(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted June 26, 2016 Author Share Posted June 26, 2016 Just now, BlackDiamondAce said: good luck Thanks, you can look forward to a new original concept by me and a lore entry for Mako. Now my only problem is determining if I should do them now, or wait until after a few hours of videogames. Hmmm... what should I choose? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDiamondAce Posted June 26, 2016 Share Posted June 26, 2016 1 minute ago, (XB1)Awsome Ethan927 said: Thanks, you can look forward to a new original concept by me and a lore entry for Mako. Now my only problem is determining if I should do them now, or wait until after a few hours of videogames. Hmmm... what should I choose? idk, daily just reset for me. so wanna do a few games together? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted June 26, 2016 Author Share Posted June 26, 2016 1 minute ago, BlackDiamondAce said: idk, daily just reset for me. so wanna do a few games together? I'm not used to the PC controls yet, so no for now, but thanks for the offer. I think I'm just going to work on my concept for a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDiamondAce Posted June 26, 2016 Share Posted June 26, 2016 1 minute ago, (XB1)Awsome Ethan927 said: I'm not used to the PC controls yet, so no for now, but thanks for the offer. I think I'm just going to work on my concept for a bit. alright, just rememeber: I main PC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)EternalDrk Mako Posted July 3, 2016 Share Posted July 3, 2016 NYX LORE edit Spoiler Classified Orokin Records Psychological Evaluation, session #20: Subject: A02 Recording Start: O: Chief Scientific Officer seated before the subject H: Head of the Zariman project S: Subject A02 in restraints wearing a strange helmet O: "lets start as before, what is your name subject A02?" S: "......." (no reply) O: " We have brought you here just to ask you a few questions A02. After you have answered everything asked, you are free to leave. Do you comply?" S: "....Yes....." O: alright lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. .....What do you do?" S: " ....make him give it to me...." O: "Oh, how so?" S: "by entering his mind, and making him" O: "Hmm.... interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?" S: "....... I control his thoughts, so why wouldn't he give it to me?" O: "Control his thoughts? Well, you are creative, I'll give you that. O: Scenario two: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?" S: "simple, make the beast mine and proceed on." O: "Why?" S: "Because then there would be no threat to myself, the beast would fight for me, it would be illogical to willingly allow harm to myself." O: "Alright ...... lets continue." O: "scenario three: there is an army, they oppose you and have come to hurt you. What do you do?" S: ".... the soldier's minds are weak, I manipulate them, make them see each other as the enemy and they will kill each other ." O: "How would you do that?!" S: "The same way I got the apple, by entering their minds and force them to do so." O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the others questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave...." S: "......." O: I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?" S: "Simple, I sit and focus my mind and gather up its energies around me, because I know that he cannot harm me he does not. then i unleash the energy back and slay him..." O: "......." O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I think I understand why... you are free to go." S: (Subject is escorted out by the guards) H: "How goes the Sessions?." O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?" H: "Tell me you findings." O: "On the subject?" H: Yes O: "Well she doesn't seem ...mentally stable, she seems to have no grasp of realistic scenarios and proceeds to continue with these fictitious mind power scenarios" H: "Perfect ..... clear her for the project." O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why!?" H: " Simple...the project seeks to redefine what is fiction and what is reality. Clear her for the project and bring in the next subject" O: ".....yes project leader ..." END RECORDING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDiamondAce Posted July 3, 2016 Share Posted July 3, 2016 nice mako. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted July 4, 2016 Author Share Posted July 4, 2016 On July 2, 2016 at 5:20 PM, (XB1)EternalDrk Mako said: NYX LORE edit Reveal hidden contents Classified Orokin Records Psychological Evaluation, session #20: Subject: A02 Recording Start: O: Chief Scientific Officer seated before the subject H: Head of the Zariman project S: Subject A02 in restraints wearing a strange helmet O: "lets start as before, what is your name subject A02?" S: "......." (no reply) O: " We have brought you here just to ask you a few questions A02. After you have answered everything asked, you are free to leave. Do you comply?" S: "....Yes....." O: alright lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. .....What do you do?" S: " ....make him give it to me...." O: "Oh, how so?" S: "by