Maxyall Posted December 27, 2015 Share Posted December 27, 2015 (edited) [Contain Second Dream spoiler!] [May contain painfully bad English, Proof reader needed in the future] [1] Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler [2] Spoiler Nothing here yet "The Lotus seduced the Tenno. Led them on a complacent path like oxen." First bond severed. Story of a rogue Tenno on a quest for truths. COMPLETE ISSUE 1 PDF DOWNLOAD http://www.mediafire.com/download/o97c2bqfb2bz8xv/Warframe_Severed_01.pdf Art Assets: www.textures.com Councilor Ven'kra Klim by BlazingCobalt <3 Edited August 13, 2016 by Maxyall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CephalonSeraph Posted December 27, 2015 Share Posted December 27, 2015 MOAR... MOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRR!! Sorry. I love comics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)IIIDevoidIII Posted December 27, 2015 Share Posted December 27, 2015 Interesting... I'd be happy to proofread the English for you. There aren't really any issues I can see with this page except for punctuation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ibro156 Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 I'll be keeping on eye on this comic series :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaxusBlade Posted December 29, 2015 Share Posted December 29, 2015 Nice Done! this is a really cool concept of Comic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)EternalDrk Mako Posted December 29, 2015 Share Posted December 29, 2015 stalker origins ? LOL nice work though :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Relickable Posted December 29, 2015 Share Posted December 29, 2015 Can't wait to see more of this ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DofD Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 Needs more Clem ;) Looking forward to more of this :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenzinNinJa Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 Interresting. I'll just keep an eye on this :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deshiel Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 I find this too funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxyall Posted December 30, 2015 Author Share Posted December 30, 2015 stalker origins ? LOL nice work though :) No this is one ordinary tenno. I don't think stalker used to be with lotus, but I could be wrong. :/ Needs more Clem ;) Looking forward to more of this :D Yaaaaass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxyall Posted December 30, 2015 Author Share Posted December 30, 2015 (edited) So I decided to work via tablet, so theres alot of things to revamp. This is a WIP of a page Im working on. So noir. If anyone interested to help me color these, pls contact me. <3 Edited December 31, 2015 by Maxyall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DofD Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 Why colour? Maybe make it sin city style Only some bright colours like yellow blue and red? Makes it more gritty and dystopia Would fit this perfectly in my mind :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxyall Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 (edited) HAPPY NEW YEAR! Page 1 Done! It can be found on original postNow I need you guys opinion on this. What will be her loadout for this mission? (Primary-secondary-melee) ^WIP (Draft) I use the name "justice" because this comic will focus on the syndicates. In the future there will be Truth, Sequence, blight and so on. <3 Edited January 5, 2016 by Maxyall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DofD Posted January 4, 2016 Share Posted January 4, 2016 Fang Prime Lex / AkLex Snipetron Vandal. I mean it would be pretty intresting to see her wielding a weapon of lotus as she might still have a connection and hope... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ibro156 Posted January 4, 2016 Share Posted January 4, 2016 Looks great. I think melee weapon should be HATE, but I guess that gives it away. Maybe a skana? :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMadMoon Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 The first concept page looks like killy from BLAME! Great taste. I would like to read a darker sci-fi story in the universe of warframe. Keep it up! The first concept page looks like killy from BLAME! Great taste. I would like to read a darker sci-fi story in the universe of warframe. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxyall Posted January 5, 2016 Author Share Posted January 5, 2016 (edited) Another page done! Fang Prime Lex / AkLex Snipetron Vandal. I mean it would be pretty intresting to see her wielding a weapon of lotus as she might still have a connection and hope... Looks great. I think melee weapon should be HATE, but I guess that gives it away. Maybe a skana? :/ I went with Snipetron vandal and Aklex, for melee I went with traditional skana (not visible yet tho, there's a lot that I'd like to fix) The first concept page looks like killy from BLAME! You caught me! My source of inspiration and #1 favorite manga Edited January 5, 2016 by Maxyall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ibro156 Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 Another page done! I went with Snipetron vandal and Aklex, for melee I went with traditional skana (not visible yet tho, there's a lot that I'd like to fix) You caught me! My source of inspiration and #1 favorite manga That is good cominc. Better then most mangas I've read xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxyall Posted January 6, 2016 Author Share Posted January 6, 2016 (edited) So sleepy right now. will finish it tmr. Thank you all for kind feedbacks! I'll draw in lotus's outline later. Next page will contain action! finally! huehuehuehueheuheuheuehueheuheuehueheuheueheuheu ^Masterpiece by my sis Edited January 6, 2016 by Maxyall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuhra Posted January 6, 2016 Share Posted January 6, 2016 ZOMG another fan of Tsutomu Nihei's BLAME! *spazzes* This is amazing and so much details put on each panels and pages *A* can't wait for more *stalks this page* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxyall Posted January 8, 2016 Author Share Posted January 8, 2016 (edited) Another page finished (see original post). The pace has been painfully slow so far, and the last panel needs alot of clean up and detailing. Up next, I promised you some actions! [squad Loadout Ember: Snipetron Vandal-Aklex-Skana Rhino: Tigris-vasto-Magistar Ash: Marelok Magnus-Dual Kamas PS: THE STEEL MERIDIAN LEADER, WHAT IS HER NAME???? Edited February 1, 2016 by Maxyall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mac10smg--Toa_of_Green Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 (edited) I was trying to remember what the title reminded me of. Then I remembered. Edited January 9, 2016 by mac10smg-ToaOfGreen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DofD Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 Just noticed Maybe pull the nose of lotus a bit down Lokks like she pinned it up ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)IIIDevoidIII Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 Been a couple of weeks, and wow, what an amazing evolution this has undertaken! Butter me intrigued- Cephalon Suda requires more... for her knowledge data banks. >.> Great artwork, and so far an amazing atmosphere you pulled off in only three pages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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