More emblem help

[DementedParadox]

So... I posted a question about emblem help, and since then, I got inspired by the founders emblems... and come back to find out you don't want fine lines, or excessive detail (not seen in this draft cause it is still very rough but I was intending it to look as detailed as the founders emblems, but you can get where I was headed) so... please forums, how wrong did I get this? 

[WarmongerExtraordinare]

i assume its a clan emblem eh

if yes - you gotta remember that you gotta upload a tiny tiny picture with a very low resolution so these thin lines wont look very gureito daze