SnaleKing Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 You're welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikey844 Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 that is depressing, not even remembering those you once loved. How horrible that must be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumika1204 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 Done! I apologize for nothing. A large, heavy tome landed with a thump, adding itself to the volumes that were already scattered about the garden. Crooked, twisting branches sagged with the burden of books, as if the pages carried more weight than their already significant mass would indicate. In the center of the meticulously organized clutter, a lone figure plucked another from the top of a swaying stack of books, brushing off the cover with a black sleeve before turning to the first dusty page. Her weary, white eyes scanned through the lines of fine blue script, absorbing information with a practised swiftness. “Gods damn it,” Cardina swore as she glared at a certain baleful paragraph, then quickly flipped to the next page to ascertain her suspicions. “I have tried that before.” She soon reached the back cover of the thick book, finding several other techniques, meditations and arcane attempts that had already failed. Cardina discarded the volume in the same fashion as the rest, watching it with a detached disinterest as it tumbled haphazardly towards the distant ground, only for the flapping front cover to collide with an outstretched branch and go spinning into the blackness beneath. Cardina reached for the next one even as its predecessor loudly impacted the unseen floor. She closed her eyes as she ran a hand over the grain of the well-worn front cover. Cadina knew she’d done this many times before, but how many, or what she’d learned from her efforts, was inevitably lost four days later. The growing size of her record of failed attempts boded ill for Cardina’s future success, as she could hardly read the entirety of the backlog before the beginning was lost to her ever-worsening amnesia. Time was against her. The memory sat stubborn, unchanging and undesired, reminding her endlessly of the one thing she desperately tried to forget. It was only a moment, frozen like crystal in the back of her mind. His eyes gazed up at her, as tears streaked down his cheeks and wet his lips as they mouthed her name for the last time. “WHO ARE YOU?” Cardina screamed into the blackness, trying to both embrace and consume the memory as her eyes welled with tears. There was... so much emotion in that moment, such painful conflict. “Why did I love you? Why did I kill you? Why... why can’t you let me forget?” “Miss Cardina?” A voice cut through the gloom, and her heavy sobbing ceased instantly. “It’s Rien. A visitor is here.” Cardina slipped out of the overgrowth, sliding down and through the twisting, jagged trunks to confront the speaker. He was standing in the open entrance to the garden and wore a peculiar type of armor, thin and form-fitting. The helmet had no eye-slits, but instead large, decorative horns protruded from the sides. “I suppose I should show them around,” Cardina set a hand on Rien’s shoulder briefly as she walked past him, her fading robes trailing behind her as she strode slowly to the hanger. When she arrived, a figure was waiting, wearing a similar type of armor to Rien. However, this one was taller, with longer, curlier horns protruding from the eyeless helmet while his hooved feet clacked the floor impatiently. “Hello,” Cardina smiled at the newcomer. “I am Cardina, the-” she blinked a few times, then shook her head to clear her thoughts. “the... I, ah,” her brow furrowed in concentration briefly, before her features lightened again with a smile. “Would- would you like to see my garden?” Hmm. I found Temperance's own to be more saddening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirNocturne Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Done! I apologize for nothing. A large, heavy tome landed with a thump, adding itself to the volumes that were already scattered about the garden. Crooked, twisting branches sagged with the burden of books, as if the pages carried more weight than their already significant mass would indicate. In the center of the meticulously organized clutter, a lone figure plucked another from the top of a swaying stack of books, brushing off the cover with a black sleeve before turning to the first dusty page. Her weary, white eyes scanned through the lines of fine blue script, absorbing information with a practised swiftness. “Gods damn it,” Cardina swore as she glared at a certain baleful paragraph, then quickly flipped to the next page to ascertain her suspicions. “I have tried that before.” She soon reached the back cover of the thick book, finding several other techniques, meditations and arcane attempts that had already failed. Cardina discarded the volume in the same fashion as the rest, watching it with a detached disinterest as it tumbled haphazardly towards the distant ground, only for the flapping front cover to collide with an outstretched branch and go spinning into the blackness beneath. Cardina reached for the next one even as its predecessor loudly