KseniGirl Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 Because the tenno look a like little kids, I took mine and turned her into a beautiful adult! ^^ Hope you all like it! :D Leave a comment and tell me what you think! ^^ Love you all~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dacond3 Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 (edited) "dey r all lolis" Yay moar arts! I like it it looks really nice. I like how the blue fades to purple. Edited December 13, 2015 by dacond3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdunSaveMe Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 It's not bad. If you actually want feedback; The placement of the eyes is way off (too far to the side, not evenly placed alongside the nose), and the head is far too small for the body. Structure of the face is also somewhat questionable. It doesn't hurt to use references, just to compare your own basic proportions to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dacond3 Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 It's not bad. If you actually want feedback; The placement of the eyes is way off (too far to the side, not evenly placed alongside the nose), and the head is far too small for the body. Structure of the face is also somewhat questionable. It doesn't hurt to use references, just to compare your own basic proportions to. Agreed..Though she has improved alot since her first few ones shes been posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdunSaveMe Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 Agreed..Though she has improved alot since her first few ones shes been posting Well, nothing beats practice. And I say that as a colossal hypocrite, because I never practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KseniGirl Posted December 13, 2015 Author Share Posted December 13, 2015 It's not bad. If you actually want feedback; The placement of the eyes is way off (too far to the side, not evenly placed alongside the nose), and the head is far too small for the body. Structure of the face is also somewhat questionable. It doesn't hurt to use references, just to compare your own basic proportions to. Yeah I'm not that good with face structure but I used my tenno for help and this is what I got xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
texrei Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 Looks like it was drawn by a little kid (except boobs) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vaxillian Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 I love this. But coming from someone who is learning to draw, I have some criticisms to share: Your nose is a little off because you drew the face looking left but the nose facing forward. You made the left eye bigger than the right when the left should be smaller and drawn in a way that shows that she's looking to the left. Anatomy and reality are fine and good the them cushions is a bit big. I do like how you took into account the neck and armor leaning to the left, it gives a lot more emphasis in the head turning. But all in all just some minor details that shows the head is looking to the left. still love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zathurain Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 (edited) It's not bad. If you actually want feedback; The placement of the eyes is way off (too far to the side, not evenly placed alongside the nose), and the head is far too small for the body. Structure of the face is also somewhat questionable. It doesn't hurt to use references, just to compare your own basic proportions to. I love this. But coming from someone who is learning to draw, I have some criticisms to share: Your nose is a little off because you drew the face looking left but the nose facing forward. You made the left eye bigger than the right when the left should be smaller and drawn in a way that shows that she's looking to the left. Anatomy and reality are fine and good the them cushions is a bit big. I do like how you took into account the neck and armor leaning to the left, it gives a lot more emphasis in the head turning. But all in all just some minor details that shows the head is looking to the left. still love it. As others have already offered their constructive criticism, and I'm still an artist-in-training myself, I'll simply suggest a way to learn how to improve your work; There is an artist named Markcrilley on youtube who makes plenty of videos on how to draw different characters, and how to improve your work so that it's more anatomically correct. Edited December 13, 2015 by Phookamon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bibliothekar Posted December 14, 2015 Share Posted December 14, 2015 Overall, looks pretty good. I decided against implants, because both current options look rather weird to me, but I guess there'll be more in the future. Maybe even syndicate-unique suits (how cool would that be?) and things like that. :) Adding to what has been already said: Her shoulders look a bit ... blocky. And the (her) right one looks like you caught her mid-shrug - but it's only the shoulder, nothing else suggests this. Looking over your warframe outfits again, it's something I notice on many of them - Excalibur and Banshee being the exception, their shoulders look about right, being slightly downwards. If you can get your hands on a good anatomic atlas for cheap, go for it. Can't hurt to know what the muscles and everything else underneath look to improve your skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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