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STRENGTH TO THE ENEMY Enemy additions/concepts, 100+'s of units, weapons; lore and pictures [NEW: Corpus Divided, large lore update + event, 13 NEW Corpus characters]

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Update:

The latest Corpus Reinforcement weapons have been fully statted out.

 

Housekeeping:

As of now, the Choose Your Enemy vote stands as follows:

ViSoRi: 8 VS Torment: 2

You've got 2-3 weeks to change that (or keep it that way).

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#StrengthToViSoRi

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A secret from before the Golden Gods have risen. They have watched, and now they are coming back.

Sounds intriguing, so I vote for the ViSoRi. Also nice concepts for Corpus and Grineer-Units, it´s enjoying to read.

 

Edit: I just realized, that I should have chosen the Torment as October (and therefore Halloween) is right around the corner. The Torment would probably fit better for the spookiest month of the year. Whatever, I´ll stick with my choice voting for ViSoRi.

 

(P.S. Sorry for my bad english, it´s not my native language)

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This is how enemies should feel

Corpus is greedy and selfish, make them beg for their lives and try to pick up other enemies loot away from you and have them only attack if there are allies nearby

Grineer are narrow and built as cannon fodder. They should go head first and more aggressive than any other enemies

Infested are unknown. They should be hiding only appearing to strike to have a sense of fear

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Housekeeping Update:

The Choose Your Enemy poll will continue until 7.10. after which any further votes will no longer count.

As of now, the Choose Your Enemy vote stands as follows:

ViSoRi: 8 VS Torment: 2

 

Beginning of the next Corpus event will commence soon (maybe even today).

The upcoming events will rewrite the introduction of the amalgams and the new Jupiter tileset, as it no longer is logically connected to the character Alad V and the "Wolf of Saturn 6" subplot in my lore.

The event will take place exactly where the Jovian Concord would in the timeline (which means it actually happens before the events of the REGICIDE and close after the Chimera Prologue)

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Corpus Divided, Update 1:

In order to make sure everyone understands the next events, this post will reiterate on the lore changes I made that are very much relevant to the upcoming plots.

 

Alad V:

Official DE Canon: Alad V continues to be a Corpus affiliate and works together with Natah to produce Amalgams.

My Changes: Alad V cut himself away from the Corpus mainline and became a pariah, attempting to redeem himself by joining and helping many resistance movements (such as Perrin Sequence).

 

Osir Alid:

Official DE Canon: Doesn't exist.

My Changes: Replaces Alad V as the governor of the Jupiter following the events of Second Dream and Shadow Debt. Works together with Natah to produce Amalgams.

 

Wolf of Saturn Six plotline:

Official DE Canon: The Wolf was experimented on by Alad V and hybridized with Sentient tech, making him the breakthrough needed to create Amalgams (?).

My Changes: The Wolf has never interacted with neither Alad V nor Osir Alid. He is either dead, or leads the Wolf Pack, a renegade Grineer Pirate group (depends on player choice).

 

Jovian Concord:

Official DE Canon: The update is introduced via the Wolf of Saturn Six plotline.

My Changes: The update is introduced via the Corpus Divided plotline.

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Corpus Divided:

Introduction:

As Frohd Bek's fate is unknown, the Corpus society experiences a period of unrest. How could such an important and influential person suddenly dissappear?

Some people mourn, but some prepare for a Hostile Merger...

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*Gets back from working on own community update idea* Finally, a worthy adversary!!!!

Jokes aside this is actually really cool that someone had thus idea before me, even if mines a bit more canon compliant to say the least. That's not meant to be a discouragement our anything, I just think it'll give me but more of a challenge if I work with what I'm given. Plus it might help me get more traction since my goal is a more direct "lets fix this" where yours is, as you said yourself, Fanfic. 

Who knows maybe we could compare notes or ideas, I'm actually working on my Harrow rework right now. And if its alright, maybe you could give me a few tips since, I'm gonna be honest, I have no idea what I'm doing on the forum.

