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Rocky was a peaceful rock with a fulfilling life. He bathed in the sun's warm ray and the cool stream trinkling down his back. The forest he lived in was lush with vegetation and plenty of animals were abound. They would come down to where he is and drink the water from the small stream that flow off his back. One day a loud thunderous roar overcomes the clam wind that turns the sky blazing orange with clouds growing ominously bright with each passing second. Outburst from the clouds come a foreboding craft that shows a sleek yet hideous look of a decaying animal lying in a sulfur pond with bone like structures that punctures out of its frame. This craft showed no sign of stopping its momentum until it hits the ground digging into the once beautiful landscape tearing the trees from their roots which stood for hundreds of years. Even the mightiest and oldest red wood like trees that were in next forest in Rocky's view were no match for this wild savage beast that is crazed on making a mark on this planet. This beast has finally stopped but not until it reaches oh so close to the forest edge where Rocky is located.

Crack, pop, boom are the sounds that come out of the airlocks as creatures who are but a thing battling with hideous humanoid beings with bubbly exterior that distorts on perception of symmetry took their fight out of the downed beast. The animals scatter running away from this horrid fight leaving only Rocky behind to watch as the two forces tearing into each other as if they know nothing else. One by one each fell tell the only one left is this big hulking brute with a green box. He has a strange liquid coming out of his body though it is a small stream just like Rocky's stream flowing down his back. The brute looks at the ship and goes in; for hours the brute does not come out until an explosion come bursting out of the gigantic downed beast with each section going off as if set to a rhythm. Rocky notice the stream has become a river and can see holes in him with seared flesh along the inside of the hole and rims. He watches the sky as another monster come from the sky, but this one looks too symmetric and clear to be the beast that soon to be dead being came in.

This cold and concise beast landed differently with a much more precise execution with not so much a a sound coming out of the beast than it needs to. More metallic creatures come out of the this machine beast. The bleeding being starts its last attack with a thud coming from the green box and a boom is heard later as one of the creatures burst into blueish white light and fiery glare which none of the creatures took notice quickly dispatching him. Now strange similar yet smaller symmetric beings with a fondness of geometry come out and inspect the beast that is nothing more than a fiery scrape heap. They look at each other and one of them fired a blueish white at another with their mask showing no remorse. That same one surveys what was else around besides than the downed beast and notice Rocky. Rocky always new he stood out from the rest of the forest ever since he awakened. He gestures one other one to come over with more commotion in the background. The next thing Rocky saw was a weird looking contraption that reached out with an appendage until it was over Rocky's head. He felt a tingle all over his body which he wonder why though as he has not felt this before when he awoke. Then blinding light surrounds him and he could almost feel a molten heat coming all around him which terrified him as it was not the same gentle heat that comes from the sun everyday. He is then picked up and brought into the cold and concise beast where he underwent terrible experiments while his stream on his back still flowed out.

Why would these creatures do this to him? They are as bad as some others he does not remember, but felt the same. He pondered on this until he grew more worried not from the what these creatures could do, but to what he was. With each passing test, he is forced to come to terms with a strange flow that always allowed his stream to continue to its journey to the bottom of the little pond that formed. He is grateful never than less to these creatures as the pond is the only comfort he has after every day. His memories which thought was never his slowly coming back like the stream trinkling down his back. He remembered a village with people bustling around though dread filled the air. A ship that is elegantly symmetric with no errors can be seen comes closer to his view as he walking towards it. There it is a giant face looming over the masses spewing words which he bothered not hear with his only focus on a sweet charming figure besides him and a bubbly innocent between them holding hands. They were selected to serve their illustrious figures on a mission to go live an unfamiliar life with nothing but what is on their backs.

The ship started launching with no feeling of ever going off anywhere. He sees the small lights that which make planets and a small dot bleeping across the light landscape. The ship closed in on its objective as it races pass the small dwarf rock body, which rumored to use to be a planet of old, out into the cold dark space and a tear at which the mediums that were used to view the outside cutoff with ripples going across the room. He took the ones that was holding his hands and hugged them tightly as a wave of light filling the room. He saw as the light grabbed hold of the sweet figure slowly disintegrating while there were nothing but words of sweet sorrow coming out of the figure's mouth. Each word calmed Rocky yet tore him asunder with only the bubbly innocent holding his hand with streams coming down the eyes asking in a worrying voice. He tried to calm the innocent even though he is trying to calm himself too. The light next grabbed both of them and dragged each other away as he feels a warm light watching over him. As the light engulfs him and his body, he awakes to find himself in a restrained posture which is familiar with him. Shiny creatures descend on him with different tools that pierce, cut, and impale his body with each passing pain reminding of what he lost. Years have passed with the never ending routine a thud and smash turns all attention to the doors as panic swells through the corridors. The sound filled the room until it faded away with multiple thuds originating from this ship at a constant interval.

