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Alright, to help you in your quest of determining what's going on, here's the basis of my fanfic so far.

 

A duo of Tenno are trying to escape a ruined dojo full of experimented-on infested. The experimentor, Nakarn, is an ancient Tenno himself, never actually drawing into cryosleep himself.

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Welcome to the largest fan zone thread ever :P

 

Just a small guide as to who/what my my character is.

 

His name is Aiden, and he's a Rhino. He is an extremely skilled hand to hand fighter and disregards his safety for the safety of others.

 

Progression with my story (I started writing here three weeks ago):

 

Aiden wakes up in a derelict ship with no clue as to where he is. He encounters everal Infested and spends three hours fighting them away. he then meets Jadoth (a character created by another writer) and they both try to escape the ship. They encounter a small army of Grineer get annihilated by an Infested monster (Dubbed Arachnis) and Aiden and Jadoth kill the thing. They then meet Jrogar (alien snake thing called a Naga. PM Wrath_Of_Chrysalis for info) and Jrogar escorts them out of the ship. he then knocks Aiden and Jadoth out and deposits them at the space station where quite a few characters are currently working in. 

 

I've yet to continue from that part. Hope to see more awesome work from you.

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Just for reference, there IS a thread out there consolidating the stories. I will have to dig out a link for it though (for some reason I keep needing the link when I'm on my laptop, and my desktop is the one that has it bookmarked ._. ). I have no idea how up to date it is (I haven't needed to check in on it so yeah), but it might help.

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My story, Jrogar is a medium ranking Grineer, one rank below Capt'n Vor, but higher than Tyl Regor. He just rescued bejuizb and Jadoth's characters from a derelict, and now is going to get a prosthetic for the limb bejuizb cut off. Did I mention he is the last Gyroog to his knowledge, and has joined the Grineer for survival.

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My story, Jrogar is a medium ranking Grineer, one rank below Capt'n Vor, but higher than Tyl Regor. He just rescued bejuizb and Jadoth's characters from a derelict, and now is going to get a prophetic for the limb bejuizb cut off. Did I mention he is the last Gyroog to his knowledge, and has joined the Grineer for survival.

prosthetic

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Because we're all seem to be throwing up quick summaries for our new 'initiate' ( oh woe be you >:D )

 

My character, Nyght, was recently rescued by an Aequitas team raiding a corpus ship, shortly after waking up, cutting through his guards and collapsing after barely beating back the 'Stalker'.

 He is however still suffering from heavily damaged memory, trying to piece together and come to terms with events prior to waking up in a corpus ship. All the while being stuck in an observed isolation chamber inside Aequitas, awaiting someone to 'deal with him' and -hopefully- bring him into the loop.

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Or bogged down by unfairness. Seriously, who the F*** tries to limit somebody's READING time. I can only read for an hour due to this punishment. I checked out a book from the digital library that might go back sometime this week. What makes that worse: i like to read, i have the first 10 books of the Ranger's Apprentice series on my kindle, i'm at a really interesting part of the 4th book, and i'm reading the 4th book of the Artemis Fowl series and i'm planning to read the graphic novel. I LIKE READING DAMNIT! DON'T LIMIT MY READING!

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Or bogged down by unfairness. Seriously, who the F*** tries to limit somebody's READING time. I can only read for an hour due to this punishment. I checked out a book from the digital library that might go back sometime this week. What makes that worse: i like to read, i have the first 10 books of the Ranger's Apprentice series on my kindle, i'm at a really interesting part of the 4th book, and i'm reading the 4th book of the Artemis Fowl series and i'm planning to read the graphic novel. I LIKE READING DAMNIT! DON'T LIMIT MY READING!

I'd say do like I used to and just read in class, but that got me in a lot of trouble and hurt my grades. I did get through a LOT of books though xD

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What happened to all your inspiration Quinn?! D:

 

I thought I was going to get to read stuff "soon" .-.

school + "failing" grade = a lot of yelling and a doctor appointment for me, sometime soon. 

 

But i know where i want to go but i dont know how to continue, dont worry to much. please.

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I won't, but I do hope things get better for you soon. I know I still owe you an idea (it's just on th backburner as I finish writing what I'm currently on), but is there anything else I can do to help you out? I'd be more than willing to pitch in if it'll help

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its ok, you dont owe me an idea either. :)

 

But ill keep you all updated on whats going on, seeing as i might not be on much for awhile, just dropping in to read, that might be it for awhile. 

 

edit: Vikiing..... >_> .............hahah

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STORY TIEM!!!

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“What do you mean you can’t handle this kind of injury here?!?!” the Ash roared at the Vauban.

 

“Exactly what I said. The medical bay here at the station is not capable of handling injuries of this type. What did you say your name was, by the way?”

 

“I'm Entari, and you are?”

 

“Kris, and I can refer you to a clan where you can get some help. I'm sorry, but we can’t help you here.”

 

“Fine, where can we go to get her helped?”  He was calmer, but his voice was still dripping with venom.

Saichra groaned. “Gah, what happened? The last thing I remember happening was crushing a bunch of Grineer. Did I miss something?”

 

“Apparently your frame shut down after that, and you went unconscious,” answered Entari. “I called for immediate extraction, carried you to the snub, and that basically brings us here.”

 

“I would suggest you go to the Aequitas dojo, and get that frame checked out. If you don’t, and that happens when you are running solo,” Kris let the sentence trail off.

 

“Alright. Then that is where we will go.”

 

“Wait, WE? You aren’t the one with the faulty frame,” responded the Mag. I am perfectly capable of getting myself to their dojo. I’ve been there before, so I really not worried.”

 

“Do you not want me to try to help?” Entari asked, sounding hurt.

 

“Listen, you have done way more that you needed to. Most other cells would have just called in and left me for an extraction team. You have a great heart, but I'm going to be fine on my own.” As she began to walk back to the docking bay, she suddenly swayed, and collapsed. “Ok, on second thought, you can come with me,” she said smiling.

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