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Commissar Nef Anyo- Boss Re-Design


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A glorious leader- New Bio.

 

Commissar Nef Anyo - Stalking the Shattered Solar Rails of the Mars system Commissar Neff Anyo has a reputation of great battle prowess and tactical genius.

His militant stance on Corpus Doctrine sets him apart from his peers, but like most corpus he is motivated by profit and behind the carefully constructed facade, he is a coward and a psychopath

The stories of the Commissar have him charging head long into battle wielding his mighty sword made from very dense metal that would take ten men to wield.

 

The sword is very well crafted and indeed very heavy but it is more for show, lacking any formal training in sword play Nef's feeble form could not budge it without the assistance of his custom Exo-Suit. While the Suit assist in movement and strength it's hidden function is its cloaking technology.

when confronted in the field Nef Cloaks and lets his loyal Templar's do the dirty work, sniping from the shadows with his Custom Lanka, re-appearing amongst the bodies as if he had been in the thick of battle and emerged unscathed.

 

Neff preaches for a more Militant Corpus and disparages the use of proxies, "Only Flesh and blood can bring true Profit." This is both Ironic and telling as Neff is believed to have a hand in slavery.

The Higher Ranking Members of the Corpus Look down on his boasting and public persona, The Corpus are meant to work through Proxies and influence from the shadows, not plaster their faces and intentions for all to see.

But as he pushes the margins into the green, he is aloud his hunting grounds and the Board turns a blind eye to his questionable business models.

 

A sheep in wolf's clothing - New motives.

 

I want to move away from his current role as dumpster diver to a very real public threat to help get a sense of the people we are trying to protect, no boss outside of the Grineer threaten anyone but the Tenno and our interest making me question our role as guardians.

Neff has a very Public persona and lives to be seen as an Honorable figure worthy of the annuals of history, The public see's him as the face of the Corpus outside their domestic proxies and on the surface he appears respectable if a bit fanatical to his beliefs.

 

However Neff is a dangerous psychotic, Running a massive Slavery ring. The Corpus have no rules against Slavery but it is looked down upon and a Taboo form of Profit making. Even more perverse are his Big Game hunts using un-sold slaves as prey.

 

The Corpus board has learned of these hunts and disgusted as they are, Nef continues to kick considerable profits into Corpus hands.

Frohd Bek takes preemptive action to prevent a PR nightmare. Neff Anyo's operations are made public and in a even more public announcement Nef Anyo is excommunicated from the Corpus for his deplorable actions and labeled a heretic and a criminal, making sure to emphasize the Corpus at large knew nothing of his actions and do not tolerate his kind of Business.

 

This drives Nef over the edge, he rallies his Fanatically loyal Templar's into aggressive action to quell unrest in the region. The Red Veil works to rally and protect the people but it is not enough, the head must be removed and that is where we come in.

 

Blood Sport - Boss battle.

 

In the First stage of the Battle Nef is enraged by his portray as a coward and blinded by pride, attempts to engage the Tenno in Melee cloaking to close the distance while calling for Templar's to assist. He is a heavy hitter but slow and untrained telegraphing his attacks, they are easily dodged but lethal when they connect.

 

This proves to be a mistake, he Cloaks and disappears into his hunting grounds where we peruse him. Inside a long maze like corridor he is perched high above in a sniper's nest. Here we must use cover and our Parkour skills to avoid his aim, indicated by a red laser. His shots are very lethal and can insta-down even tougher Warframes.

 

In the third and final stage we have reached his perch where he behaves the way he does now, cloaking and sniping with his Lanka until he is finally brought down.

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