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Corpus Divided, Update 2:

As you've noticed, I've made quite a few original characters for the Grineer, and now also for the Corpus. Still, the Grinee, hold an advantage in this regard, so let's equalize the odds a little.

Here's the first post containing Corpus characters, as well as my reimagining of their society. I highly recommend to read it first in case you haven't already.

Next up will be a double event with some inter-Corpus rivalries already hinted at in the "Oldman" Comic.

With that out of the way, let's get to them characters:

Sinh Opek:

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Sinh Opek is a secretive Boardmember, mostly known for his support for the Arca Productions start-up. His other dealings include heavy investments into Robotic industry, and it is rumoured he is attempting to reverse-engineer Grineer to make a new race of slave labour for the Corpus. He's famous on the Media-Sphere for having very bad relations with Tola Van.

Gev Skoll:

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Gev Skoll has more criminal charges to his name than he has allies, even though his extremist group named trhe Black Seed grows every day. He has grown up on the streets of Theta-X4, a small Orbit-City around Venus, before the Temple of Profit cleansed it from Pirates and gangsters. Gev believes only strength matters in the world, and considers Corpus way weaker than it could be. The only way to make it achieve that perfect strength is to become it's supreme leader, and so that is Gev's ultimate goal.

Kyll Sisters:

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The Kyll Sisters are Media-Sphere celebrities, mostly famous for being famous, however their fortune is immesurable anyway. It is rumoured that the "sisters" are actually illegal clones, but there has never been any good evidence for that. Perhaps these rumours are spread by the Sisters themselves, to make them even more well-known, through the controversy?

Jek Not:

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Jek describes himself as a "small-time trader and supply mover", quite humble for the owner of one of the biggest transportation groups in the entire Corpus. His personal philosophy is that of being invisible, but effective. Nobody could really pinpoint where Jek lives, as he enjoys travelling around, his behaviour in a way mimicking what his company does. Perhaps you will spot him in a relay somewhere at one point?

Pyn Fel:

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Pyn Fel is often called the "Death Killer". Able to fix up many way-too-old Boardmembers and Richmen with his unique therapies, he is the person ot go to if you wish to live a veeeeeeeeeery long life. Just make sure your wallet is thick enough. But there is a darker side to him as well. Pyn is a genius inventor of poisons and toxins, his abilities resulted in the development of the Kaustix chemthrower, for example.

Bett Nassa:

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Also known as "Captain Hook" or the "Mother Pirate", Bett's pirate crews terrorize lonesome cargo transports in the hotly contested Europa-Jupiter-Saturn triangle. As a person she might seem amiable enough, at least until you anger her. While she's technically still Corpus, you won't see her calling herself that often, and the Corpus won't do it either.

Tyk Den:

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This old man was once a Lecturer, teaching young low-born Corpus how to be perfect Crewmen. This changed after one of his troublemaking students came back with a vengeance. That student was Nef Anyo, his life changed by an accident, after which he became the rich famous man he is now. Mirroring the brutal punishments of his Lecturer with greater fury, Nef broke Tyk's back, and made him a cripple. Now, Den is a trashman, having accepted humiliating augments that disallow him to live normally.

Frek Sha:

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Frek Sha is an up-and-coming entrepreneur with his start-up, the Kemika Corp. He focuses on chemical develpoments, with a touch of bio-chem weaponry, that would make him a war criminal in more civilized times. Oh, well, Grineer do it too.

Tkol Myk:

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Tkol Myk is veteran mercenary, having gained enough trust with the Board to essentially be able to organize a small army for whatever reason he wants. He has been involved with pretty much every single war operation in the nearest past, giving him great knowledge of the Grineer tactics. His success rate made him quite a popular person on the Media-Sphere too, and as he said himself, he "needs to decline a marriage proposal (or a dozen) everyday".

