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Thanks, you can look forward to a new original concept by me and a lore entry for Mako. Now my only problem is determining if I should do them now, or wait until after a few hours of videogames. Hmmm... what should I choose? 

idk, daily just reset for me.  so wanna do a few games together?

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NYX LORE edit

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Classified Orokin Records

Psychological Evaluation, session #20:

Subject: A02

Recording Start:

O: Chief Scientific Officer   seated before the subject

H: Head of the Zariman project

S: Subject A02 in restraints wearing a strange helmet

O: "lets start as before, what is your name subject A02?"

S: "......." (no reply)

O: "  We have brought you here just to ask you a few questions A02. After you have answered everything asked, you are free to leave. Do you comply?"

S: "....Yes....."

O: alright lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. .....What do you do?"

S: " ....make him give it to me...."

O: "Oh, how so?"

S: "by entering his mind, and making him"

O: "Hmm.... interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?"

S: "....... I control his thoughts, so why wouldn't he give it to me?"

O: "Control his thoughts?  Well, you are creative, I'll give you that.

O: Scenario two: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?"

S: "simple, make the beast mine and proceed on."

O: "Why?"

S: "Because then there would be no threat to myself, the beast would fight for me, it would be illogical to willingly allow harm to myself."

O: "Alright ...... lets continue." 

O: "scenario three: there is an army, they oppose  you and have come to hurt you. What do you do?"

S: ".... the soldier's minds are weak,  I manipulate them, make them see each other as the enemy and they will kill each other ." 

O: "How would you do that?!"

S: "The same way I got the apple, by entering their minds and force them to do so."

O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the others questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave...."

S: "......."

O: I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?"

S: "Simple, I sit and focus my mind and gather up its energies around me, because I know that he cannot harm me he does not. then i unleash the energy back and slay him..."

O: "......."

O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I think I understand why... you are free to go."

S: (Subject is escorted out by the guards)

H: "How goes the Sessions?."

O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?"

H: "Tell me you findings."

O: "On the subject?"

H: Yes

O: "Well she doesn't seem ...mentally stable, she seems to have no grasp of realistic scenarios and proceeds to continue with these fictitious mind power scenarios"

H: "Perfect ..... clear her for the project."

O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why!?"

H: " Simple...the project seeks to redefine what is fiction and what is reality. Clear her for the project and bring in the next subject"

O: ".....yes project leader ..."

END RECORDING 

 

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On July 2, 2016 at 5:20 PM, (XB1)EternalDrk Mako said:

NYX LORE edit

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Classified Orokin Records

Psychological Evaluation, session #20:

Subject: A02

Recording Start:

O: Chief Scientific Officer   seated before the subject

H: Head of the Zariman project

S: Subject A02 in restraints wearing a strange helmet

O: "lets start as before, what is your name subject A02?"

S: "......." (no reply)

O: "  We have brought you here just to ask you a few questions A02. After you have answered everything asked, you are free to leave. Do you comply?"

S: "....Yes....."

O: alright lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. .....What do you do?"

S: " ....make him give it to me...."

O: "Oh, how so?"

S: "by entering his mind, and making him"

O: "Hmm.... interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?"

S: "....... I control his thoughts, so why wouldn't he give it to me?"

O: "Control his thoughts?  Well, you are creative, I'll give you that.

O: Scenario two: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?"

S: "simple, make the beast mine and proceed on."

O: "Why?"

S: "Because then there would be no threat to myself, the beast would fight for me, it would be illogical to willingly allow harm to myself."

O: "Alright ...... lets continue." 

O: "scenario three: there is an army, they oppose  you and have come to hurt you. What do you do?"

S: ".... the soldier's minds are weak,  I manipulate them, make them see each other as the enemy and they will kill each other ." 

O: "How would you do that?!"

S: "The same way I got the apple, by entering their minds and force them to do so."

O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the others questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave...."

S: "......."

O: I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?"

S: "Simple, I sit and focus my mind and gather up its energies around me, because I know that he cannot harm me he does not. then i unleash the energy back and slay him..."

O: "......."

O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I think I understand why... you are free to go."

S: (Subject is escorted out by the guards)

H: "How goes the Sessions?."

O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?"

H: "Tell me you findings."

O: "On the subject?"

H: Yes

O: "Well she doesn't seem ...mentally stable, she seems to have no grasp of realistic scenarios and proceeds to continue with these fictitious mind power scenarios"

H: "Perfect ..... clear her for the project."

