(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 20 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: (I actually had some dark plans, but i fell asleep) (I'm back on.....was doing homework) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 11 hours ago, (PS4)makrisbrik said: Really gracious. Can the teacher be Mr. John instead? And the principal, the father of Elise, maybe Mr. Fairchild? And the irony about his name is he's never fair in his dealings. Stalker_Cake will control him. (no, and you'll see why now) Teach: Hello, Mr John, i need to speak with you Princ: Is something wrong? Teach: i've been here for a little time now, seen and heard things. especially about you. Princ: What are you talking about? Teach: You can't hide forever... i know what you did, they were there. they want revenge Princ: ...what the hell are you talking about! i demand to know! *teach pulls out a weird looking knife* Teach: you remember those stairs you showed your family... this cannot go unpunished. you knew the rules, you know what would happen to those that shows off the forbidden gate. *princ tries to call the cops, but receives a knife in his chest instead* Teach: it's time to sleep now... you're duty is over and the punishment is complete *retrieves his knife and cleans it* *pulls out a kitchen knife, places it back in his chest and makes it look like a suicide* *leaves and locks the room behind him* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 (edited) 42 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: (no, and you'll see why now) Teach: Hello, Mr John, i need to speak with you Princ: Is something wrong? Teach: i've been here for a little time now, seen and heard things. especially about you. Princ: What are you talking about? Teach: You can't hide forever... i know what you did, they were there. they want revenge Princ: ...what the hell are you talking about! i demand to know! *teach pulls out a weird looking knife* Teach: you remember those stairs you showed your family... this cannot go unpunished. you knew the rules, you know what would happen to those that shows off the forbidden gate. *princ tries to call the cops, but receives a knife in his chest instead* Teach: it's time to sleep now... you're duty is over and the punishment is complete *retrieves his knife and cleans it* *pulls out a kitchen knife, places it back in his chest and makes it look like a suicide* *leaves and locks the room behind him* (Why would a kitchen knife be in a principles office?) Edited January 11, 2017 by (XB1)TheNarrowRoad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 16 minutes ago, (Xbox One)TheNarrowRoad said: (Why would a kitchen knife be in a principles office?) (teach brought it with him) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 Kezun:*runs to the bathroom. And on the way there sees a teacher leave the prinicples office* *doesn't make anything of it* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 Just now, (Xbox One)TheNarrowRoad said: Kezun:*runs to the bathroom. And on the way there sees a teacher leave the prinicples office* *doesn't make anything of it* *the teach locks the door too and leaves* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 2 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: *the teach locks the door too and leaves* Kezun: *slips on a bannana peelwhie walking back to class* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 Just now, (Xbox One)TheNarrowRoad said: Kezun: *slips on a bannana peelwhie walking back to class* *teach* you okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 10 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: *teach* you okay? Kezun:Ow...*gets up and goes to the cafe* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)makrisbrik Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 The plot sounds very good. I know I'm new to role playing and I have a question regarding progression? On page 4, I joined and introduced my character and had given her a clear background of being the daughter of the principal where Kezun goes to school. I did get the stamp of approval. What can I do now to change my character's background to accommodate the story? I just wish when the Host says what I wrote is approved that it was final. I could have made changes on the spot. Otherwise, my contribution would be meaningless if nobody pays attention to it. I might be spending all my time in the RP re-writing my character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 (edited) 3 minutes ago, (PS4)makrisbrik said: The plot sounds very good. I know I'm new to role playing and I have a question regarding progression? On page 4, I joined and introduced my character and had given her a clear background of being the daughter of the principal where Kezun goes to school. I did get the stamp of approval. What can I do now to change my character's background to accommodate the story? I just wish when the Host says what I wrote is approved that it was final. I could have made changes on the spot. Otherwise, my contribution would be meaningless if nobody pays attention to it. I might be spending all my time in the RP re-writing my character? (I thought was final...I thought your characters dad got killed i mean we could rez him if youd like.) Edited January 11, 2017 by (XB1)TheNarrowRoad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 8 minutes ago, (PS4)makrisbrik said: The plot sounds very good. I know I'm new to role playing and I have a question regarding progression? On page 4, I joined and introduced my character and had given her a clear background of being the daughter of the principal where Kezun goes to school. I did get the stamp of approval. What can I do now to change my character's background to accommodate the story? I just wish when the Host says what I wrote is approved that it was final. I could have made changes on the spot. Otherwise, my contribution would be meaningless if nobody pays attention to it. I might be spending all my time in the RP re-writing my character? 5 minutes ago, (Xbox One)TheNarrowRoad said: (I thought was final...I thought your characters dad got killed i mean we could rez him if youd like.) (could be a plot of revenge or something?