Now only a blaring sound is heard with a voice that repeats the same lines over though one is always changing. Rocky new even though he did not understand what that changing line was. With each passing moment, he reminisce the sweet figure and the bubbly innocent roaming around what looks to be his home. Every day they had spent out with the sun glaring yet soothing light and the air's crisp breeze to help them get through the day. He started to cry with tears of joy and sorrow which didn't last long until a bright flash erupted from the ship. A jolt goes through him as the flash he saw was not the one he remembered. The unsympathetic creatures that hold no emotion is falling one by one with each grabbing their eye like energy blue glass. Figures approach Rocky and look at him as he does to them. They turn away with nothing but the sound of footsteps which soon follow as well. He was alone with his guilt of living and the longing he shall never have. Though he remembers a particularly warm feeling going down his back. The stream that which has brought him cool  in the forest is now giving solace with warmth which he remembers as the sweet figure's tear dropped on him and the bubbly innocent before the disappearance.

There in his comfort arose from the background of the circuitry, a long slender creature that reminded him of the sweet figure holding his hand yet different the shape was and the garment worn. He knew this was not the one that gave him comfort but something with a similar path before. The words spoken from the mouth gave him comfort but not in the way the sweet figure can. After all of the words have left he thought of only to be with the bubbly innocent and sweet figure which this new creature replied and the words spoken rang his heart of joy and he felt the flow on his back showing more warmth as to which he said yes to be where ever the bubbly innocent maybe.

Dam that was a good amount of words that have been written. Hopefully there are not too many run-on sentences while the end is kinda not good from writing at 1 am for me where I am at. Oh well hopefully this is what you meant by a story or something. I know I definitely kinda sped upped in some areas with not as good details as in the beginning. Also goodnight all for now.

Edit: Fixed one word to make it sound better.

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3 hours ago, Dewsitine said:
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Rocky was a peaceful rock with a fulfilling life. He bathed in the sun's warm ray and the cool stream trinkling down his back. The forest he lived in was lush with vegetation and plenty of animals were abound. They would come down to where he is and drink the water from the small stream that flow off his back. One day a loud thunderous roar overcomes the clam wind that turns the sky blazing orange with clouds growing ominously bright with each passing second. Outburst from the clouds come a foreboding craft that shows a sleek yet hideous look of a decaying animal lying in a sulfur pond with bone like structures that punctures out of its frame. This craft showed no sign of stopping its momentum until it hits the ground digging into the once beautiful landscape tearing the trees from their roots which stood for hundreds of years. Even the mightiest and oldest red wood like trees that were in next forest in Rocky's view were no match for this wild savage beast that is crazed on making a mark on this planet. This beast has finally stopped but not until it reaches oh so close to the forest edge where Rocky is located.

Crack, pop, boom are the sounds that come out of the airlocks as creatures who are but a thing battling with hideous humanoid beings with bubbly exterior that distorts on perception of symmetry took their fight out of the downed beast. The animals scatter running away from this horrid fight leaving only Rocky behind to watch as the two forces tearing into each other as if they know nothing else. One by one each fell tell the only one left is this big hulking brute with a green box. He has a strange liquid coming out of his body though it is a small stream just like Rocky's stream flowing down his back. The brute looks at the ship and goes in; for hours the brute does not come out until an explosion come bursting out of the gigantic downed beast with each section going off as if set to a rhythm. Rocky notice the stream has become a river and can see holes in him with seared flesh along the inside of the hole and rims. He watches the sky as another monster come from the sky, but this one looks too symmetric and clear to be the beast that soon to be dead being came in.

This cold and concise beast landed differently with a much more precise execution with not so much a a sound coming out of the beast than it needs to. More metallic creatures come out of the this machine beast. The bleeding being starts its last attack with a thud coming from the green box and a boom is heard later as one of the creatures burst into blueish white light and fiery glare which none of the creatures took notice quickly dispatching him. Now strange similar yet smaller symmetric beings with a fondness of geometry come out and inspect the beast that is nothing more than a fiery scrape heap. They look at each other and one of them fired a blueish white at another with their mask showing no remorse. That same one surveys what was else around besides than the downed beast and notice Rocky. Rocky always new he stood out from the rest of the forest ever since he awakened. He gestures one other one to come over with more commotion in the background. The next thing Rocky saw was a weird looking contraption that reached out with an appendage until it was over Rocky's head. He felt a tingle all over his body which he wonder why though as he has not felt this before when he awoke. Then blinding light surrounds him and he could almost feel a molten heat coming all around him which terrified him as it was not the same gentle heat that comes from the sun everyday. He is then picked up and brought into the cold and concise beast where he underwent terrible experiments while his stream on his back still flowed out.

