bejuizb Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 It was only a matter of time until this happened, I'm not too surprised of course. What do you mean by that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted April 28, 2014 Author Share Posted April 28, 2014 (edited) It was only a matter of time until this happened, I'm not too surprised of course. I really do hope this becomes something that I could look back on in my later years, keep up the good work! Pardon? *gives a look of supreme confusion* Thank you I think? Edited April 28, 2014 by Jeahanne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaSnail Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 Pardon? *gives a look of supreme confusion* Thank you I think? Just nod and smile (think about what I mean, I did not write it incorrectly). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted April 28, 2014 Author Share Posted April 28, 2014 Ummm... if you mean before my sad depressing story got a spark of humor? Of course it was bound to happen. Any good story has to have moments of light and dark in order to properly set both comedy and tragedy into their respective lights. If a story (or book, or movie, or whatever) is CONSTANTLY only one or the other, with no breaks, it becomes monotonous, and it is much harder (if not downright impossible) to properly emphasize the highs/lows of the characters and their situations. Think of it this way. How is dark defined? It is defined as the absence of light. Sadness is the absence of happiness, emptiness is a lack of matter to fill a space, etc. I would be doing my characters a disservice if I didn't emphasize the highs WITH the lows, and placed comedy in juxtaposition of tragedy. It's more typical of reality that way anyway, and I feel this strategy is far more effective than simply relying on one emotion alone for the entirety of the story (in most cases at least). I can only hope my efforts in trying to convey these things are passable, and speak to others how they do to me, and that I have, perhaps, guessed the meaning of your cryptic statement at least somewhat correctly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarOverlord Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 (edited) Kal do a crossover with this. Don't kill her though. Edited April 28, 2014 by WarOverlord Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bejuizb Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 Kal do a crossover with this. Don't kill her though. I'd prefer not to actually. Let Jea finish her story, establish her universe and maybe then think about it. This fantastic story is only at its infancy at the moment. I'd much rather see it end with Jea's vision. No offense to Kal intended obviously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarOverlord Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 I'd prefer not to actually. Let Jea finish her story, establish her universe and maybe then think about it. This fantastic story is only at its infancy at the moment. I'd much rather see it end with Jea's vision. No offense to Kal intended obviously. I didn't mean now, but eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaSnail Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 Ummm... if you mean before my sad depressing story got a spark of humor? Of course it was bound to happen. Any good story has to have moments of light and dark in order to properly set both comedy and tragedy into their respective lights. If a story (or book, or movie, or whatever) is CONSTANTLY only one or the other, with no breaks, it becomes monotonous, and it is much harder (if not downright impossible) to properly emphasize the highs/lows of the characters and their situations. Think of it this way. How is dark defined? It is defined as the absence of light. Sadness is the absence of happiness, emptiness is a lack of matter to fill a space, etc. I would be doing my characters a disservice if I didn't emphasize the highs WITH the lows, and placed comedy in juxtaposition of tragedy. It's more typical of reality that way anyway, and I feel this strategy is far more effective than simply relying on one emotion alone for the entirety of the story (in most cases at least). I can only hope my efforts in trying to convey these things are passable, and speak to others how they do to me, and that I have, perhaps, guessed the meaning of your cryptic statement at least somewhat correctly. I guess I did write it incorrectly. I mean Peri having her own Tenno suit (I think). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalenath Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 Kal do a crossover with this. Don't kill her though. It's Jeahanne's story. And it is GOOD. Wouldn't DREAM of messing this up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarOverlord Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 It's Jeahanne's story. And it is GOOD. Wouldn't DREAM of messing this up. Oh you won't.Just wait till this is finished. Then involve them in a chapter or two of one of your stories. Be sure not to kill anyone though. (Don't want another George R. R. Martin.(I think that's his name)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalenath Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 I don't mind guest stars in my stories, but I don't kill off other people's characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WarOverlord Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 I don't mind guest stars in my stories, but I don't kill off other people's characters. Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted April 28, 2014 Author Share Posted April 28, 2014 (edited) I guess I did write it incorrectly. I mean Peri having her own Tenno suit (I think). Ohh! Sorry I feel like a total idiot now >.<; I'm sorry! However... I don't think even Isaac is crazy enough to start handing out warframes to impish little children... not real warframes anyway... maybe... *strokes her nonexistent beard thoughtfully as she ponders new possibilities* It's Jeahanne's story. And it is GOOD. Wouldn't DREAM of messing this up. *squees* Thank you Kal!!! :D But, Kal, you can't mess anything up, so don't say such heresy xP However, I would be flattered if it was even considered to use one of my characters as a guest in your fanfics... I mean, being the Kalenath fangirl that I am, how could I say no? lol Edited April 28, 2014 by Jeahanne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaSnail Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 Ohh! Sorry I feel like a total idiot now >.<; I'm sorry! However... I don't think even Isaac is crazy enough to start handing out warframes to impish little children... not real warframes anyway... maybe... *strokes her nonexistent beard thoughtfully as she ponders new possibilities* Seeing as more than one person mistook my message I do not blame you for that, the fault is completely on my side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted April 29, 2014 Author Share Posted April 29, 2014 (edited) Seeing as more than one person mistook my message I do not blame you for that, the fault is completely on my side. Lies! But ok, I shall stop feeling so much like an idiot. ...I'm still sorry though <.< Edited April 29, 2014 by Jeahanne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaSnail Posted April 29, 2014 Share Posted April 29, 2014 Lies! But ok, I shall stop feeling so much like an idiot. ...I'm still sorry though <.< I don't accept your apology. Here, take mine. I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bejuizb Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 I've been meaning to finish off this doodle/sketch/crappy thing after reading the last chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 It's so cute! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sayfog Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 CUTENESS OVERLOAD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 This is very good, continue til the end of this story! I like the twist on the head of things, with a specific warframe not being the center of the stroy. Anyway, I shall be watching this thread, you've earned yourself a +1 :) Small complaint, however. Navigating the thread is quite tedious with these large blocks of text, maybe put them in spoilers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted May 13, 2014 Author Share Posted May 13, 2014 Thank you! I really appreciate the compliments ^-^And sure, if that makes it easier to navigate, I can certainly put the chapters in spoilers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 Thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeahanne Posted May 13, 2014 Author Share Posted May 13, 2014 No problem ^-^Also, as an aside, I am working on a new chapter, so that should be up in a couple days, with any luck. Sorry for there being such long spacing between chapters >.<; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikey844 Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 They are always worth the wait Jea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 I have the same issue with my thread, but I always aim to write something a day. You don't have to write printed gold, but just write something, because you can always edit it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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