Maellon Posted March 11, 2018 Share Posted March 11, 2018 (edited) Name: Sanan Sanan is a Nanite controlling frame. His creator has send him on a expedition far away. But than as he came back his creators weren't around. Only low creatures lived there, where his creators lived. He started to search for them, to find out what happened to them and killed each one of this low creatures that he saw on his way. The Corpus ask the Tenno for help to stop this . Stats (at lvl 30) >Armor: 250 >Shields: 0 >Health: 1325 >Energy: 225 >Speed: 1.0 >Passive: Kill a enemy that is efect by a ability from Sannan with a Headshot give you 20% from you consumed ammo back. >First Ability Cost : 25 Energy on cast. Sends a small swarm of Nanites to an enemy which deals 100/250/350/500 Corrosive damage with a 50% status chance . A Corrosive status steals Armor from the Enemys. 50% of the Armore that the enemy lose for 10/15/20/25 seconds. >Second Ability Cost: 30 Energy on cast. Nanites invading your self and Allies to Regenerate 5% of the max health for 5/7/10/15 seconds within a range of 10/15/20/25 m. >Third Ability In the Projektiles some Nanites. Headshots have a 100% loot chance for 10/15/20/25 seconds. The enemies must stand within the ability range of 10/12/15/18m. Somtimes drop by the Loot armore pices that can also Taken from the Allies. +5Base Armor . >Fourth Ability Cost: Energy per gunshot 5 Critical hits increase multishot. +5% per loot with the Third Ability with a max of 100%/125%/175%/250% Edited March 14, 2018 by Maellon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALEKS_D_RAVEN Posted March 11, 2018 Share Posted March 11, 2018 Passive is a good one but still should extend this naninte creating/rebulding idea even more. 1st ability is good indicate that you "feel" the idea of what nanites are capeable, but they are capable of duing more than just Corrosive damage. Imagine nanites invading "human" flesh - thas kinda core idea behind Viral damage. Also any Nanite Cloud could be considered as able to do Gas Damage. I would change second ability to Nanites invading Allies Frames and granting them Buffs like Armor regeneration and Armor generating aura using every metal derivied from enemy. 3rd ability doesn`t fit to core idea at all, and with 4th one shows that you kinda ran out of ideas. 4th ability to much depend on critical chance of weapons limiting the variations of potential gear. 4th ability should be the 3rd one, and be able to generate Multishot based on how much metal you scraped from enemies via Nanites. The real 4th ability is up to you, try research nanites and nanomachines in movies and books. Maybe creating Nano-based object like dagger storms with 100% slash status?? That is my twist on that Nanomancer Frame idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maellon Posted March 11, 2018 Author Share Posted March 11, 2018 (edited) Am 11.3.2018 um 17:50 schrieb ALEKS_D_RAVEN: Passive is a good one but still should extend this naninte creating/rebulding idea even more. 1st ability is good indicate that you "feel" the idea of what nanites are capeable, but they are capable of duing more than just Corrosive damage. Imagine nanites invading "human" flesh - thas kinda core idea behind Viral damage. Also any Nanite Cloud could be considered as able to do Gas Damage. I would change second ability to Nanites invading Allies Frames and granting them Buffs like Armor regeneration and Armor generating aura using every metal derivied from enemy. 3rd ability doesn`t fit to core idea at all, and with 4th one shows that you kinda ran out of ideas. 4th ability to much depend on critical chance of weapons limiting the variations of potential gear. 4th ability should be the 3rd one, and be able to generate Multishot based on how much metal you scraped from enemies via Nanites. The real 4th ability is up to you, try research nanites and nanomachines in movies and books. Maybe creating Nano-based object like dagger storms with 100% slash status?? That is my twist on that Nanomancer Frame idea. Thanks for the Feedback I will look how i can this change . Edited March 14, 2018 by Maellon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cephalon_Blue Posted March 14, 2018 Share Posted March 14, 2018 I made concept art for something like this quite some time ago. This is what i drew: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9u1XKZtrlkoMkNNTWttRWZ6Ync Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maellon Posted March 14, 2018 Author Share Posted March 14, 2018 vor 59 Minuten schrieb BlueLTO: I made concept art for something like this quite some time ago. This is what i drew: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9u1XKZtrlkoMkNNTWttRWZ6Ync :D Yes this is also a Naniten Frame Idee :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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