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raider22

A Fic For All You Bronies: Weaponized Wubs

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It's like 6 lines long

such story telling

atleast you didn't waste more than 30 seconds of my time

cheers

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Well. I'm... Conflicted. While the actual quality of writing is decent, and the story seems to flow well...

 

 

I don't know. I can't get over the fact that you gave Warframes pony names.

 

 

I like the writing style, but the idea just turns me off.

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Uh..I couldn't keep this feeling when canon ponies put into a cross-over fic with humanoid characters.

It's... Just won't add up on me.

Anyway, just saying. They should just called with their frame names. Frost as Frost, etc. Easier to chew that way. Sub Zero makes me think my Frost will freeze an enemy and pull his/her bones off, or..you know..lots of stuff..

Overall your writing style is good..

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