entering his mind, and making him" O: "Hmm.... interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?" S: "....... I control his thoughts, so why wouldn't he give it to me?" O: "Control his thoughts? Well, you are creative, I'll give you that. O: Scenario two: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?" S: "simple, make the beast mine and proceed on." O: "Why?" S: "Because then there would be no threat to myself, the beast would fight for me, it would be illogical to willingly allow harm to myself." O: "Alright ...... lets continue." O: "scenario three: there is an army, they oppose you and have come to hurt you. What do you do?" S: ".... the soldier's minds are weak, I manipulate them, make them see each other as the enemy and they will kill each other ." O: "How would you do that?!" S: "The same way I got the apple, by entering their minds and force them to do so." O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the others questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave...." S: "......." O: I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?" S: "Simple, I sit and focus my mind and gather up its energies around me, because I know that he cannot harm me he does not. then i unleash the energy back and slay him..." O: "......." O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I think I understand why... you are free to go." S: (Subject is escorted out by the guards) H: "How goes the Sessions?." O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?" H: "Tell me you findings." O: "On the subject?" H: Yes O: "Well she doesn't seem ...mentally stable, she seems to have no grasp of realistic scenarios and proceeds to continue with these fictitious mind power scenarios" H: "Perfect ..... clear her for the project." O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why!?" H: " Simple...the project seeks to redefine what is fiction and what is reality. Clear her for the project and bring in the next subject" O: ".....yes project leader ..." END RECORDING Thanks Mako, I'll need to borrow my Gramp's computer, but I'll start making edits soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted July 5, 2016 Author Share Posted July 5, 2016 On July 2, 2016 at 5:20 PM, (XB1)EternalDrk Mako said: NYX LORE edit Reveal hidden contents Classified Orokin Records Psychological Evaluation, session #20: Subject: A02 Recording Start: O: Chief Scientific Officer seated before the subject H: Head of the Zariman project S: Subject A02 in restraints wearing a strange helmet O: "lets start as before, what is your name subject A02?" S: "......." (no reply) O: " We have brought you here just to ask you a few questions A02. After you have answered everything asked, you are free to leave. Do you comply?" S: "....Yes....." O: alright lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. .....What do you do?" S: " ....make him give it to me...." O: "Oh, how so?" S: "by entering his mind, and making him" O: "Hmm.... interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?" S: "....... I control his thoughts, so why wouldn't he give it to me?" O: "Control his thoughts? Well, you are creative, I'll give you that. O: Scenario two: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?" S: "simple, make the beast mine and proceed on." O: "Why?" S: "Because then there would be no threat to myself, the beast would fight for me, it would be illogical to willingly allow harm to myself." O: "Alright ...... lets continue." O: "scenario three: there is an army, they oppose you and have come to hurt you. What do you do?" S: ".... the soldier's minds are weak, I manipulate them, make them see each other as the enemy and they will kill each other ." O: "How would you do that?!" S: "The same way I got the apple, by entering their minds and force them to do so." O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the others questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave...." S: "......." O: I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?" S: "Simple, I sit and focus my mind and gather up its energies around me, because I know that he cannot harm me he does not. then i unleash the energy back and slay him..." O: "......." O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I think I understand why... you are free to go." S: (Subject is escorted out by the guards) H: "How goes the Sessions?." O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?" H: "Tell me you findings." O: "On the subject?" H: Yes O: "Well she doesn't seem ...mentally stable, she seems to have no grasp of realistic scenarios and proceeds to continue with these fictitious mind power scenarios" H: "Perfect ..... clear her for the project." O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why!?" H: " Simple...the project seeks to redefine what is fiction and what is reality. Clear her for the project and bring in the next subject" O: ".....yes project leader ..." END RECORDING So I just finished reading it, and it was really good. Of course I'm going to build off it even more, but it will sound better after incorporating some of these edits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)EternalDrk Mako Posted