DraikoHunter Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 (edited) Meanwhile I'm sitting here despairing over having to go to school tomorrow. I have a teacher workday tomorrow :/ For some reason my dad thinks that today and tomorrow are "work days". I'm trying to write, but i can't :( no inspiration and dad is cutting into brainstorming time. Edited January 21, 2014 by DraikoHunter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Much good. Such wow. Bit short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadoth Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 "Hatred and Wisdom a thousand years old Millienia trapped in stone and desolate cold" "Red sun, Red sun over paradise.Red sun, Red sun over paradise. Golden rays of the glorious sunshine. Sending down such a bloodred light. Now the animals slowly retreat. To the shadows....out of sight....." These quotes. I like them. They're very... hm, poetic-sounding, if that's the right term to describe them. I dunno why, I just like having bits like those inserted into stories. :D And for some odd reason, they made me think of Morrowind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderCorgi Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 These quotes. I like them. They're very... hm, poetic-sounding, if that's the right term to describe them. I dunno why, I just like having bits like those inserted into stories. :D And for some odd reason, they made me think of Morrowind. If only you knew that the second set was part of some heart-pounding video game metal played during a swordfight on top of a skyscraper at night, in the pouring rain, with helicopters circling overhead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadoth Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 I don't believe I've played anything that involves a swordfight on a skyscraper at night with rain and helicopters. Then again, I don't really play many video games, so my knowledge of video game trivia is woefully undeveloped. .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bespokecord7791 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 I think ima think up another story and such just planning to change a character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bejuizb Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 @Wrath. Nice writing man. Interesting style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Thanks. But still...no-one commented what about what Jrogar was doing before that? Does no one actually 'read' instead of just skimming through my stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bejuizb Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Thanks. But still...no-one commented what about what Jrogar was doing before that? Does no one actually 'read' instead of just skimming through my stuff? I'll be bluntly honest. I didn't understand quite a bit of it. Might be because of my absence from the thread for the first 200 pages, or simply my stupidity. Care to elucidate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 No one is commenting on the fact that what Jrogar is doing isn't very Grineer-like. I has reason. Just want SOMEONE besides bejuizb, Draiko, or EDeN to ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ajkrumen Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Well, don't discredit the people that do give you feedback. I only have a couple people who comment on my stories as well, and that's just fine for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Im sorry...all these voices in my head confuse me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ajkrumen Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 ...was that a reference to something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 I was serious. I have at least 3 voices in my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Entari0 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 You miiiiight want to get that checked out by a psychiatrist, wrath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrath_Of_Chrysalis Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Already have...let us pass this section of the thread and continue away from the topic of my mind . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bejuizb Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Nah, I have 6 in my head, and I'm quite sure I'm not crazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NyghttheClassy Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Talk of crazy and voices and such, and the time of putting -this- up, Wrath *666* under his name. Erm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MandoKarla Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 (edited) I make my own voices in my head just so they never become lonely. And I'm back in college now. :/ Edited January 21, 2014 by MandoKarla Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ajkrumen Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Hookaay, let us not derail! Also, think of it as the voices helping y'all write stories! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalenath Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 (edited) Well, for the crazies among us... a very special treat... _______________________________________________________________ “Come on. You know you want to do it.” The female voice said with glee. “No.” The deep male voice was flat and clear. “I don’t.” “You forget, brother. I know you. You want to do it.” “It’s wrong!” The male protested. “I don’t want to do it!” “But it would be fun!” The female pleaded. “Please?” “It’s a grievous misuse of my abilities.” The male said sharply. “No.” “Fine, I will.” The female voice said with a sigh. “Don’t you dare!” The male retorted, but it was too late! The Grineer forces on the Galleon had no idea that a Tenno was aboard. They had no idea at all that their entire security system had been hacked and the operating protocol of said system replaced with the recipe for something called ‘stroganoff’. Not that they would know what that was. None of them had a clue what was about to happen. Not until one of the Grineer Lancers jerked and… started to dance! The Lancer started to dance and suddenly there was music coming from his armor. Odd music! They call me Cuban Pete,I'm the king of the Rumba beat,When I play the Maracas I goChick chicky boomChick chicky boom (( )) Suddenly, more Grineer were dancing. All in a line. All in time with the music. More and more Grineer joined the line. Lancers, Troopers, Ballista, Heavy Gunners, Bombards, Napalms, Scorches, Sawmen, Powerfists, Evicerators, all kinds and sorts of Grineer were dancing along in line, throwing their weapons about as they cavorted. Every single Grineer on the ship joined the line dance. It was... impressive. Yes, sir, I'm Cuban PeteI'm the craze, of my native streetWhen I start to dance, everything goesChick chicky boomChick chicky boom The Frost Prime watched with awe as the entire line of Grineer danced… into the airlock, which shut after them. Then it vented, blowing the entire Grineer crew into space! “That was wrong, Riana.” He said with a snarl. “Don’t do that again!” “Oh, come on, Olim… Live a little!” His sister, who was an Artificial Intelligence that lived inside his warframe, retorted. “Shooting them is just so… gauche.” “I can turn you over my knee.” Olim said with a growl. “AI or no, I can.” “Promises, promises.” His sister said with glee. “Now you gonna grab that artifact or jaw all day?” The Frost Prime just shook his head. “I could teach you how to do that dance…” “Don’t even think about it sis.” Edited January 21, 2014 by Kalenath Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatViking Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Cuban Pete....I need to go watch The Mask again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bejuizb Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 That made me laugh. Nice one Kalenath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MandoKarla Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Kelanath, you've got my kind of weird. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderCorgi Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 *claps hands with glee, cackling* YES, KAL, YES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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