Darealslenderman Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 (edited) Hello fellow tenno here is a Derelick skin. Vote now on steam http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=543708923 Final Product Alt Color Schemes Old Update 3 Alt Color Scheme(Color Mask) Old Update 2 Color Variations(color mask) Old content (Update 1 and Initial Upload) old Default Color Scheme Note the skin has color masks. Color Variations Update 1 (glowing patterns idea)(I can do a different effect to the front(more puzzel like orokin patterns if the glowing doesn't take out the blandness of the old design). Edited October 29, 2015 by Darealslenderman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theRCB Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 Damn that's sick. It's like a puzzle. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vargras Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 The front looks rather lazy in comparison to the back, where the bulk of the work seems to have been done. Looks like you just kinda threw a texture/pattern on the front. It really doesn't look all that great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)General D1rtbag Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 With what Vargas said. It's a little bland in the front. They to make the front look like the back more. But I like the concept of seeing a broken looking Excal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darealslenderman Posted October 27, 2015 Author Share Posted October 27, 2015 (edited) Thanks for the feedback, The front looks rather lazy in comparison to the back, where the bulk of the work seems to have been done. Looks like you just kinda threw a texture/pattern on the front. It really doesn't look all that great. With what Vargas said. It's a little bland in the front. They to make the front look like the back more. But I like the concept of seeing a broken looking Excal. What should be added to the front then, some more old orokin materials? different patterns? Dirt/grim? scratches? Glowing orokin patterns? Edited October 27, 2015 by Darealslenderman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theRCB Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 Thanks for the feedback, What should be added to the front then, some more old orokin materials? different patterns? Dirt/grim? scratches? Glowing orokin patterns? YES! Cuz the back was pretty epic. So just do that all over the place, but keep your puzzle idea I like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darealslenderman Posted October 27, 2015 Author Share Posted October 27, 2015 Not sure if this is much better, just an idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darealslenderman Posted October 27, 2015 Author Share Posted October 27, 2015 (edited) Added new texture Edited October 27, 2015 by Darealslenderman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AKS1RK Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 very nice ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dead10ck Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 What should be added to the front then, some more old orokin materials? different patterns? Dirt/grim? scratches? Glowing orokin patterns? It seems a little cluttered, maybe you could move the energy to certain parts of the skin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OniDax Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 (edited) it doesnt really look much like the derelict... Imo, though, fewer cracks would be better, and some that run alon the existing contours of the base texture. Edited October 27, 2015 by AntoineFlemming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IANOBW Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 I dig it. Really like the orange energy scheme, too - Volcanic Excalibur is something I never knew I wanted until now. +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsahiOka Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 The updated version looks awesome! +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)gnashermaster97 Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 (edited) The front chestpiece looks likeit lacks depth in between the armor plates, the energy seems to clutter up some parts, otherwise i love it! Definetly would buy Edited October 27, 2015 by (XB1)gnashermaster97 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darealslenderman Posted October 28, 2015 Author Share Posted October 28, 2015 (edited) Updated Skin, added cleaner emissive map, added better texture, (reapplied metallic specular map, made infested material look weird). Made primed looking areas more primed looking. Made Orokin chestplate texture/sigil have depth Edited October 28, 2015 by Darealslenderman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)arshia1234 Posted October 28, 2015 Share Posted October 28, 2015 I gotta say I love the withered look of the skin, (absolutely love what you did with his back and fingers) although I don't know how I feel about the "electric" pattern. In my personal opinion, I would suggest you try to make it look more broken down and like it's actually been on a derelict ship for a long time. Overall, I have to say the skin looks amazing, keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darealslenderman Posted October 28, 2015 Author Share Posted October 28, 2015 (edited) Final? Update added a better emissive map once more, it is more focused on the texture. Has a better brightness. Edited October 28, 2015 by Darealslenderman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GStonez Posted November 6, 2015 Share Posted November 6, 2015 We should be able to buy alternate energy styles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eneroth Posted November 23, 2015 Share Posted November 23, 2015 This is a very interesting concept and u got a pretty nice work on the back. The front... Still feels a little bit cluttered with all those blue lines... If you manage to balance the "noise"... this is one skin I would love to have and prolly make me play excal a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unknow0059 Posted January 7, 2016 Share Posted January 7, 2016 It looks really bad. People have a bad taste/don't want to hurt your feelings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsurus Posted January 7, 2016 Share Posted January 7, 2016 (edited) It looks really bad. People have a bad taste/don't want to hurt your feelings. If you are going to criticise people's work negatively, then please add some feedback that the author can work with. It makes it easier for them if they have something to go on other than "looks bad". Thank you. Edited January 7, 2016 by Larsurus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Little-Cunny Posted February 4, 2016 Share Posted February 4, 2016 I think I can do away with the energy patterns on the front. As an alternative, lessen the energy patterns on the front and make it more streamlined (kinda like the ones on the back) and add more infested mass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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