Deshiel Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 (edited) Like, be my fan kind of love? :) here is a bonus video but open it only if you liked the track Edited December 28, 2015 by Deshiel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zhoyzu Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 im sorry i couldnt. my eyes!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deshiel Posted December 28, 2015 Author Share Posted December 28, 2015 im sorry i couldnt. my eyes!!!! It's ok. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeyoface Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 I like it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deshiel Posted December 28, 2015 Author Share Posted December 28, 2015 I like it. ^_^ I'm glad. You can grab it right here :) http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/608074 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeyoface Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 I'm glad. You can grab it right here :) http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/608074 Ooooooh, noice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Datsher Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 It's ok, but don't use the rainbow filter anymore. That's just wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Kyubey- Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 You should probably give credit to the artist who made the gif. It's only fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deshiel Posted December 28, 2015 Author Share Posted December 28, 2015 You should probably give credit to the artist who made the gif. It's only fair. I don't even know who made it. It's one of those gifs that some people grab and upload them in thier gif collections, without any traces back. I could credit google images for providing the search bar tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eidolon_Slayer Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 ... I think you may have taken a step back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deshiel Posted December 28, 2015 Author Share Posted December 28, 2015 ... I think you may have taken a step back. I don't understand :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eidolon_Slayer Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 (edited) Some notes from my opinions [listened to electro-based music for 8 years] from what I'm comparing [theirs to yours] -Too much of a contrast between darker and lighter melody - in a bad way (the transitions weren't good due to uninteresting melody). -Some melodies don't transition well with others, i.e. (0:40-1:25 + others that weren't mentioned) -Some melodies are boring, and even worse when they're predictable etc. (0:40-0:50), (2:55-3:50) -Uninteresting start-off -It seems you were trying to tell a story with how its laid out, but it didn't translate well - Amy sounded like she has ADD. Not sure if its youtube's fault (even at 1080p) for lack of bass, or that you never made it heavy enough. You may do better if you used other sounds that weren't used in your other work. There were some pro's, so it wasn't completely bad. Edited December 28, 2015 by RevivedEdgeLord Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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