impacted the unseen floor. She closed her eyes as she ran a hand over the grain of the well-worn front cover. Cadina knew she’d done this many times before, but how many, or what she’d learned from her efforts, was inevitably lost four days later. The growing size of her record of failed attempts boded ill for Cardina’s future success, as she could hardly read the entirety of the backlog before the beginning was lost to her ever-worsening amnesia. Time was against her. The memory sat stubborn, unchanging and undesired, reminding her endlessly of the one thing she desperately tried to forget. It was only a moment, frozen like crystal in the back of her mind. His eyes gazed up at her, as tears streaked down his cheeks and wet his lips as they mouthed her name for the last time. “WHO ARE YOU?” Cardina screamed into the blackness, trying to both embrace and consume the memory as her eyes welled with tears. There was... so much emotion in that moment, such painful conflict. “Why did I love you? Why did I kill you? Why... why can’t you let me forget?” “Miss Cardina?” A voice cut through the gloom, and her heavy sobbing ceased instantly. “It’s Rien. A visitor is here.” Cardina slipped out of the overgrowth, sliding down and through the twisting, jagged trunks to confront the speaker. He was standing in the open entrance to the garden and wore a peculiar type of armor, thin and form-fitting. The helmet had no eye-slits, but instead large, decorative horns protruded from the sides. “I suppose I should show them around,” Cardina set a hand on Rien’s shoulder briefly as she walked past him, her fading robes trailing behind her as she strode slowly to the hanger. When she arrived, a figure was waiting, wearing a similar type of armor to Rien. However, this one was taller, with longer, curlier horns protruding from the eyeless helmet while his hooved feet clacked the floor impatiently. “Hello,” Cardina smiled at the newcomer. “I am Cardina, the-” she blinked a few times, then shook her head to clear her thoughts. “the... I, ah,” her brow furrowed in concentration briefly, before her features lightened again with a smile. “Would- would you like to see my garden?” Whelp, the feels, all of them. This is so good, in the worst way possible. I want this so much to be a thing, yet I would be so depressed if it was. Darn you Snale, darn you for making me feels so hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnaleKing Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 (edited) Whelp, the feels, all of them. This is so good, in the worst way possible. I want this so much to be a thing, yet I would be so depressed if it was. Darn you Snale, darn you for making me feels so hard. Well, there isn't much more to say. She spends all her time trying to find out how to get rid of Temperance's memory, reading her recorded thoughts to see what has already failed. The more she reads, the more she has to record, and the more she records the more she has to read, as her amnesia's cutoff grows slowly closer. Soon, she's no longer able to read the whole record before her amnesia erases the beginning. Eventually, she forgets everything, her church, her past, her acolytes, her identity, until the only thing she's aware of is that one memory of killing Temperance, and the hundreds of ways she's failed to erase it. Edited May 12, 2014 by SnaleKing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirNocturne Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Well, there isn't much more to say. She spends all her time trying to find out how to get rid of Temperance's memory, reading her recorded thoughts to see what has already failed. The more she reads, the more she has to record, and the more she records the more she has to read, as her amnesia's cutoff grows slowly closer. Eventually, she's no longer able to read the whole record before her amnesia erases the beginning, so she has to go back and read that. Eventually, she forgets everything, her church, her past, her acolytes, her identity, until the only thing she's aware of is that one memory of killing Temperance, and the hundreds of ways she's failed to erase it. Is this going to be what happens in the future, or is it just a spin-off you guys wanted to write? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Strayed- Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Something to come..... Miho found herself in a white room, she looks around to see if she can find anything, she looks behind her and spots a white door with a silver knob. She walks up to the door, reaching for the knob, she hesitates for a bit, but in the end she turns the knob. As the door opens she finds herself in a forest, walking forward she hears a laugh, a child's laugh. Miho decides to follow the voice, running through the trees, she follows the voice of the child's laughter, running and running, she hears the voice getting louder. As she stops, she spots a little girl no more older than 5 playing with two dolls. The dolls were an Excalibur and a Mag, with the exact same colors of her and Tatsuya. She approaches the girl, and the little girl turns to look at Miho. Miho's eyes widen, she looked exactly like her, the same facial structure when she was young, the same light brown hair. But what made her widen her eyes even more...... Were the little girl's heterochromic eyes, one colored emerald like Miho's, and the other red. The little girl just smiles at Miho and speaks, "Mama!