Why would these creatures do this to him? They are as bad as some others he does not remember, but felt the same. He pondered on this until he grew more worried not from the what these creatures could do, but to what he was. With each passing test, he is forced to come to terms with a strange flow that always allowed his stream to continue to its journey to the bottom of the little pond that formed. He is grateful never than less to these creatures as the pond is the only comfort he has after every day. His memories which thought was never his slowly coming back like the stream trinkling down his back. He remembered a village with people bustling around though dread filled the air. A ship that is elegantly symmetric with no errors can be seen comes closer to his view as he walking towards it. There it is a giant face looming over the masses spewing words which he bothered not hear with his only focus on a sweet charming figure besides him and a bubbly innocent between them holding hands. They were selected to serve their illustrious figures on a mission to go live an unfamiliar life with nothing but what is on their backs.

The ship started launching with no feeling of ever going off anywhere. He sees the small lights that which make planets and a small dot bleeping across the light landscape. The ship closed in on its objective as it races pass the small dwarf rock body, which rumored to use to be a planet of old, out into the cold dark space and a tear at which the mediums that were used to view the outside cutoff with ripples going across the room. He took the ones that was holding his hands and hugged them tightly as a wave of light filling the room. He saw as the light grabbed hold of the sweet figure slowly disintegrating while there were nothing but words of sweet sorrow coming out of the figure's mouth. Each word calmed Rocky yet tore him asunder with only the bubbly innocent holding his hand with streams coming down the eyes asking in a worrying voice. He tried to calm the innocent even though he is trying to calm himself too. The light next grabbed both of them and dragged each other away as he feels a warm light watching over him. As the light engulfs him and his body, he awakes to find himself in a restrained posture which is familiar with him. Shiny creatures descend on him with different tools that pierce, cut, and impale his body with each passing pain reminding of what he lost. Years have passed with the never ending routine a thud and smash turns all attention to the doors as panic swells through the corridors. The sound filled the room until it faded away with multiple thuds originating from this ship at a constant interval.

Now only a blaring sound is heard with a voice that repeats the same lines over though one is always changing. Rocky new even though he did not understand what that changing line was. With each passing moment, he reminisce the sweet figure and the bubbly innocent roaming around what looks to be his home. Every day they had spent out with the sun glaring yet soothing light and the air's crisp breeze to help them get through the day. He started to cry with tears of joy and sorrow which didn't last long until a bright flash erupted from the ship. A jolt goes through him as the flash he saw was not the one he remembered. The unsympathetic creatures that hold no emotion is falling one by one with each grabbing their eye like energy blue glass. Figures approach Rocky and look at him as he does to them. They turn away with nothing but the sound of footsteps which soon follow as well. He was alone with his guilt of living and the longing he shall never have. Though he remembers a particularly warm feeling going down his back. The stream that which has brought him cool  in the forest is now giving solace with warmth which he remembers as the sweet figure's tear dropped on him and the bubbly innocent before the disappearance.

There in his comfort arose from the background of the circuitry, a long slender creature that reminded him of the sweet figure holding his hand yet different the shape was and the garment worn. He knew this was not the one that gave him comfort but something with a similar path before. The words spoken from the mouth gave him comfort but not in the way the sweet figure can. After all of the words have left he thought of only to be with the bubbly innocent and sweet figure which this new creature replied and the words spoken rang his heart of joy and he felt the flow on his back showing more warmth as to which he said yes to be where ever the bubbly innocent maybe.

Dam that was a good amount of words that have been written. Hopefully there are not too many run-on sentences while the end is kinda not good from writing at 1 am for me where I am at. Oh well hopefully this is what you meant by a story or something. I know I definitely kinda sped upped in some areas with not as good details as in the beginning. Also goodnight all for now.

Edit: Fixed one word to make it sound better.

Was still nice to read. thx for the effort. too bad hes unlikely to be ever placed in the game as a codex entry or something, but at least he now has a basic story. a history. a meaning. so again i really appreciate this. thank you :)

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On 30.10.2016 at 5:08 PM, CagedLunatic said:

Rocky risked his life!  Let's not take it for GRANITE!  Because he will not GRAVEL!  He has PAVED away a new life for us! Although his past was ROCKY, he is now the Dojo's CORNER STONE... Literally. 

Yes, His story might've been a little Edgy, but in the end we Tenno all know the means of the Sacrafice hes been trough, we shall not forget. We shall admire in silence, as the Crying watcher is with us.

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