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Shifa

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  1. ... Only Doozy is allowed to write that many words in just one post.

    Doozy is not a god. As a member of the forums, like to speak my mind and am highly irritated when I see a "TL;DR." If you want to start making rules when you don't own the thread, feel free. I will only obey Doozy himself. Doozy is the one who has the final say over the rules and who is off the island. After reading for three hours, I wanted to share what I was thinking. Have any issues with that? Unamused-Bailey.gif

    [edit:] Sorry, Doozy, but admins do trump you in order, but I've never had one talk to me directly. I have to obey the ToS, right?

  2. Oo-kaaay! I finally reached the ending page of this blasted thing! And I was pretty sure my patience was going to give out.

     

    Doozy, do you remember my last question to you? I honestly don't want to back track in the forum to find atm...

    I am not the type of person who can be mad and work through it. In my case, all my worst judgements and drama happen when I'm pissed, which thankfully, isn't often. I... I don't like fighting others if I can help it. I would rather have a small, caring audience than anything else. I'm more content when I am enjoying myself in what I'm doing and going at my own leisure. I am happiest when interacting with people, or creating things. I don't care how long it takes for me to get what I want, I will keep plodding along and achieve it in my own time.

     

    As for all of the stuff that happened when I was gone... HOLEE BUCKETS OF RANDOM CRAP. Cut Doozy a break and let him enjoy his writing, oi!

    I'm really happy to see Banshee and Vauban out having their chance to speak.

    I not surprised about Vauban being black, I'm happy for a change in pace. Haven't you heard of Creoles or Cajuns? French black guys do exist here, but I don't see why one couldn't happen in France itself. And I personally want to give Banshee a hug and give her something nice. It hurts to hold it in.

     

    Nova, please don't remain silent forever. I want to see what heart strings you're going to pull. I know you can be a game-changer. >:3

  3. I wonder if there would be a camouflage ability with it for stealth, and an ability that uses claws and your melee weapon for slash/ bash damage +bleeding?

     

    This is well drawn and thought out. When the final design is inked, could you post it here? I choose the helmet with the orb on the forehead. ^^

  4. Indeed, indeed. I feel so ... little now.

    However, I had fun writing my story and that is what counts, isn't it?

     

    Are there any left? I'd love to have some for breakfast. :)

    I have been considering making consolation friendship bracelets... Don't feel little. *hugs and hands you a big bag of the cranberry raisin almond cookies* You gave it your best. Yours was a close second for me. It was hard to pick one out of all of them. I like the fact you bothered to write an entry at all. :3

  5. we will be having a disney musical karaoke contest for all off the island offenders to win their way back onto the island.

    be warned though, I know all the villain songs by heart and I will judge you harshly if you F*** them up. I even know the villain songs from the off-disney movies, like Great Mouse Detective and Anastasia.

    fffffffffffffffffffffffffff-*takes your gun and aims it at my head* Welp, nice knowing you guys. ;-; Might as well kill me now for all my lameness.

     

    Shifa has to watch A Sound of Music with Banshee....Banshee's fav childhood classic, cuz she's into Sound and stuff.

     

    "Doe, a deer, a female deer.."

    I watched that in high school and loved it. ♥

     

    Shifa, I'm sure you can redeem yourself. Maybe if you bust out into a musical rendition of a disney classic?

    If I can do a butchered rendition of it, sure, but other than that for Karoke, I'm screwed. x.x I can't sing.  ^^^ God, please help me. I love you very much... T-T

     

    Guys... haaaallllppp!

  6. I... I won? Well, damn. My sister has a new choker now!

     

    As for the name, most people call me KF5, or just Will. My screen name is actually my HAM radio call sign, so it is basically random numbers and letters >.>

    Got it! I've labeled the envelope and everything. I just have to wait for my mom to give me a stamp tomorrow morning. (I've lost my Chinese New Year ones I had...)

    I hope your sister likes it. I spent an afternoon making it. There's a total of 16 strands, eight colors used in a color changing half spiral knot along the length of the necklace. The loop and the tie ends are braided for easy removal. ^^ When you see it, you'll see what all of this technical stuff means. :3

  7. After reading the entries, I have picked my winner! Score basically went out the window here. >.<;;

     

    The most engaging story was about a Loki who lost his honor got it back by rescuing the Banshee he failed to rescue.

    CONGRATZ, Mr. KF5AQK! *confetti attack* (Seriously, what do I call you?! Your name sounds like the latest production model PIN of a Moa.)

     

    If you will PM me your mailing address, I will happily send this choker to you in the following week.

  8. Well, I don't really want the choker, but screw it, I'll enter. Expect the PM in an hour. A day or two. Whenever I finish it.

     

    I write slowly :/

     

     

    And as for the story! Liking it so far. Bit more personal than most of the stories I see on here. I'm interested in the tech they use more than anything. The tablet is rather intriguing. I presume it's about the size of an average iPad in modern times, or is it smaller? Could it be mounted on her wrist?

    If you don't like it, and you win it, please give it to someone you care about who would. ♥ I'd hate to see something I spent time to make not being worn.

    I'll add you to my list, however. ^^ Keep in mind that the deadline is 6pm MDT for submissions. (If you dangle a carrot to this, and others complain, I may extend it.)

     

    Yeah, it's from personal experience, but it helps me draw inspiration from the game better.

    As for the tablet, I love to push tech to imaginative limits. It's the size of an iPad yes, but it can hold almost infinite data if you consider how advanced computers could be at that point in time. It's what personal computer would be at that point ideally. Laze has customized it even further (being the videogamer techie she is) to float on it's own by using... some sort of science I can't think of right now-- to hover in the air as well as hologram projector that produces lifelike 3d technology. it also can boost it's owner's shields (if Asclepius actually feels like doing so) and provide raw combat data to give real time predictions of enemy movement.