July 5, 2016 Share Posted July 5, 2016 as with all things two heads are better then one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted August 28, 2016 Author Share Posted August 28, 2016 I'm officially back from the dead. Oh, I added an entry for Frost, I don't know if anyone will like it, but I had an idea and just kind of rolled with it. I hope you guys do in fact enjoy the new entry, and I plan on doing the next one soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)EternalDrk Mako Posted September 3, 2016 Share Posted September 3, 2016 ill get to work on some of these xD times slipping by me lately Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted September 3, 2016 Author Share Posted September 3, 2016 Just now, (XB1)EternalDrk Mako said: ill get to work on some of these xD times slipping by me lately Oh thanks, take your time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted September 24, 2016 Author Share Posted September 24, 2016 Added lore for Mako's Gremlyn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)dening123 Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) Because I feel cocky, here's a halloween themed version Of Nyx. Spoiler Classified 010k11 Records: Psychological Evaluation, Case #20: O: Chief Scientific Officer H: Head of Project Zariman S: Subject (TM 03N - 127H) Recording Start: O: "What is your name?" S: ... O: "Alright then, suit yourself. I am the Chief Scientific Officer, I have brought you here just to ask you a few questions. After you have answered everything I ask, you are free to leave when you feel like it. Now then, lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. What do you do?" S: "I'd make him hand it over." O: "Oh how so?" S: "By simply commanding him to do so." O: "Hmm, interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?" S: "No, I control his thoughts, his every whim, why wouldn't he give it to me?" O: "Control his thoughts? Well, you are creative, I'll give you that. Next scenario: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?" S: "I run back and pick up a spike. A creature's mind is fragile. I'd make it impale itself upon the spike, till it dies in a pool of it's own blood and organs" O: "W-why would you do such a thing?" He says, getting increasingly unsettled. S: "Because the beast deserves it. It needs to know who is the master and who is simply the pet." O: "A-alright, w-well lets continue. Third scenario: there is an army, they oppose everything you believe in, they have come to hurt you. What do you do?" S: "The soldier's minds are weak, so I manipulate them, I make them kill their friends and allies. I watch the few left alive after the massacre weep over their fallen brethren and simply laugh as I make them swallow lead. " O: "How would you do that?!" S: "They same way I got the apple, by simply commanding them to do so." O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the ones I have questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave shared. I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?" S: "Simple, I sit and I meditate because I know that he cannot harm me, I am above his comprehension, he is merely stardust compared to my cosmos. I will shred him, limb from limb until he begs for mercy so loud that his throat burns with unspeakable words." O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I understand why. Stay here." S: (Officer leaves the room) H: "Hello, Officer." O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?" H: "Tell me you findings." O: "On the subject? Well she doesn't seem completely mentally stable. She also may possibly have violent dementia. I don't think it'd be safe to clear her" H: "Nonsense, clear her for the project." O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why?" H: "That, my friend is too much for you to understand. Now, if you want to keep your Occupation, clear her for the project and bring in the next subject." O: Looking disheartened, he turns back into the room to see the girl casually walking out of it. S: "I told you, I'd simply make him hand the apple over" Edited September 24, 2016 by (PS4)dening123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted September 24, 2016 Author Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) 1 hour ago, (PS4)dening123 said: Because I feel cocky, here's a halloween themed version Of Nyx. Reveal hidden contents Classified 010k11 Records: Psychological Evaluation, Case #20: O: Chief Scientific Officer H: Head of Project Zariman S: Subject (TM 03N - 127H) Recording Start: O: "What is your name?" S: ... O: "Alright then, suit yourself. I am the Chief Scientific Officer, I have brought you here just to ask you a few questions. After you have answered everything I ask, you are free to leave when you feel like it. Now then, lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. What do you do?" S: "I'd make him hand it over." O: "Oh how so?" S: "By simply commanding him to do so." O: "Hmm, interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?" S: "No, I control his thoughts, his every whim, why wouldn't he give it to me?" O: "Control his thoughts? Well, you are creative, I'll give you