Pie4man Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 (edited) Born from the deserts of Phobos Arenam is a master of the desert with the ability to stun, trap, and destroy his enemy's all with the power of the deserts. Fate of the Desert: Arenam boils the blood of his enemy's causing them to be significant weaker, slower, and have less accuracy. Snare of the Desert: Arenam places down a trap of quick sand that will stun and potentially kill any enemy that walks over it. Plague of the Desert: Arenam casts a swarm of locust that will stun, damage, and poison any enemy's that get caught in the swarm. Wrath of the Desert: Arenam summons a huge sand storm that will severely damage any enemy's in it. Those who survive the storm will be blinded for X amount of time. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alternate Abilities Apparition: Arenam summons a mirage of the enemy's worst nightmare causing them to fight it or flee in terror. Desert Sense: Arenam channels the nature of the desert highlighting objects of interest including enemy's, mods, and ammo. (Works like a scanner allowing you to see enemy's and objects behind walls) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Weapon Metus: The chosen weapon of Arenam this energy staff has the ability to fire electric projectiles as well as deal out heavy damage. Mechanics: The Metus is a Melee weapon that acts a lot like the glaive. You can attack normally by mashing E, but if you hold E you will fire an energy projectile from the tip of the staff. Weapon Stats Impact: 40 Slash: 35 Puncture: 15 Critical Chance: 15% Critical Multiplier: 1.5x Swing Speed: 1.2 Stat: 15% Charge Attack 200 Damage in electric Critical Chance: 20% Critical Multiplier: 2x Stat Chance: 50% Cool Down: 3 seconds In Progress 1. Concept Art 2. More Abilities ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Change Log 1.0 Original 1.1 Melee Weapon 1.2 Changes to Stats Feel free to comment. Feed back is needed Edited January 2, 2015 by Pie4man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FREQ1989 Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 (edited) Definitely one of the better fan concepts I have seen out there. My only critique would be that given the albeit small amount of lore given, perhaps he/she could not explicitly be born from the deserts of Phobos, since given the Dark Sector timeline we don't really know where any of the other frames have some from. So my addition to this would to maybe change the Desert and locusts to an idea of this being a frame that actually infects it's victims with a deadlier strain of the Technocyte virus. Either way it is just a suggestion, but the base theme and abilities are solid. Good work! +1 Edited November 14, 2014 by FREQ1989 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drake_Gunn Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 Like it so far, curious to see where you go from here, you could add that wrath of the desert blinds those who are inside while obscuring the view of those on the outside reducing their accuracy when targeting objects inside the area effected. Other than that stats would be nice and you misspelled locust, not a big deal but it was bugging me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pie4man Posted November 14, 2014 Author Share Posted November 14, 2014 Thanks for the feed back I'm working on the art and I hope to post it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pie4man Posted November 16, 2014 Author Share Posted November 16, 2014 Sorry the art is taking so long my scanner is acting up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pie4man Posted December 6, 2014 Author Share Posted December 6, 2014 I added a post about his own personal weapon what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pie4man Posted January 2, 2015 Author Share Posted January 2, 2015 Changed some of the stats of his weapon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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