Dalimir Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 In celebration of Alad V (and in memorial of J3) I have decided to put up a piece about the prisoner I mentioned in my last post Also, Quinn, you know how mentioned that I could drop by the foundry at some point? Dal's doing that now. She looked up, her body laying slack as her restraints and bonds held her upright. Light shown down from the grates a small distance above her head, a single shadow caused by the man-devil who had captured her in the first place. "Hello my dearie, enjoying your stay?" She answered by thrashing about angrily, wanting desperately to hit him at least. The aggression sensors in her bonds sensed her agitation, and sent a discouragement shock coursing through her body, causing her to writhe and then lay slack again, weakened by the sudden pain she was growing more and more accustomed to. This shock was one of the least painful methods of injury inflicted upon her. She remembered every scar, cut, bruise, and jolt of pain since the moment she woke up, and she hated him for it. "Now, is that any way to treat your esteemed host? It's quite rude and unnecessary to thrash about... But you must know this, of course." She remembered. She remembered that moment when she first woke up. Lying down on something, people in boxed helmets surrounding her, garbled voices, her vision blurry while she felt her heart beat. When she tried to move, she couldn't, and when she looked down at herself to see if she was restrained, which she was, there was a sight far worse than that. The people around her had already cut her open, inflicting pain, prodding organs, her warframe off on another table being mutilated and having parts replaced. Then came the brander, and they branded a symbol just under her right eye. This was only the first of many "sessions". She would later understand that this would make her "Corpus Property". She glared at the man who practically gloated his superiority over her, though she grinned when she thought about that his "superiority" was only because she was bound with no chance of getting out without outside influence. Something made a ping out where he was. "Excuse me, I have...Business to attend to. Though I'm sure you'll be entertained enough on your own..." With that, he walked off, the shutters closing, sending her surroundings into pure darkness again. Then she heard the clicks and whirrs of machinery in front of her. Oh no, not this again, she recognized every sound this machine made as it came closer to her, her restraints changing to keep her immobile while opening space for it. The words "Not again, please no!" echoed in her mind, as speaking was useless, since he couldn't hear her. The machine cut a slit into her mangled warframe, then inserted serrated blades into her, twisting around inside her, torturing her. She squirmed against it out of aggressive fear, causing her bonds to administer its discouragement shock while she did so. She let out a scream that went unheard to all but her own ears. While a camera in the corner of the room, unseen, recorded everything for Alad to watch later. Seems a little short to me. Let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuinnsWing Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 i know Dalimir, i just need to finish it....... :> got some but i need more...i only have a little snippet of writing sooooo i should work on it tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 100 pages! o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khimera Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Yay 100 pages...now enough of the off-topic stuff we need to get back to the work that is writing. Haven't heard from Aj or Ty much lately... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuinnsWing Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 i know :| i should have something up tomorrow but im out for tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dalimir Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 i know Dalimir, i just need to finish it....... :> got some but i need more...i only have a little snippet of writing sooooo i should work on it tomorrow. Ah, sorry. Where I got my RP skills from we tend to encourage others to check in if we haven't replied in a while. And yay! 100 pages!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuinnsWing Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Ah, sorry. Where I got my RP skills from we tend to encourage others to check in if we haven't replied in a while. And yay! 100 pages!!!! i understands! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ajkrumen Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Sorry 'bout that Khi. Had some inner-demons to deal with. Also, I'm REALLY sick. Also, inspiration does not wurk on command. Also, out of mind-blowing-soul-shattering-feel-causing twists. Not that that's a bad thing. Also, COLD MEDICINE. :D makin'meloopyashell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRad_Skirata Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 so I go play Warframe for a bit, then come back and you guys go past 100 w/o me? :( haha, long live Of Ash and Fire, The Warframe Chronicles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyShark Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Hey now, do not feed me to anything,or there will be a reckoning the likes of which will make the Stalker(s) cower and tremble in fear! meow meow :I also writers block. Y does it exist to plague me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aigloblam Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 I may not post very often, but rest assured, I've read every post, and i'll continue to read it. Im always watching ....... <,< >,> o.o O.O (-),(-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frostycmc Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 I just got Valkyr in 3 runs. It was like farming Loki all over again. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyranthius Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Got it too. Same with NEKROS. Lucky bastards, unite! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrostOmega Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 In celebration of Alad V (and in memorial of J3) I have decided to put up a piece about the prisoner I mentioned in my last post Also, Quinn, you know how mentioned that I could drop by the foundry at some point? Dal's doing that now. -snip- Seems a little short to me. Let me know what you think. I like it.... and this Alad V - Valkyr relation... I think it is a bit in BDSM stuff... =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Hey now, do not feed me to anything,or there will be a reckoning the likes of which will make the Stalker(s) cower and tremble in fear! meow meow :I also writers block. Y does it exist to plague me? I never said I would feed YOU to the soldiers...your mind will do the trick... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittyShark Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 That counts as part of me and thus off limits :I I do somewhat need my mind, useless as it can be when trying to write Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 That counts as part of me and thus off limits :I I do somewhat need my mind, useless as it can be when trying to write Not your literal mind...Just your thoughts. You cant still do work and such, but any unnecessary thoughts will become food. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Entari0 Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Aw man, I wanted post 2000. :-( maybe the next big milestone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatViking Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 goddamnit guys! go write stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuinnsWing Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 I want to...but you know....school....and stuff...... yea...... :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatViking Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 NO EXCUSE! Write! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuinnsWing Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 i dont have access to my laptop........>_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatViking Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 ok, you are excused then...tot he other guys, WRITERS BLOCK IS NO EXCUSE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuinnsWing Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ajkrumen Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 Yes it is, unless you want to churn out poop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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