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)makrisbrik Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 1 minute ago, Stalker_Cake said: (could be a plot of revenge or something?) I thought you meant my character's dad cannot be the principal? Okay, that's good then! I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 3 minutes ago, (PS4)makrisbrik said: I thought you meant my character's dad cannot be the principal? Okay, that's good then! I like it. (thought of a reason of why your characters knew of the door, and certain people don't like that people talk about certain... things...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)makrisbrik Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 2 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: (thought of a reason of why your characters knew of the door, and certain people don't like that people talk about certain... things...) Alright. Sounds exciting progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 Just now, (PS4)makrisbrik said: Alright. Sounds exciting progress. (alright. let's get to the next scene) *about 30 mins after the ''suicide'' police and ambulance sirens can be heard outside the school* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 6 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: (alright. let's get to the next scene) *about 30 mins after the ''suicide'' police and ambulance sirens can be heard outside the school* Kezun:*Thinks: What the hell.....* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 Just now, (Xbox One)TheNarrowRoad said: Kezun:*Thinks: What the hell.....* *they rush to the principal's office* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)makrisbrik Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 *ELise, Isis, Ranxx and Miranda sitting on a bench just outside the classroom hallway* Isis: Something's going on!! Cops and paramedics are running towards the main offices! *a passing student running panting to catch his breath yells to Elise, Isis, and Miranda that something dreadful happened to the principal* Elise: *nervously drops her notebook and pen, stand up and started to run to the hallway towards her dad's office* Daddy?! Elise: WHAT IS GOING ON?! Where's my dad? Policeman: Don't let her in here!! Restrain her and keep her away. Elise: DADDY! LET ME THRU!! Unhand me!! Let ME THRU!! *she catches a glimpse of his father being worked on by paramedics, slumped on the desk with blood all over* OH GOD NO! *Elise screaming and falls to her knees and started crying* NNOOO ohh NNOOOno no...sob..sob...sob.. *Elise escorted away by a policeman accompanied by the school nurse. She's in a daze, shaking and whimpering* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 Just now, (PS4)makrisbrik said: *ELise, Isis, Ranxx and Miranda sitting on a bench just outside the classroom hallway* Isis: Something's going on!! Cops and paramedics are running towards the main offices! *a passing student running panting to catch his breath yells to Elise, Isis, and Miranda that something dreadful happened to the principal* Elise: *nervously drops her notebook and pen, stand up and started to run to the hallway towards her dad's office* Daddy?! Elise: WHAT IS GOING ON?! Where's my dad? Policeman: Don't let her in here!! Restrain her and keep her away. Elise: DADDY! LET ME THRU!! Unhand me!! Let ME THRU!! *she catches a glimpse of his father being worked on by paramedics, slumped on the desk with blood all over* OH GOD NO! *Elise screaming and falls to her knees and started crying* NNOOO ohh NNOOOno no...sob..sob...sob.. *Elise escorted away by a policeman accompanied by the school nurse. She's in a daze, shaking and whimpering* *as she is being taken away she can hear the medics* He's dead, seems like he stabbed himself in the heart somewhere around 20-40 mins ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)makrisbrik Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 *Elise screams!* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stalker_Cake Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 8 minutes ago, (PS4)makrisbrik said: *Elise screams!* *the police man and the nurse tries to calm her down* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)makrisbrik Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 *She's taken to the nurse station and given a sedative to calm her down. She would also be questioned by a detective later on about her father's whereabouts during the day before.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 23 minutes ago, (PS4)makrisbrik said: *ELise, Isis, Ranxx and Miranda sitting on a bench just outside the classroom hallway* Isis: Something's going on!! Cops and paramedics are running towards the main offices! *a passing student running panting to catch his breath yells to Elise, Isis, and Miranda that something dreadful happened to the principal* Elise: *nervously drops her notebook and pen, stand up and started to run to the hallway towards her dad's office* Daddy?! Elise: WHAT IS GOING ON?! Where's my dad? Policeman: Don't let her in here!! Restrain her and keep her away. Elise: DADDY! LET ME THRU!! Unhand me!! Let ME THRU!! *she catches a glimpse of his father being worked on by paramedics, slumped on the desk with blood all over* OH GOD NO! *Elise screaming and falls to her knees and started crying* NNOOO ohh NNOOOno no...sob..sob...sob.. *Elise escorted away by a policeman accompanied by the school nurse. She's in a daze, shaking and whimpering* 22 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: *as she is being taken away she can hear the medics* He's dead, seems like he stabbed himself in the heart somewhere around 20-40 mins ago 14 minutes ago, (PS4)makrisbrik said: *Elise screams!* 4 minutes ago, Stalker_Cake said: *the police man and the nurse tries to calm her down* Kezun:*witness the whole thing* *flees the scene* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)TheNarrowRoad Posted January 11, 2017 Author Share Posted January 11, 2017 *Later that night Kezun uses a phone tracker to track down his phone which was left in his bag....and in doing discovered the location of the raided warehouse* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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