    No, it can't be mounted on her wrist, and even if it did, it would only get in the way of her Gram.

    As for the AI... They can be liberated from servitude, but I question the thought of whether they really want to kill us at that point or not. Especially if the AI liked it's human creator.

  9. He could be waiting for you.

    Waiting for you to fall.

     

    And you may have a choice--

    Do you defect as well, or fight against him?

     

    What path will you take, Brother Erebus?

    What I have pointed out are only two of many options.

     

    I do not know your brother.

    Tell me, what has he done to betray you?

  10. /-user-Chiron, logged in/

    /booting up OS... … Infinity Fortress is now active./

    /activating Millennium Kingdom crystal firewall and awaiting instructions./

    /-Asclepius- Hm... It seems to be working fine. There's one thing missing--/

    /-user- No, it's fine. I edited out that program and replaced it with a non AI based one. It's tendencies were too destructive./

    /-Asclepius- Good. I couldn't kill Priscilla. Now then, what can I do for you today?/

    /-user- Please open journal.txt and be sure to ready the camera. I really hope that by recording this through my own neural interface and sending it to this tablet will work. I can't carry it with me all of the time.../

    /-Asclepius- You're scared, aren't you? Take me with anyway. I had Laze do some tweaks on this device for me to act freely like a Sentinel. I can't attack, but I'm more than capable of aiding you at anytime. I'm the invincible genius! You can't kill me!!!/

    /-user- That-- that explains how you floated off on your own from my hands. And produced that dragon hologram that is circling around me./

    /-Asclepuius- Focus. Chiron, we're already at the designated wormhole you have created and amplified to allow every one to jump to reach “D Point” and we sure as hell aren't turning back now./

    /-user- Right. Well, here we go./

     

    *the camera starts up, bringing everyone into view before a much larger and more powerful magenta wormhole. A violet Saryn, a red and black Loki, Draconomicon, Maenadae, Laze, and Chiron are standing before it. It appears we are in the Dojo's airlock-- The room is gleaming silver with the stars of space reflecting on everyone's warframes. It's sparse and empty, with a wide curved window revealing the stars in front of them.*

     

    Chiron: This is day--Oh, forget it... As far as I know, time will continue until I die when looking from my own eyes. But for others, it will continue. *her face is fully covered by the silver porcelain helmet that conceals her face, and her energy is a wild storm about her, revealing the stress that's she is in from this*

     

    Black: *The Loki watches her closely much like his own family* It's going to be fun from here,

    Chiron. Only, I'm not getting paid for going AWOL. Who cares? I can--

     

    *the Saryn grabs her husband's Snipertron Vandal free hand in a reassuring grip*

    Saryn:-We can finally do something we want to do with out all of the bullS#&amp;&#036;. Oh, and for the

    camera's sake, I'm Hydra. My husband is Drogra. You shouldn't call him Black.

     

    Chiron: ...Right. *she readies herself and steels her nerve in front of her clanmates* I distanced the wormhole to reach a certain point in time, and a place that is safe from the crossfire between the Corpus, USSC, and current Tenno fighting in the action. If it goes well, we should see Tiburon waiting for us after receiving Asclepius' message.

     

    Draconomicon: There's no guarantee on this, is there?

     

    Maenadae: *she is standing nearest to the opening of the wormhole with Laze and Draconomicon by her side* She has done all calculations and modified her ability as such. I do not doubt her skills. I'm sure Master Banshee should be within Sister Tiburon's reach... She was my leader, and my teacher from when I was young. I know that she is awake.

     

    Laze: … If we find her, we can hopefully find the data we need as well for access to the Grand Archives. The ultimate goal from Chiron's dreams is to create a weapon that can kill the Sentience completely.

     

    Draconomicon: So this is our ultimate goal? That's sounds like something really huge for those of us who were lower ranked in the old war. However, I have no qualms about this. Let's just go.

     

    Chiron: *there is a long silence from her as she waits in the rear of the group* When you're ready, Nomi.

     

    *The group splits into two, with Draconomicon, Drogra, and Laze going first. As they step through the wormhole, you can see them fade into the light in front of them heading to “Point D” from the interspacial render. Maenadae goes next firing an arrow into the hole above where the others entered. Chiron hesitates, her body shaking in the slightest out of anxiety. Laze takes Chiron's hand, and the energy flow in her helm radiates strength into Chiron.*

     

    Laze: It's okay, little sister. After all this, we'll get that nude pic for you, and we'll all throw a huge party for you and your Sensei.

     

    Chiron: *her energy calms somewhat from the chaotic tempest it was before* … Asclepius, end the recording right when we enter. *a deep sigh, and the two go running through*

     

    /-Asclepius- Ending video feed. Preparing field analysis of enemy attack patterns. Shields are at 320% and cloaking ready./

    /-Asclepius- Awright, ya bastards! Time for use to get back what shouldn't be gone!/

    /-System is in energy conservation mode until destination is reached./

  11.  

    You know what? i'll give you a cookie anyway, just because you deserve it!

     

    ninja-bread-cookies.jpg

     

     

    And about the contest... waa i wish i could join (;A;) you wont acept it in spanish, don't you? 

    I need to seriously improve my english to even write something decent... 

     

    YAAAY! COOKIE!

     

    And I can try using my in browser translator, but I have no idea how it would turn out. I still want you to give your honest best effort and write it anyway. The best way to work around this is to keep a thesaurus and a dictionary on hand-- To look up a word and then synonyms. If you understand English structure enough to where you can talk to a native speaker of it with little no hitches, I bet you can write a good essay too. :3

     

    I didn't say you can't have someone edit it, now did I? >w> <w< ^w^~♥

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