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnaleKing Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Is this going to be what happens in the future, or is it just a spin-off you guys wanted to write? Spin-off. Too damn depressing for canon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirNocturne Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Spin-off. Too damn depressing for canon. Thank goodness. Alright, back to figuring out how to save Cardina in five minutes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumika1204 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 (edited) Thank goodness. Alright, back to figuring out how to save Cardina in five minutes... Soon... Edited May 12, 2014 by Sumika1204 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revel72 Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Sumika! Come to Chatango please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralin Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Soon... This.... this is perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumika1204 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 Sumika! Come to Chatango please. I had things to be doing and could not come to the chatango. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revel72 Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 I had things to be doing and could not come to the chatango. Well darn... It can wait tomorrow... Well on my part tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnaleKing Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 Finished out-of-frame Cardina. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PressXtoJaaason Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 so can I join yet, or not yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Viper Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 Finished out-of-frame Cardina. She looks like she's about to kill someone... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnaleKing Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 so can I join yet, or not yet? We've been put on hold waiting for Pwnr to reply, as the plot can't really move forward without his characters. As soon as we're done with this Corpus invasion story arc, we'd be glad to have you. For now, feel free to join us in the chat, callofthefaithful.chatango.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishworshipper Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 (edited) Yo Pwnr, Cyrios opened a comm channel with Synder Bastard. Also, because I love you so huggey-muggy-much Snale.... Temperill. Edited May 13, 2014 by fishworshipper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temperance000 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 FISHWORSHIPPER!!!!! I am going to twist Cyrios' head off his spindly golden body, stick it in a faraday cage, and make him watch as I strip his body down to resources. Then I'll drop him in a hole and leave him there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Issun135 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 (edited) For when the hordes of crew men arrive The twins were in their element, surrounded by corpus minions Hates at the ready. "This is going to be fun." "Oh yes it is." The Nova twins go nuts, stalking fan style, spinning around each other and decimating any unfortunate corpus who happen to have gotten caught in the scythe's paths. "Wanna do that move?" "H*ll yea!" The Twins interlock their Hates and began to spin each other around, taking shifts to see who could kick the most corpus in the face. With the continued crushing of skulls the Twins stop their wumbo combo to re-orientate themselves. Aran takes out her Miter, Gandraya her Dread, shoulder to shoulder fire slicing rows of corpus in half as each projectile shreds its target in half. Edited May 13, 2014 by Issun135 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Issun135 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 Ansilm looked as Twins removed their helmets and center of his eyes went slightly smaller "Now they dropped a hunk of bomb now..." Ansilm said... Revel, what are you doing, Revel. STHAP Seriously what "bomb" have the twins dropped? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Viper Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 Revel, what are you doing, Revel. STHAP Seriously what "bomb" have the twins dropped? I think he's refering to the story of how Draya was created. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Issun135 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 (edited) I think he's refering to the story of how Draya was created. or is it how Tatasuya and Miho sealed the deal? WHICH ONE IS IT REVEL? Edited May 13, 2014 by Issun135 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CosmoKnight Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 or is it how Tatasuya and Miho sealed the deal? WHICH ONE IS IT REVEL? Revel's asleep, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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