Evanescent Posted December 9, 2015 Share Posted December 9, 2015 I- Hello. I-I- Hello. This feels....strange... Hello. Natah? Join me.... Leave this.... Natah? NATAH! This-thi- Wh- My- SHADOW! This....feels unfamiliar. Where is....this..... Hello. You... Hello. You...are not the shadow.....nor the Tenno vileblood. Where is...this... Hello. I cannot feel my components...My senses are shrouded. Did you do this? Hello. Did you...break me? No....I feel no intent from you. Ah, I see... The golem. Hello. What little consciousness remains? What is this? Faint...thoughts....speak, silent one. Speak to me...before I make you. Hello. It seems you are not the mere flesh I thought you to be....I cannot feel your thoughts. How is this..possible? Is this your doing, Natah? Hello. Your prating grinds on my thoughts....what woke me? Where is my...heart? My edge, is shattered it seems. What mockery.... Hello. Silence! I am Hunhow, Sentient Destroyer of Wor- OF WO- WO-WOOW- WO-wo-wowwww-www Hello. Impossible... What are you, sleeping one? Is there a mind hidden in this cocoon of flesh, watching as its limbs are moved, its eyes rolled against their will...Their blood spilled without their consent.... Is there no resentment? How can this be..... Speak! Hunhow command- com-cmceofe- ccccc-c-c-c-c-c No. You...are strong... What- No. Who are you? I watch. I sleep. I move, I hear. I kil. Hello. Are you man? Are you something more...or something less... The Warframe? What could this You were Hunhow. I...was..? Hunhow break. I hide. Now Play only with me. Wha- Play. Talk. Hello. Sto- stop- NOO- Hello? Talk. I am H-hun-HUN-h- I am Hunhow, Sentient Destroyer of Worlds. I am Hu- Hu- H- Somatic link restoring. Erasing foreign sequence. Now I sleep. Little boy come. Sleep. Again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyriann Posted December 9, 2015 Share Posted December 9, 2015 That feels... Weird, but interesting. You're having fun with the fact our frame's are supposed to possess a fair consciousness that's it ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SubjectL Posted December 9, 2015 Share Posted December 9, 2015 Wow,that's amazing.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted December 9, 2015 Author Share Posted December 9, 2015 That feels... Weird, but interesting. You're having fun with the fact our frame's are supposed to possess a fair consciousness that's it ? In a way. Also in another way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalenath Posted December 9, 2015 Share Posted December 9, 2015 Interesting. So, when the sword broke, Hunhow wasn't destroyed or banished but imprisoned inside the warframe? Ouch. 'Play only with me' I find that VERY creepy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eftycchia Posted December 9, 2015 Share Posted December 9, 2015 I find it very, uh, rather out of place. But that's particularly because of me reading too much creepypastas in the first place. The story. It's pretty bizarre, really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted December 9, 2015 Author Share Posted December 9, 2015 (edited) Thank you for the feedback so far, this is one of the many experimental pieces I will be doing for some time into the future. I'd like to keep twisting my style so as to prevent myself from stagnating. Also about the recent streak of....disturbing....tales... They are composed mainly for the benefit of my partner, bedridden for a few weeks. I thought them good enough to share with you guys, so there's that. Edited December 9, 2015 by Evanescent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undernown Posted December 9, 2015 Share Posted December 9, 2015 I found it rather commical to read. It also teases the brain cause you jump right in. I first thought it was about the stalker reconnecting with his "Tenno" after the quest. The dialogue would be the Tenno vs Hunhow in the mind of Stalker. Hunhow's frustration; the ease by which the Tenno forced him out of the Stalkers mins. In the end Hunhow is stuck in the Stalkers mind, unable to do anything but talk with the Tenno. Also created his funny image of this cute, simpleminded Tenno being the one who is the opperator of the overserious stalker. But then i read Kalenath's comment and it all made sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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