotta give me a bit to figure out everyone here!~

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Belrev and her are going to get along great :)

I read through your sheet and I just want to say one thing.

Your character and mine are going to get along great.

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Idk why I posted that...DON'T JUDGE ME!!!

Hey, alright here I am! With express permission from SpaceHelicopters themselves, I'm gonna post up one of those OC sheets and then edit it as it gets viciously critiqued. Granted, I won't mind, I'd like it to be as good as possible before heading on in. So for now I'll stop and actually post it up.

Name: Aegia

Frame: Rhino

Syndicate: Unaffiliated

Personality: Aegia is a fun loving Tenno, with a great sense of humor and a deep enjoyment for jokes of any kind. As such, she always looks forward to having a laugh with her friends or squadmates. She keeps this happy-go-lucky personality during missions as well, no matter how serious they may be (to an extent, of course). She cares very deeply for her fellow Tenno, and does her best to protect them from harm as best as she can. The thought of a friend of hers coming to harm isn't one she likes to entertain, so she's usually the first in to a swarm of foes, and won't leave until she's certain that they've been sufficiently neutralized. However, the smiling, laughing exterior is only hiding a very lonely Rhino. It's that interior she keeps tucked away that makes her hesitant to trust and open up to others. But it's rare that anyone would ever know of this side of her, the most they ever see is a cheerful Rhino, laughing merrily along with her fellow Tenno as they balance the galaxy, or whatever it is they're doing at that moment.

Appearance: Aegia is 5'9" tall, standing at about 6'1" when in her frame. She looks to be around her mid-20s, sporting shoulder length dark auburn hair and amber colored eyes. Her Warframe itself is a navy blue color primarily, using gray accents for secondary and tertiary colors.

Equipment: (I thought I'd add this in just to give an idea of what she brings along to a scuffle) Aegia's primary weapon is a Tigris shotgun with a modified barrel, making it shorter and slightly stubbier to increase spread and power. Her secondary weapon, a Marelok that matches her frame colors, is for engaging targets at a longer range in which her Tigris would be nigh useless. And her melee weapon is quite possibly her other pride and joy, barring the Tigris. It is a Jat Kittag, modified with enhanced jets and a heavier head for even more crushing and hammer-like joy.

Brief History: Following Aegia's awakening, she was a very scared and actually somewhat timid Tenno, not at all befitting the Rhino frame that she inhabited. On missions, she was usually the quietest member of the squad, always observing and supporting her fellow Tenno as best she could. It was only as she began the 3 year process of the construction of her dojo did she begin to mold herself into the happy-go-lucky Rhino that exists today. Why would creating a dojo take 3 years, one may ask? Well, perhaps if it was only her doing the constructing, which it was. Not a soul inhabited the cold halls of the deep-space structure, save for her. She slipped into a relative period of obscurity, where nary a sentinel would even spend the time of day with the boisterous Tenno, leaving her in a 3 year period of loneliness, save for her rarer interactions on missions. However, there was a single Tenno that did manage to get through to the gal, and right when she was beginning to open up, they disappeared without a trace, leaving her alone once more in the grand empty halls. After a slight breakdown, she underwent a one year cryosleep in the dojo, giving her time to think and dream. And that brings us to now, Aegia, post-cryosleep.

Relationships: None, yet. Unless anyone else has something to say about it.

Aaaaand I think that's about it, at least what I can think of. If anythign needs to be added, removed, clarified, let me know and I will ignore it edit it posthaste!

To me, there's nothing to change besides the...

anythign...

:P

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