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Zolotoy Stared at the ornate cryopod infront of him.It was quite ancient by now,bits of frost & ice covering the outer edges of the translucent metal on the front.Rust adhering to some of the unalloyed surfaces,small tendrils of "void plant" growing along the sides of the cryopod (it was mostly a harmless plant infected with the technocyte).The golden band on the middle of the cryopod had a lotus symbol on it,with orokin script just below:

 

 

Zolotoy balled his fists upon reading the script,he knew very well what it meant: "unfit for use,inferior,useless".

This enraged him,not only for the fact that it was pure waste,hence the gigantic expenditure being tossed away in this case,but the fact that a living being was being imprisoned eternally.With no hope of any honorable death,no hope of being able to sacrifice for the good of the empire..This was literally the most awful thing he could think of.

 

The being inside the container could just barely be seen through the rather worn translucent metal.It had it's arms crossed over it's chest (which was a good thing for obvious reasons),almost as if it had been layed to rest in a coffin.It seemed incredibly fragile,not like Vi' at all.Vi' was tall and muscular,this poor thing inside of the container looked more like a non-human with how soft it's tender musculature seemed.

 

He then charged at the container,slamming his right fist into the lotus symbol on the golden band,in a fit of rage.He reared back however.Much to his surprise his new augments lent him enough strength that the punch shattered the translucent metal on the front of the container..Causing a fairly rapid ejection of the occupant.

 

He managed to catch the occupant mid-air however,much to his releif.Lifting her off of his shoulder with one hand,he looked her over for any injury.There were multiple marks,and some minor bruising in her skin around each joint,indicating insertion of cables,not the kind that the ministry of science used however,this was something else,something far worse.Her hair was surprisingly long for that of a tenno reject,but it was an inky black in color,and felt like metal to the touch.Her lips were so pail as to almost be white.

 

Taking Akili's words at face value however,which was to say,he didnt trust Akili entirely,he used his thumb to gently pull upon one of the woman's eyelids,revealing the eye.This was of course to check her for "void taint"(Void taint usually makes the eyes glow feircely,sometimes with void energy trailing off).the colored portions of her eyes were a fiery sort of magenta color,interspersed with iridescent purple,but they did not glow.This was very good news.

 

The woman's eyes then unexpectedly moved,focusing on Zolotoy's face.Yet the eyes seemed distant,hollow in a way.He didnt have time for semantics though,he needed to get her into medical treatmeant,and fast.Without further thinking,he moved over to the nearest wall.Punching a button on an ornate looking panel,he shouted into it "This is Grand Orokin Marshal Zolotoy Mohsch,i am in the Bio-storage facility,get a medical stricture down hear NOW!!"