Rhinowo Posted March 31, 2016 Share Posted March 31, 2016 heres mine 1st one: When i open my eyes, i breathe in the soft morning air the sweet smelling air fills my lungs as i let it out, i sense sadness the sadness of nature i sense guilt, hatred, and sadness all at once i realized, i am nature as i sit here telling you this Think about nature it won’t last forever people tell us they think it's all a illusion but listen to me young child it's not, i am nature listen,respect, and enjoy nature it's all i have left heres my second one as i woke up from my slumber sounds of the buzzing bees filled my head with patience the sound of running water, calmed me birds,deer,squirrels,animals, all of the belong to me i am the one who provides you, with air i am the one who listens to you when you’r down i am the one who releases beautiful colors in the fall,summer, and spring i am the father of trees respect them and they will respect you, my young child love everything, dont turn to hatred and despair see the better sides of life ignore the bad, and portray the good and you will be happy as i stand here tall and proud remember to do the same remember me, my young child when i am gone tell me if you like them (constructional criticism appreciated) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basdiow Posted March 31, 2016 Share Posted March 31, 2016 I don't know how to make one though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhinowo Posted March 31, 2016 Author Share Posted March 31, 2016 uh you know the song amazing grace, sorta to that beat http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Poem heres a link to how to do one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhinowo Posted March 31, 2016 Author Share Posted March 31, 2016 so anyone else, got a poem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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