So Yeah, A Thing, Lyrics I Guess To What Will Be Tenno Song, Its Bluesy? Is That A Word. Idk

[StellaPotato]

Below is lyrics to song im gonna record and fine tune later on, just wanted to see what people think ive been writing for years and im working on an album but ive never done like song, for game, like this.

so im rather nervous about it. could use some feedback.

 

enjoy i guess- 

 

 

 

Started out on Lares,
and despite the odds, ended up way out here,

sechura sector, where many great battles happen here.
oh i wonder, how we made it this far to my dying day,

Me and my crew, seen it all, from vor resurrecting to the phorid screaming all night long.

you may not believe me child but i fought the Grustag three back in the day,
back when we, were the tenno you called to save the day.

Heard there's trouble brewing on corpus ships today,
Infected plagues been growing, 
Kids today say Alad v is such pain.

not fan of that zanuka, no sir no way,
reminds me to much of my run in with the stalker when i was young.

Lost my buddy frost in battle that day,
ever since that fateful day.
oh well it hasn't been the same,

I still visit his grave once year, 
buried him on sedna where he fell in love.

i think saryn was her name,
i ain't seen her in years,
after his death she up and disappeared.


Last i heard she was on in the void,
looking for clues to stalkers base.

Told her revenge wont solve anything,
but i let her go anyway.

made some mistakes along the way, forgot the lessons lotus taught us.

payed the price, and lost something dear,
grew a lil wiser year by year.

slowly outgrew my headstrong ways.
finished up a few promises then went back and gathered only the essential things,

headed out west to spend the rest of my days.
sitting out here with my kubrow lil wayne.
reminiscing about all the good times and all the pain.

I'll be here till my dying days.
I may be retired but they still know my name.
they called my Excalibur  back in my day.

Edited August 29, 2014 by SlenderSamaSenpai

[Jeloxale]

Shut up and take my Platinum!

[StellaPotato]

Shut up and take my Platinum!

so its good then?

[(PSN)quota16]

so its good th

Utterly.

[StellaPotato]

Utterly.

Insert silly big grin.. sweet beans, id hoped it would be, never wrote a song for game before.

now i just have to find time to record it. and i may need some people to record it with for this one, depends on how i want the sounds