Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 (edited) I'm fine with that. *leaves a note on the table saying "'Gone somewhere with Liz, I'll be back soon.' -Guinevere"* Lead the way. *helps her get onboard the saltimore**flies us to a small town on mars* *after parking, takes us to what looks like a simple shack Now, you might've thought my pies were good, but... This is the place my recipe barely manages to mimic the recipe from. *buys a pie from the lady at the register* *hands her a slice* Can we see the original rough copy then? ^-^ Al said it was okay. She did?Well alrighty, then. Edited August 31, 2015 by Elizabeth-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Utarious Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 (edited) She did? Well alrighty, then. | V Okay I sent it Liz, if you think it's okay feel free to send it to anyone who wants a copy. I don't have time right now, I'll be afk for about an hour I think. Be back in a bit. Seems like Alz is okay with it. Edited August 31, 2015 by Utarious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVerdict Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 1. *helps her get onboard the saltimore* *flies us to a small town on mars* *after parking, takes us to what looks like a simple shack Now, you might've thought my pies were good, but... This is the place my recipe barely manages to mimic the recipe from. *hands her a slice* 2. She did? Well alrighty, then. 1. *inspects the pie before taking a bite out of it*Mmmmmmmmmmm-mmmmm! 2. May I see it too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 1. *inspects the pie before taking a bite out of it* Mmmmmmmmmmm-mmmmm! 2. May I see it too? 1. *hands her the rest*You ought to take this home, too. Reckon belle'ld want some. But, good as this pie is, it ain't what I brought you here for. 2. Sure. | V Seems like Alz is okay with it. 2. Okay, then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVerdict Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 1. *hands her the rest* You ought to take this home, too. Reckon belle'ld want some. But, good as this pie is, it ain't what I brought you here for. 2. Sure. 1. Thanks. *puts the pie in one of her pouches*What did you bring me here for, then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Utarious Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 That was a really good read. Huh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)Legolegend144 Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 That was a really good read. Huh. It wasn't bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 (edited) 1. Thanks. *puts the pie in one of her pouches* What did you bring me here for, then? *looks at her watch*Hold on. *warps us to the top of the tallest mountain on mars* *the sky goes from red to bright yellow as liz talks* I dunno if you've picked up on this yet, but I want to be more than just friends with you. The first time i saw you ride past me, my heart skipped beats like a fiddler having a stroke, and I knew I had to have you.. (I tried to come up with the most American sounding simile I could for this, how'd I do?) Edited August 31, 2015 by Elizabeth-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 @alz: edits are done! ^_^ Oh, I like. Was it okay at least? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 Oh, I like. Was it okay at least? I thought it was great.That ending tho... *hnnnng* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 I thought it was great. That ending tho... *hnnnng* >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 (edited) >_>What's that expression for?I'm saying I liked the ending and that al just seemed so sad... Edited August 31, 2015 by Elizabeth-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 What's that expression for? I'm saying I liked the ending and that al just seemed so sad... It means your onto it! She is kinda.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 It means you're onto it! She is kinda.. Oh ok.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 Oh ok.... I've got the rough outlines of what I want to do with it, I just need to flesh it out some more.. I think it could be good though. Glad you liked it though! <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 Oh and I'm really grateful for the edits, I think you really improved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 Oh and I'm really grateful for the edits, I think you really improved it.Aw, thanks al. I've got the rough outlines of what I want to do with it, I just need to flesh it out some more.. I think it could be good though. Glad you liked it though! <3 It was a good read...Among other things... Hue. And I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the bracer, plot wise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 It was a good read... Among other things... Hue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVerdict Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 (edited) @Al That was a good read. *looks at her watch* Hold on. *warps us to the top of the tallest mountain on mars* *the sky goes from red to bright yellow as liz talks* I dunno if you've picked up on this yet, but I want to be more than just friends with you. The first time i saw you ride past me, my heart skipped beats like a fiddler having a stroke, and I knew I had to have you.. (I tried to come up with the most American sounding simile I could for this, how'd I do?) *She was so surprised, she almost gasped. Gunslict flustered, too flustered to feel much of anything at this point**She was at a total loss for words* (Not bad.) Edited August 31, 2015 by TheVerdict Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)Legolegend144 Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 Yeah, Alz. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 @Al That was a good read. Yeah, Alz. Nice work. Thanks, I have to study Liz's edits for future notes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Cynda_ Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 Hmm? What's going on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth-chan Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 @Al That was a good read. *She was so surprised, she almost gasped. Gunslict flustered, too flustered to feel much of anything at this point* *She was at total loss for words* (Not bad.) To put it simply, I love you, Guinevere. I know it's only been two days since we first got to know each other, but...Is there any way you feel the same way about me? (*bows*) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 Hmm? What's going on? I'm sexing Utrs on Steam again and everyone is watching. c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)Legolegend144 Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 (edited) Hmm? What's going on? Alza wrote a pretty good fanfic. I'm sexing Utrs on Steam again and everyone is watching. c: That too. Edited August 31, 2015 by (PS4)Legolegend144 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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