O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why!?"

H: " Simple...the project seeks to redefine what is fiction and what is reality. Clear her for the project and bring in the next subject"

O: ".....yes project leader ..."

END RECORDING 

 

Thanks Mako, I'll need to borrow my Gramp's computer, but I'll start making edits soon

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On July 2, 2016 at 5:20 PM, (XB1)EternalDrk Mako said:

NYX LORE edit

  Reveal hidden contents

Classified Orokin Records

Psychological Evaluation, session #20:

Subject: A02

Recording Start:

O: Chief Scientific Officer   seated before the subject

H: Head of the Zariman project

S: Subject A02 in restraints wearing a strange helmet

O: "lets start as before, what is your name subject A02?"

S: "......." (no reply)

O: "  We have brought you here just to ask you a few questions A02. After you have answered everything asked, you are free to leave. Do you comply?"

S: "....Yes....."

O: alright lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. .....What do you do?"

S: " ....make him give it to me...."

O: "Oh, how so?"

S: "by entering his mind, and making him"

O: "Hmm.... interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?"

S: "....... I control his thoughts, so why wouldn't he give it to me?"

O: "Control his thoughts?  Well, you are creative, I'll give you that.

O: Scenario two: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?"

S: "simple, make the beast mine and proceed on."

O: "Why?"

S: "Because then there would be no threat to myself, the beast would fight for me, it would be illogical to willingly allow harm to myself."

O: "Alright ...... lets continue." 

O: "scenario three: there is an army, they oppose  you and have come to hurt you. What do you do?"

S: ".... the soldier's minds are weak,  I manipulate them, make them see each other as the enemy and they will kill each other ." 

O: "How would you do that?!"

S: "The same way I got the apple, by entering their minds and force them to do so."

O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the others questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave...."

S: "......."

O: I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?"

S: "Simple, I sit and focus my mind and gather up its energies around me, because I know that he cannot harm me he does not. then i unleash the energy back and slay him..."

O: "......."

O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I think I understand why... you are free to go."

S: (Subject is escorted out by the guards)

H: "How goes the Sessions?."

O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?"

H: "Tell me you findings."

O: "On the subject?"

H: Yes

O: "Well she doesn't seem ...mentally stable, she seems to have no grasp of realistic scenarios and proceeds to continue with these fictitious mind power scenarios"

H: "Perfect ..... clear her for the project."

O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why!?"

H: " Simple...the project seeks to redefine what is fiction and what is reality. Clear her for the project and bring in the next subject"

O: ".....yes project leader ..."

END RECORDING 

 

So I just finished reading it, and it was really good. Of course I'm going to build off it even more, but it will sound better after incorporating some of these edits. 

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Because I feel cocky, here's a halloween themed version Of Nyx.

Spoiler

 

Classified 010k11 Records: 

Psychological Evaluation, Case #20:

O: Chief Scientific Officer   

H: Head of Project Zariman 

S: Subject (TM 03N - 127H)

Recording Start:

O: "What is your name?"

S: ...

O: "Alright then, suit yourself. I am the Chief Scientific Officer, I have brought you here just to ask you a few questions. After you have answered everything I ask, you are free to leave when you feel like it. Now then, lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. What do you do?"

S: "I'd make him hand it over."

O: "Oh how so?"

S: "By simply commanding him to do so."

O: "Hmm, interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?"

S: "No, I control his thoughts, his every whim, why wouldn't he give it to me?"

O: "Control his thoughts? Well, you are creative, I'll give you that. Next scenario: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?"

S: "I run back and pick up a spike. A creature's mind is fragile.  I'd make it impale itself upon the spike, till it dies in a pool of it's own blood and organs"

O: "W-why would you do such a thing?" He says, getting increasingly unsettled.

S: "Because the beast deserves it. It needs to know who is the master and who is simply the pet."

O: "A-alright, w-well lets continue. Third scenario: there is an army, they oppose everything you believe in, they have come to hurt you. What do you do?"

S: "The soldier's minds are weak, so I manipulate them, I make them kill their friends and allies. I watch the few left alive after the massacre weep over their fallen brethren and simply laugh as I make them swallow lead. " 

O: "How would you do that?!"

S: "They same way I got the apple, by simply commanding them to do so."

O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the ones I have questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave shared. I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?"

