blazingcobalt Posted September 5, 2016 Share Posted September 5, 2016 (edited) http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=758376485&searchtext= --- I finally sat down and worked on a syandana all by myself! I'm super proud of myself for getting this done since learning 3D has been a hurdle for me. (Malayu taught me a good chunk of it from when we collabed so I gotta say shout out to them.) I always wanted a scarf that was just long, split in two, and was made of cloth. Something like this seemed pretty simple to do from a beginners standpoint so I gave it a shot. So yeah any kinda feedback would be awesome! I know this thing probably has all sorts of flaws in it so I'm all ears. Edited September 5, 2016 by blazingcobalt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)chillichillman Posted September 5, 2016 Share Posted September 5, 2016 It is extraordinarily 2D. Other than that, it's pretty good. Maybe give the connectors some details, but still keep it with that simple theme you got. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazingcobalt Posted September 5, 2016 Author Share Posted September 5, 2016 17 minutes ago, (XB1)chillichillman said: It is extraordinarily 2D. Yeah thats one of the things I was having a tough time with. I wanna keep a thin piece of a cloth but if I go too thin then it gets like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azrael Posted September 5, 2016 Share Posted September 5, 2016 You know, this may be crazy, but the art style in the pic you actually posted here reminds me a lot of transistor. Just the border, and the colors, and lighting. Anybody see what I'm talking about? Anyway, it looks interesting. I like the sort of "ragged" look it has. It feels unfinished, especially where it connects to the warframe. It looks too simplistic there, without much detail. But that's probably because it IS, in fact, unfinished. :) Keep working on it OP, I think it has real potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazingcobalt Posted September 5, 2016 Author Share Posted September 5, 2016 19 minutes ago, Lord_Azrael said: You know, this may be crazy, but the art style in the pic you actually posted here reminds me a lot of transistor. Just the border, and the colors, and lighting. Anybody see what I'm talking about? Anyway, it looks interesting. I like the sort of "ragged" look it has. It feels unfinished, especially where it connects to the warframe. It looks too simplistic there, without much detail. But that's probably because it IS, in fact, unfinished. :) Keep working on it OP, I think it has real potential. Transistor was a great game. I can see what you mean in the patterns! Hmm I can try to see what I can add to the connectors. My original idea was just a little thing so that way the focus is the scarf itself so I'm probably gonna keep it small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexmach1 Posted September 5, 2016 Share Posted September 5, 2016 1 hour ago, blazingcobalt said: Yeah thats one of the things I was having a tough time with. I wanna keep a thin piece of a cloth but if I go too thin then it gets like this. The method DE uses is to make the cloth's geometry uneven and rippled, so looking at it from the side wouldn't make it disappear. You could try doing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_malaya_ Posted September 5, 2016 Share Posted September 5, 2016 Love what you've done with the pattern work on the cloth, and I'm a sucker for dual attachment points. A nice touch that can be added to the cloth is by taking an image of frayed cloth like this, converting it into black and white and screening it over your current transparency texture around the holes and torn edges. Also some of thelines might be a bit too thin. The textures are going to be scaled down to half the resolution, so it might be good to compensate for that so details don't get lost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazingcobalt Posted September 5, 2016 Author Share Posted September 5, 2016 11 minutes ago, alexmach1 said: The method DE uses is to make the cloth's geometry uneven and rippled, so looking at it from the side wouldn't make it disappear. You could try doing that. Huh.. that makes sense. I'll get to work! 3 minutes ago, MaaYuu said: Love what you've done with the pattern work on the cloth, and I'm a sucker for dual attachment points. A nice touch that can be added to the cloth is by taking an image of frayed cloth like this, converting it into black and white and screening it over your current transparency texture around the holes and torn edges. Also some of thelines might be a bit too thin. The textures are going to be scaled down to half the resolution, so it might be good to compensate for that so details don't get lost Oh that's actually a really good point about the lines being too small. Thanks. c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazingcobalt Posted September 5, 2016 Author Share Posted September 5, 2016 Quick little update. I changed the geometry of the cloth and it worked wonders! Thanks Alex. c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Little-Cunny Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 Liking the look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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