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All is Silent and Calm

Our Emperors and Long Gone

Hushed and Empty is the Womb of The Sky

They are coming back.

 

 

Lately, I started to like Haiku. So I done a warframe related one, and it was good. I like to see yours :D

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I suppose I should actually post a haiku here. 

 

 

I went to Kansas

They sing of fried chicken wings

There are carrots here

Actual attempt at a haiku:

 

With cold feet they rise

A dark wind flows through the Void

The Sentients come

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All is Silent and Calm

Our Emperors and Long Gone

Hushed and Empty is the Womb of The Sky

They are coming back.

 

 

Lately, I started to like Haiku. So I done a warframe related one, and it was good. I like to see yours :D

 

 

1. Haiku=3 lines, not 4

2. The syllables are 5/7/5, you started with 6 and your 3rd line has 10 syllables, what are you doing?

 

 

5/7/5, not 6/7/10/5.

You started to like Haiku but clearly didn't fully learn Haiku...

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1. Haiku=3 lines, not 4

2. The syllables are 5/7/5, you started with 6 and your 3rd line has 10 syllables, what are you doing?

 

 

5/7/5, not 6/7/10/5.

You started to like Haiku but clearly didn't fully learn Haiku...

I just wanted to clear this up. I didn't copy from anyone. I was practising on word

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