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  1. Take this with a grain of salt, much like the sea.

     

    >Video opens with a view of space.
    >Some philosophical narration as a comet passes across the screen.
    >Camera starts to follow it.
    >Comet gets pulled into Uranus' gravity, starts entering the atmosphere.
    >Some metaphor for rain and righteous fury.
    >Camera zooms in.
    >It's not a comet, it's HYDROID PRIME on an ODONATA PRIME.
    >ODONATA PRIME
    breaks apart during reentry, rendering it unavailable until the PRIME VAULT with LOKI PRIME opens.
    >Cuts to surface of Uranus, Grineer patrolling a sea base as a streak of light appears in the corner and draws closer.
    >Grineer watch as streak of light makes a shrill whistling sound, arcing over the facility and crashing into the ocean with a sonic boom.

    >Grineer run over to investigate, six LANCERs, a BOMBARD and a COMMANDER.
    >Camera cuts to view of the ocean, waves crashing against the foundation of the facility.
    >GRINEER COMMANDER loses interest first, ordering LANCERS and the BOMBARD to return to patrol.
    >LANCERs return to stations, BOMBARD asks COMMMANDER what that could have been, before following orders.
    >COMMANDER glances once more over railing, before walking back to his post.
    >Before COMMANDER can walk twenty steps, a tentacle reaches up, grabs him, and yanks him over the rail with a startled cry.
    >Grineer gather at the ledge again, hoping to see the COMMANDER.
    >Another metaphor, something about creeps in the deep, Bionicle, each set sold separately..
    >COMMANDER bursts out of the water, thrashed about by the tentacle, screeching hysterically before being dragged under again.
    >Grineer look at each other.
    >Loud thump off-camera.
    >Grineer slowly turn around.
    >Cut to coom-in of HYDROID PRIME, before pulling back as HYDROID PRIME fires a full-charged BALLISTICA PRIME.
    >Bolt strikes BOMBARD in the face, ripping him in half and sending the top half overboard.
    >LANCERS stare in horror as BOMBARD's legs collapse to the ground, before looking up at the white ghost of the BOMBARD, just as it rifle-butts a LANCER in the skull, killing it.

     

    >BOMBARD proceeds to go on a rampage, killing three more LANCERs as chaos unfolds on the platform.
    >One LANCER, the BOMBARD's best friend, duck's under the ghost's wild swing, sprinting desperately for the security panel, as BOMBARD's heavy stomps chase after him, each footfall causing the camera to tremble.
    >LANCER reaches the panel, punching in the alarm code before turning around to see BOMBARD spectre barrelling towards it.
    >LANCER flinches just before BOMBARD reaches him, throwing up his hands just as BOMBARD disappears.
    >2.3 seconds pass, and the LANCER nervously lowers his arms.
    >Cut to side view of HYDROID PRIME standing opposite of LANCER with fully charged BALLISTICA PRIME aimed between his eyes.
    >Cut to black as a shot is fired.


    >Klaxons blare over the speakers, and after 4.3 seconds, a large group of Grineer (~15-20) pour in from the entrance.
    >Which is exactly what HYDROID PRIME was waiting for, throwing his hand at the group, casting VOLLEY.
    >ELITE LANCERs that exit the building are struck down from the unseen deluge, while one manages to sut up a BRUNT before the lucky VOLLEY headshots it.
    >Another waxing poetic about how, much as how women are vindictive creatures and remember everything, the ocean is just as unforgiving.
    >HYDROID PRIME then UNDERTOWs through a second group of Grineer (~12) just as they enter the scene, dragging the bulk (8-9~) of them and throwing them into the ocean. >HYDROID PRIME leans over to watch the Grineer flounder and drown, before hearing a garbled voice behind him.
    >Turning around, he freezes as two HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS open fire.
    >Drawing his NAMI AND SOLO PRIME, HYDROID PRIME struggles to deflect the assault as a third HEAVY GUNNER joins in, firing upon the WARFRAME.
    >HYDROID PRIME struggles to deflect the flak with NAMI AND SOLO PRIME as a third HEAVY GUNNER joins in the action.

    >Haunted laughter can be heard as HYDROID PRIME is slowly pushed back.
    >Eventually, all three HEAVY GUNNERs run out of ammunition, and start hurriedly reloading their GORGON WRAITHs.
    >As FROST PRIME starts to relax, a MANIC appears with a burst of light and a loud noise from above, catching HYDROID PRIME flat-footed.
    >Leaping onto HYDROID PRIME's back, MANIC grabs HYDROID PRIME by the chin, roughly twisting and yanking on HYDROID PRIME's head, trying to snap his neck.
    >HYDROID PRIME stumbles back, dropping NAMI AND SOLO PRIME, trying to wrestle MANIC off.
    >MANIC cackles and chortles entire time, teleporting off of HYDROID PRIME before teleporting right in front of him, sucker-punching him and slamming both fists into HYDROID PRIME's shoulders, as [[HEAVY GUNNER TRIO]] reload GORGON WRAITHS.
    >Dropping to his knee, HYDROID PRIME grabs NAMI AND SOLO PRIME before leaping up, stabbing NAMI AND SOLO PRIME through MANIC's head mid-teleport, killing it instantly.
    >Shakily getting back onto his feet, HYDROID PRIME turns with the camera just as [[HEAVY GUNNER TRIO] level GORGON WRAITHS.
    >HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS bellows "OPRAH FYRA", and [HEAVY GUNNER TRIO] fire.
    >HYDROID PRIME staggers back from the onslaught*, his shields quickly breaking before a lucky bullet hits him in the hat.
    >Watch 80's/90's action movie scenes to get a good reference on ragdolling, possibly Robocop, Rambo?
    >HYDROID PRIME goes limp, collapses to the ground.
    >HYDROID PRIME seemingly melts, dissolving into a puddle while [HEAVY GUNNER TRIO] continue firing.