that. Next scenario: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?" S: "I run back and pick up a spike. A creature's mind is fragile. I'd make it impale itself upon the spike, till it dies in a pool of it's own blood and organs" O: "W-why would you do such a thing?" He says, getting increasingly unsettled. S: "Because the beast deserves it. It needs to know who is the master and who is simply the pet." O: "A-alright, w-well lets continue. Third scenario: there is an army, they oppose everything you believe in, they have come to hurt you. What do you do?" S: "The soldier's minds are weak, so I manipulate them, I make them kill their friends and allies. I watch the few left alive after the massacre weep over their fallen brethren and simply laugh as I make them swallow lead. " O: "How would you do that?!" S: "They same way I got the apple, by simply commanding them to do so." O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the ones I have questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave shared. I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?" S: "Simple, I sit and I meditate because I know that he cannot harm me, I am above his comprehension, he is merely stardust compared to my cosmos. I will shred him, limb from limb until he begs for mercy so loud that his throat burns with unspeakable words." O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I understand why. Stay here." S: (Officer leaves the room) H: "Hello, Officer." O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?" H: "Tell me you findings." O: "On the subject? Well she doesn't seem completely mentally stable. She also may possibly have violent dementia. I don't think it'd be safe to clear her" H: "Nonsense, clear her for the project." O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why?" H: "That, my friend is too much for you to understand. Now, if you want to keep your Occupation, clear her for the project and bring in the next subject." O: Looking disheartened, he turns back into the room to see the girl casually walking out of it. S: "I told you, I'd simply make him hand the apple over" Not really a Halloween version, but very good none the less. I'm constantly looking to improve my craft, so I'll be taking some pointer from this Edited September 24, 2016 by (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)MrDemigod81 Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 It reminded me when I played City of Heroes back in the day you can make your own lore up for your own character. Sadly I wish I can give my own Warframe their own name how the stalker has his own name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted September 24, 2016 Author Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) 6 hours ago, (PS4)BIGHEBREW said: It reminded me when I played City of Heroes back in the day you can make your own lore up for your own character. Sadly I wish I can give my own Warframe their own name how the stalker has his own name Well, I believe you can at least name your load out, but that's not quite the same as naming the Warframe itself though. Edited September 24, 2016 by (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted September 25, 2016 Author Share Posted September 25, 2016 Added Ash lore. By the way, any constructive criticism is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDiamondAce Posted October 17, 2016 Share Posted October 17, 2016 how goes it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted October 17, 2016 Author Share Posted October 17, 2016 3 hours ago, BlackDiamondAce said: how goes it pretty good, just been busy on. umm, personal projects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDiamondAce Posted October 17, 2016 Share Posted October 17, 2016 Cool. I'm at university studying 3D animation and game design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted October 17, 2016 Author Share Posted October 17, 2016 16 hours ago, BlackDiamondAce said: Cool. I'm at university studying 3D animation and game design. I want to do that too, as well as programming and creative writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDiamondAce Posted October 18, 2016 Share Posted October 18, 2016 (edited) 7 hours ago, (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts said: I want to do that too, as well as programming and creative writing. I do novel writing in free time, but my free time is dedicated to playing warframe or exercising to destress. Anyway, I had an idea for an operation with corpus. Edited October 18, 2016 by BlackDiamondAce Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(XBOX)kr1sPYDonuts Posted October 18, 2016 Author Share Posted October 18, 2016 16 hours ago, BlackDiamondAce said: Anyway, I had an idea for an operation with corpus. So do I, but what's yours. Also, what do you think of the newest entries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDiamondAce Posted October 19, 2016 Share Posted October 19, 2016 A subsersive corpus executive wants a few opponents removed to ensure a business merger that will aid Darvo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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