Jun Plo:

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Jun Plo is a Rail Agent of a very specific nature. He doesn't deal with cargo, he doesn't deal with transporting people. He's an assassin. Call him up[, if you want someone dead yesterday, he'll do it. On the illegal SubNet, Jun goes by the nickname of "Black_Death", and he's as good at killing as that ancient disease. Some will swear he isn't just a human.

Tret Xyk:

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Tret Xyk is a musician and an Investor. Having built an empire of his own on Media-Sphere, he has branched out into entrepreneurship, instantly becoming even more ridiculously rich. Many a Crewmen wear his clothes out of work, as his products are intended to appeal (and be actually affordable) to both low-born and the richmen. He's actually been called a heretic by the Temple of Profit because of this.

 

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"He's actually been called a Heretic by the Temple of Profit because of this". Lets be honest here, any Corpus company that works to support the lower castes in any way has probably been called heretical by the Nef Anyo Profit Farm Temple of Profit at some point or another. I'd be willing to bet that, by now, it's considered a rite of passage for new companies.

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On 2019-10-07 at 2:33 PM, HugintheCrow said:

The "Choose your Enemy" poll is now closed.

Final Score:

ViSoRi: 8 vs Torment: 2

ViSoRi WIN

ViSoRi Wins!

FATALITY!

 

Ahem… jokes aside, I will be looking forward to these new concepts. Keep up the great work. 👍

 

(P.S. Sorry for my bad english, it´s not my not native language)

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On 2019-10-07 at 9:33 AM, HugintheCrow said:

The "Choose your Enemy" poll is now closed.

Final Score:

ViSoRi: 8 vs Torment: 2

ViSoRi WIN

I guess I need to wait quite a bit to see some demons in warframe. 

 

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45 minutes ago, Kristallritter said:

Ahem… jokes aside, I will be looking forward to these new concepts. Keep up the great work.

Thanks, will do.

45 minutes ago, Kristallritter said:

Sorry for my bad english

Not seeing any bad english here, perhaps you need to believe in your language skills more?

 

21 minutes ago, keikogi said:

I guess I need to wait quite a bit to see some demons in warframe. 

It won't be that much time tbh...

It's gonna be: Finishing the Corpus Divided (hopefully this weekend)->ViSoRi stuff->[REDACTED] Update->Torment stuff,

with some weapons and units in the mix, cause I have a large backlog of those again, lol.

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3 hours ago, HugintheCrow said:

Not seeing any bad english here, perhaps you need to believe in your language skills more?

 

4 hours ago, Kristallritter said:

(P.S. Sorry for my bad english, it´s not my not native language)

Dood, I have seen American english speakers that didn't type in english nearly as well.  You, you're perfectly fine.

Just believe in yourself. Believe in all of us who believe in you!

3 hours ago, HugintheCrow said:

with some weapons and units in the mix, cause I have a large backlog of those again, lol.

Will there be any dual-tube shotguns? I feel lonely being the only dood on the forums that goes into such esoteric shotgun territory.

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22 minutes ago, (XB1)Fluffywolf36 said:

Will there be any dual-tube shotguns? I feel lonely being the only dood on the forums that goes into such esoteric shotgun territory.

Well, there will be a shotgun with an underbarrel shotgun attachment...

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42 minutes ago, (XB1)Fluffywolf36 said:

Dood, I have seen American english speakers that didn't type in english nearly as well.  You, you're perfectly fine.

Just believe in yourself. Believe in all of us who believe in you!

Have this pair of glasses. 

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4 hours ago, Kristallritter said:

ViSoRi Wins!

FATALITY!

 

Ahem… jokes aside, I will be looking forward to these new concepts. Keep up the great work. 👍

 

(P.S. Sorry for my bad english, it´s not my not native language)

I couldn’t spot any mistakes on your comment. No need for this lack of confidence. Also, I was pleasantly surprised with the lack of grammar nazis on this forum. People around here only care about clarity and formatting. I guess the overall kindness of the community is present on the foruns as well. I not a native speaker either.

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