S: "Simple, I sit and I meditate because I know that he cannot harm me, I am above his comprehension, he is merely stardust compared to my cosmos. I will shred him, limb from limb until he begs for mercy so loud that his throat burns with unspeakable words."

O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I understand why. Stay here."

S: (Officer leaves the room)

H: "Hello, Officer."

O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?"

H: "Tell me you findings."

O: "On the subject? Well she doesn't seem completely mentally stable. She also may possibly have violent dementia. I don't think it'd be safe to clear her"

H: "Nonsense, clear her for the project."

O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why?"

H: "That, my friend is too much for you  to understand. Now, if you want to keep your Occupation, clear her for the project and bring in the next subject."  

O: Looking disheartened, he turns back into the room to see the girl casually walking out of it.

S: "I told you, I'd simply make him hand the apple over" 

 

 

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Because I feel cocky, here's a halloween themed version Of Nyx.

  Reveal hidden contents

 

Classified 010k11 Records: 

Psychological Evaluation, Case #20:

O: Chief Scientific Officer   

H: Head of Project Zariman 

S: Subject (TM 03N - 127H)

Recording Start:

O: "What is your name?"

S: ...

O: "Alright then, suit yourself. I am the Chief Scientific Officer, I have brought you here just to ask you a few questions. After you have answered everything I ask, you are free to leave when you feel like it. Now then, lets begin. Scenario one: there is a man standing and holding an uneaten apple, you are very hungry. What do you do?"

S: "I'd make him hand it over."

O: "Oh how so?"

S: "By simply commanding him to do so."

O: "Hmm, interesting, could you think of a reason he wouldn't give you the apple?"

S: "No, I control his thoughts, his every whim, why wouldn't he give it to me?"

O: "Control his thoughts? Well, you are creative, I'll give you that. Next scenario: you are in the middle of a forest and you are being chased by a large beast, you have just ran past a metal spike in the ground, and you see a fork in the road ahead. What do you do?"

S: "I run back and pick up a spike. A creature's mind is fragile.  I'd make it impale itself upon the spike, till it dies in a pool of it's own blood and organs"

O: "W-why would you do such a thing?" He says, getting increasingly unsettled.

S: "Because the beast deserves it. It needs to know who is the master and who is simply the pet."

O: "A-alright, w-well lets continue. Third scenario: there is an army, they oppose everything you believe in, they have come to hurt you. What do you do?"

S: "The soldier's minds are weak, so I manipulate them, I make them kill their friends and allies. I watch the few left alive after the massacre weep over their fallen brethren and simply laugh as I make them swallow lead. " 

O: "How would you do that?!"

S: "They same way I got the apple, by simply commanding them to do so."

O: "I have evaluated many others, and none of the ones I have questioned have ever given an answer remotely close to what you gave shared. I have one last scenario for you: a person is attacking you and you don't have enough time to fully move out of the way. What do you do?"

S: "Simple, I sit and I meditate because I know that he cannot harm me, I am above his comprehension, he is merely stardust compared to my cosmos. I will shred him, limb from limb until he begs for mercy so loud that his throat burns with unspeakable words."

O: "I was unsure why they asked me to evaluate you at first, but now I understand why. Stay here."

S: (Officer leaves the room)

H: "Hello, Officer."

O: "Project Leader, I didn't see you there. How may I be of service?"

H: "Tell me you findings."

O: "On the subject? Well she doesn't seem completely mentally stable. She also may possibly have violent dementia. I don't think it'd be safe to clear her"

H: "Nonsense, clear her for the project."

O: "Excuse me Sir, but may I ask why?"

H: "That, my friend is too much for you  to understand. Now, if you want to keep your Occupation, clear her for the project and bring in the next subject."  

O: Looking disheartened, he turns back into the room to see the girl casually walking out of it.

S: "I told you, I'd simply make him hand the apple over" 

 

 

Not really a Halloween version, but very good none the less. 

I'm constantly looking to improve my craft, so I'll be taking some pointer from this 

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6 hours ago, (PS4)BIGHEBREW said:

It reminded me when I played City of Heroes back in the day you can make your own lore up for your own character. Sadly I wish I can give my own Warframe their own name how the stalker has his own name

Well, I believe you can at least name your load out, but that's not quite the same as naming the Warframe itself though.

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7 hours ago, (XB1)kr1sPYDonuts said:

I want to do that too, as well as programming and creative writing.

I do novel writing in free time, but my free time is dedicated to playing warframe or exercising to destress.  Anyway, I had an idea for an operation with corpus.  

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