KeepOnFlowing Posted May 31, 2014 Share Posted May 31, 2014 (edited) A Painful Fact: Through the broken sky I see the stars The glitter and gleam has me lost Though I love life, I cannot seem to let it go The pain has me lost beyond the gates of my emotion My eyes tear up with a concise solidity The realism is too great Black clouds, Yet a sunny sky I cannot compete So no longer I try For the love of many, I will never have I live in the grasp of thought I tell myself to evolve past it and so I do, without hesitance but with a great admiration for the forgotten Those who do without thanks Life is beautiful The mirror is broken but the facts remain still... You may judge this how you like but please note that this is freeform poetry. It does not adhere to boundaries and restrictions like traditional, bland poetry. Edited May 31, 2014 by BecomeLikeWater Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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