Nuke ~The Atomic Warframe

[DragonKnightJin]

I'm loving this concept. 2 siblings, teaming up to take down any that would separate them..

Just.. +1.

[(PSN)dening123]

11 hours ago, (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts said:

"The type of person in which ... no enemy ... could escape my wrath."

Yeah, you can't use person and in which. Maybe, something like "The type of person... who no one... could escape my wrath"

Just my 2 cents.

[(XBOX)EternalDrk Mako]

its open to change , 

6 hours ago, (PS4)dening123 said:

Yeah, you can't use person and in which. Maybe, something like "The type of person... who no one... could escape my wrath"

Just my 2 cents.

 

12 hours ago, (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts said:

This would sound better as "The type of person in which ... no enemy ... could escape my wrath."

thanks :D

8 hours ago, DragonKnightJin said:

I'm loving this concept. 2 siblings, teaming up to take down any that would separate them..

Just.. +1.

 

[(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts]

7 hours ago, (PS4)dening123 said:

Yeah, you can't use person and in which. Maybe, something like "The type of person... who no one... could escape my wrath"

Just my 2 cents.

You're probably right, it felt off to me, but I wasn't quite sure how to fix it. 

[(PSN)dening123]

5 hours ago, (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts said:

You're probably right, it felt off to me, but I wasn't quite sure how to fix it. 

No problem.

[(XBOX)EternalDrk Mako]

2 hours ago, (PS4)dening123 said:

No problem.

 

2 hours ago, (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts said:

You're probably right, it felt off to me, but I wasn't quite sure how to fix it. 

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