Azure_Kytia Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 (edited) I'm sure it's not the only advertisement you have, but it really looks sepia toned and uninteresting, in my opinion. I have taken the not-so-creative liberty of trying my hand to see if I can help out! This is the one I encountered, and it did not at all make me think "that looks interesting". I think it's the colours, and the misaligned FREE TO PLAY and SIGN UP NOW texts. So here are a few I thought I would try to make! For those unfamiliar with Forums, click on the show button to display the images. By Azure_Kyte: Old #Ver. 2: Revised #Ver. 2: By GrimWing: Edited March 6, 2013 by Azure_Kyte Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poochy Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 That second one is pretty awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kadishia Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 The second one is pretty epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AXCrusnik Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 The second looks good, I like the text glow colors but it's a bit cluttered. I'd remove a frame or 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure_Kytia Posted March 4, 2013 Author Share Posted March 4, 2013 Changed the second one a little; Removed Loki, Frost and Nyx in exchange for Excalibur. Changed the BG a little, and yeah! I like this one a lot more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strac_CRO Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 I agree your work is much, much better I clicked on WARFRAME game ad by pure luck, that banner is way too boring and tells really a little about what warframe really is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wealthiermonk Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 I really should of expected this from you bro. Back on track though, I'd have to pick the second one as well. Looks a lot more interesting than the original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brasten Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 (edited) Here is a horizontal image idea... Wall Running Warframe Midground, A Grineer in Forground falling back into and under camera (with implication effect of being shot). That Cave tile with the obvious wall run section over to the vents. Put the Grineer on the Vent ledge and frame the shot so the two story section is in the background. The clencher is depecting Space Ninja Badassness while commuicting the tone and feel of the game. I'll admit that shooting anything while wall running is actually rather hard, but it's an Ad. Maybe a new thread in the Fan Section for this, make your own Warframe ad banner? Edited March 4, 2013 by Brasten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[DE]jaywalker Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 Keep em coming...we need all the ideas we can get! Have you downloaded the fansite kit? I'd be interested to see what you can make with some of those assets. I agree with the others that the 2nd one is the best. The next 2 are too busy (hard to tell what's going on, even after losing a Frame) and the bottom one is too bland color-wise to me. We also agree our ads are lacking, that's mainly because we have our ninja artists working on the game instead of our ads but we definitely need to up our ad game! We've been doing a bit of A/B testing with our ads and as of late have highlighted the space ninja feel to the game. Here's currently our top 3 clicked thru ads. What do think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alacratha Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 Keep em coming...we need all the ideas we can get! Have you downloaded the fansite kit? I'd be interested to see what you can make with some of those assets. I agree with the others that the 2nd one is the best. The next 2 are too busy (hard to tell what's going on, even after losing a Frame) and the bottom one is too bland color-wise to me. We also agree our ads are lacking, that's mainly because we have our ninja artists working on the game instead of our ads but we definitely need to up our ad game! We've been doing a bit of A/B testing with our ads and as of late have highlighted the space ninja feel to the game. Here's currently our top 3 clicked thru ads. What do think? The First one makes me want to click it because I see action, and it looks like actual in game graphics. The Second one has a cool art to it, but it reminds me of one of those Browser based games, like Evony and their Ads. The Third one makes me want to click it because I see something similar to the first link, however It feels kinda smooshed together so I want to see the whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brasten Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 Actually just a though, you know that openning vent drop animation, when the 1st frame looks back at the 2nd... put with the right background that would be a very powerful image. Also Have you downloaded the fansite kit? I'd be interested to see what you can make with some of those assets. Doing so. :P Kinda forgot about it as I don't run any websites currently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strac_CRO Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 (edited) A/B testing = I like 1st and 3rd = they are dynamic and show space-ninja action @ jaywalker ... " I agree with the others that the 2nd one is the best. The next 2 are too busy" ... there are only 3 suggestion from Azure_Kyte, so after 2nd (2versions) there is only 3rd (only excalbur) so when people say they like the second picture they are thinking on this: Edited March 4, 2013 by Strac_CRO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brasten Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 (edited) I'll do better I promise, but this came to mind when riffling through the fan kit. Edited March 4, 2013 by Brasten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[DE]jaywalker Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 A/B testing = I like 1st and 3rd = they are dynamic and show space-ninja action @ jaywalker ... " I agree with the others that the 2nd one is the best. The next 2 are too busy" ... there are only 3 suggestion from Azure_Kyte, so after 2nd (2versions) there is only 3rd (only excalbur) so when people say they like the second picture they are thinking on this: You're right...I got my order mixed up...was counting ours as number 1 and for some reason the one above ^^^ is showing twice for me on this thread. So I guess what I meant to say is I like number 1, with the Grineer, number 2 is too busy and number 3 (with only Excal) too bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AXCrusnik Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 You're right...I got my order mixed up...was counting ours as number 1 and for some reason the one above ^^^ is showing twice for me on this thread. So I guess what I meant to say is I like number 1, with the Grineer, number 2 is too busy and number 3 (with only Excal) too bland. The reason it shows twice is the second one was edited to make it less cluttered. I think it looks good but it looks a bit off since the lighting sources for each frame in the renders is slightly different.I don't really like the first suggestion for the same reason I don't like the official ad posted in the thread. It only shows the enemy and not a Warframe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valkrein Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 the "free to play" and "play now" makes warframe like a cheap game IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimwing Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 the "free to play" and "play now" makes warframe like a cheap game IMO I second that. Also, it's not just a "shooter" like the banner says. Shooters are boring, Warframe isn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxunit Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 (edited) I took the liberty of using the current 3 ads from jaywalker and the latest 2 from Azure_Kyte and placed them on my Community Forum in an Ad Rotator amongst my Google Adsense. Community Site: http://www.vgunetwork.com Azure_Kytes are rotating in the top banner location, the 3 from jaywalker are rotating at the sidebar ( very bottom -.-, going to fix this...EDIT: Fixed :) ) location. Edited March 5, 2013 by Maxunit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimwing Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 I've made one too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure_Kytia Posted March 6, 2013 Author Share Posted March 6, 2013 I must admit, that looks really awesome; I might just rename the thread title to General Ad improvement thread or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeka Posted March 6, 2013 Share Posted March 6, 2013 Very nice, I like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldFusion Posted March 6, 2013 Share Posted March 6, 2013 i like the first one for jaywalker and second from Azure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kiwicanfly Posted March 6, 2013 Share Posted March 6, 2013 +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ifreet Posted March 7, 2013 Share Posted March 7, 2013 Keep em coming...we need all the ideas we can get! Have you downloaded the fansite kit? I'd be interested to see what you can make with some of those assets. I agree with the others that the 2nd one is the best. The next 2 are too busy (hard to tell what's going on, even after losing a Frame) and the bottom one is too bland color-wise to me. We also agree our ads are lacking, that's mainly because we have our ninja artists working on the game instead of our ads but we definitely need to up our ad game! We've been doing a bit of A/B testing with our ads and as of late have highlighted the space ninja feel to the game. Here's currently our top 3 clicked thru ads. What do think? Wow they look fabulous! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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