    >Another line about the vastness of the ocean is given, and upon seeing HYDROID PRIME fall, one of the HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS orders the other two to confirm HYDROID PRIME's demise.



    >The HEAVY GUNNER and HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS cautiously approach the silvery puddle, with the HEAVY GUNNER drawing a KRAKEN and firing a couple potshots into the water.
    >HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS steps into it, then walks a few feet.
    >HEAVY GUNNER then holsters her KRAKEN and joins the HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS.
    >Another comment about the deep ocean, and how the easiest way to succeed as a predator is to disguise yourself as prey.
    >The lead HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS barks out an order to the others, to which the other HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS starts to reply, before disappearing into the puddle.
    >HEAVY GUNNER looks in the former direction of HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS before also disappearing with a frightened cry.
    >Last HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS sets off a blast wave before opening fire on the HYDROID PRIME puddle, not noticing as it slowly crawls closer to her.
    >Klaxons begins blaring again, and the HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS jerks back in surprise as HEAVY GUNNER and HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS' corpses shoot out of the puddle, landing in a mangled heap in front of her.
    >Desperately firing her GORGON WRAITH at the floor, HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS doesn't notice the puddle move behind her.
    >Cut to closeup view of HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS struggling to reload as HYDROID PRIME rises into view over her shoulder.
    >Another line about traps and snares, and how it's most terrifying not to be killed by a trap...
    >HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS raises head, cold fear in it's wrinkly features.
    >...But realizing moments before that it's two late.
    >HEAVY GUNNER EXIMUS whirls around, drawing KRAKEN just as HYDROID PRIME fires a shot from BALLISTICA PRIME.
    >Cut to black.

    >Fade back into view, camera focused on main entrance.
    >Door opens, several dozen (~60) Grineer flood the main pathway.
    >HYDROID PRIME stands casually on the other end, seemingly oblivious to the small battalion as he stares out into the Uranian ocean.
    >Grineer get into position, setting up barricades and firing lines as TYL REGOR* stomps into the rain.
    >*Note: try to get new lines for Regor for trailer.
    >TYL REGOR raises a hand, and Grineer ready weapons.
    >Just as TYL REGOR points at HYDROID PRIME, seven or eight Grineer are yanked out of sight.
    >TYL REGOR looks at where Grineer have disappeared, before stumbling as the facility shakes.
    >"Board of Directors..."
    >Cut to HYDROID PRIME, still leaning over the rail as TYL REGOR and Grineer start to panic.
    >HYDROID PRIME slowly turns to watch the chaos unfold.
    >"For your consideration..."
    >Cut to far shot of facility, as several massive tentacles rise from the ocean to wrap around it.
    >Tentacles start to tear facility apart.
    >Cut to scenic pan of stormy ocean, as HYDROID PRIME's KRAKEN's head raises from the surface.
    >Fade to black, leaving glowing eyes still visible, before fading fully.
    >Screams and gunfire still play out as waves crashing against the facility slowly grow louder.
    >WARFRAME (TM) fades in.
    >Voices grow silent, with gunfire and alarms coming to a stop at the sound of screeching metal and crashing water.
    >"HYDROID PRIME..."

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  2. Just now, Xardis said:

    I forgot to mention that reload speed would be adjusted. If 2 in mag, it would be 1.2s to reload. But in turn, the max ammo should be limited to 100 or so.

    Alright, yeah, that's a much better take on it than I was expecting. I still kind of disagree, though. I feel, if anything, the magazine should go up.

  3. 10 minutes ago, (Xbox One)OTF SERENiTY said:

    DE pls give cycron a bigger magazine or make a Vandal. 

    That too. If they honestly made the Cycron like the Collector SMG from Mass Effect, where it immediately starts cooling down as soon as you stop firing, it would have been a really solid weapon.

    If they went in this direction to begin with, I feel the gun would have had a much better reception. But seriously, give the damn thing at least forty ammo in the clip.

  4. So a few months ago, the Miter, Pantera, and a few other weapons got a look at, and after a fiddle or two with their stats and whatnot, most of them have become much more popular in the meta. Do you think there will be other weapon reworks in the future? What would you like to see get reworked? How would you go about it?

    Take the Seer, for instance. Not a great gun, all things considered, but it has solid damage, and if you can manage the leading of your shot, you could squeeze some respectable results out of it. Personally, I like the gun. The shortcomings, and the way it's built, it gives it character to me. What would I change about it? Something like this.

    >Hitscan bullets.
    >Increase magazine capacity to ten shots.
    >Give it a Sniper hud when zoomed in, making it a proper sniper pistol.
    >Raise status to 25%.
    >Give a crit chance/damage of 20%/2.2x.

    What would you do?

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