One Minute Trailer. Want Opinions!

[Ibro156]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qR4v46HUHh0

 

This is my first trailer, so be generally honest to me. I like to know where I have to improve. :)

 

 

Edited July 11, 2015 by Ibro156

[Wurdyburd]

To be blunt:

-trailer for what? Videogames in general?

->the games don't seem to have a common theme, there's fantasy, historical, and then warframe randomly in there

-there doesn't seem to be a lot of editing involved outside of the opening smoke effect [which was good] and fade-ins and fade-outs.

-the music doesn't add much to the trailer, outside of filling the need to have music at all

->the video doesn't sync with the music or play off of it in any way that would allow the music to bring something to the table

[(XBOX)Grihaly]

You call it 'GameCrash', but it's not about Warframe, stop lying!

[lightdragon64]

is this a trailer for your channel? all i can say is that it is alright, but with some tweaking and different music it can be a lot better

[Snydrex]

Ask and thy shall receive.

 

The main problem with this is that this isn't a trailer, really. It's more of a montage.

 

This is due to the fact that whatever you're trying to show with your trailer is not clear because this is essentially simple clips and cutscenes over a song, and it leaves me confused as to what this is a trailer for.

 

Basically, it needs direction.

 

For example, if you're making a Let's Play channel, I'd recommend throwing in some of your dialogue/ more gameplay clips that preferably you have recorded yourself playing.

 

If you're making reviews, tell people what they should expect to hear when it comes to your direction in games.

 

I mean, the video itself is decent, especially in cleanliness.

 

I hope I helped.

Edited July 11, 2015 by Snydrex