Drakeardian Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 I'll honestly say Im bad at writing from another personality's POV, but I'll write a crackerjack story in a view separate from all characters. I remember this one time working on a fanfiction, I had 4 groups of 4 and 6 random characters with their own agendas. Got to fifty one chapters, and by then it's too daunting for new people to read, and my constant(though slight) spelling mistakes also seemed to get in the way. What's a crackerjack story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumika1204 Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 "crackerjack" is a term which denotes a high level of skill or quality and has been shortened to "crack" when referring to squads in the military. At least that is what I read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakeardian Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 "crackerjack" is a term which denotes a high level of skill or quality and has been shortened to "crack" when referring to squads in the military. At least that is what I read. Ah, Thank you Sumika. As for Ultima's thingy well...we shall see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingedCrusade Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 This has derailed so fantastically far, the train's halfway past the milky way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakeardian Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 This has derailed so fantastically far, the train's halfway past the milky way. So, Let us speak on say....the gardens? Who manages the gardens? The Tricephalons or a member of the crew? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temperance000 Posted January 20, 2015 Author Share Posted January 20, 2015 So, Let us speak on say....the gardens? Who manages the gardens? The Tricephalons or a member of the crew? The gardens are maintained by the hydroponics staff. In terms of player characters, this means Ancilla's proxies and Abra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralin Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Posted that thing for ya temp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakeardian Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Um Ultima? Didn't Annabell leave Medical? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achaix Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 So, Abra, how are you feeling? "I've been better... I'm sorry, who are you?" Your maker. "... No, I don't think so." Ahem... HOW ABOUT NOW, ABRAHAM? "What the... that's not even my name!" IT IS NOW. -+- Sup Kate. "Sup." Anything to say? "Hmmm... you're a sadistic bastard when it comes to backstory. Other than that, I'm coolio." Coolio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temperance000 Posted January 20, 2015 Author Share Posted January 20, 2015 Um Ultima? Didn't Annabell leave Medical? She did, but she started walking back when the combat alert triggered. Her arrival was implied rather than written. Apparently she just happened to get back right after Cordia and Setebos left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nooshroomerplus Posted January 21, 2015 Share Posted January 21, 2015 So can i join in or is this it? Cuz Lotus in bloom says open RP but this thing is saying that it's closed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temperance000 Posted January 21, 2015 Author Share Posted January 21, 2015 So can i join in or is this it? Cuz Lotus in bloom says open RP but this thing is saying that it's closed. Apologies; due to the setting IC, enrollment closed on December 24th. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nooshroomerplus Posted January 21, 2015 Share Posted January 21, 2015 K then, ill go find somewhere else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NanoVega Posted January 21, 2015 Share Posted January 21, 2015 (edited) Annabelle returned to medical upon noticing the "be combat ready" red strips... I'm pretty sure that post went through... Edit: Yep, here it is... Annabelle looked up at the red lights coming on, and quickly reversed her direction, heading back to medical at a brisk, but not rushed pace, careful to keep out of everyone's way if there were people around, she figured that from medical there would be an alert of some sort to be activated upon someone incurring an injury, satisfied to wait there rather than assume where she might be needed and be across the ship from the person in need. Edited January 21, 2015 by ultimatumcore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumika1204 Posted January 21, 2015 Share Posted January 21, 2015 Sorry about not being in chatango or like 3 days or something. Assuming I was required for some sort of discussion but most likely not. School is just ugh. Not even so much the classes as some jackass who decided to have construction done now instead of having it done during December when the university compound is least trafficked. I'm rather sensitive to loud noises, getting headaches easily, so it's horrendous for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astralin Posted January 21, 2015 Share Posted January 21, 2015 Sorry about not being in chatango or like 3 days or something. Assuming I was required for some sort of discussion but most likely not. School is just ugh. Not even so much the classes as some jackass who decided to have construction done now instead of having it done during December when the university compound is least trafficked. I'm rather sensitive to loud noises, getting headaches easily, so it's horrendous for me. Sorry to hear that Sumi, we've got a similar thing happening next to my building, they are building a new art center and they've been at it for almost a full year tearing the old buildings around, and I mean literally around, our school down and then building from scratch, at this moment in time I often see arc-wielding from the window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingedCrusade Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 Viper, Lusith hadn't said she was leaving for good, she just said she needed a moment to herself lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Viper Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 Viper, Lusith hadn't said she was leaving for good, she just said she needed a moment to herself lol She left the room did she not? As in, she's not there anymore/at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temperance000 Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 She left the room did she not? As in, she's not there anymore/at the moment. Actually, she just returned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Viper Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 (edited) I read that. But you people seem to have a strange concept about time. Are you telling me that it took less than 30 seconds for Lusith to exit the room, sulk, talk to Heckel and then walk back in, and somehow you seem to claim that she was there as the twins gave their response? That should not be possable. EDIT: winged should have waitied untill more interactions had taken place inside the training room before barging in again. Lusith appears to exist in another time dimension separate from everyone else she has to interact with sinse she was able to have that little talk with Heckel and then get back inside before Cordia ever replied to the twins even though Jinc spoke right after Lusith exited. That is my problem with it all. Lusith was not back when I posted and she shouldn't have been back yet ether. Edited January 22, 2015 by Lady_Viper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingedCrusade Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 (edited) I read that. But you people seem to have a strange concept about time. Are you telling me that it took less than 30 seconds for Lusith to exit the room, sulk, talk to Heckel and then walk back in, and somehow you seem to claim that she was there as the twins gave their response? That should not be possable. EDIT: winged should have waitied untill more interactions had taken place inside the training room before barging in again. Lusith appears to exist in another time dimension separate from everyone else she has to interact with sinse she was able to have that little talk with Heckel and then get back inside before Cordia ever replied to the twins even though Jinc spoke right after Lusith exited. That is my problem with it all. Lusith was not back when I posted and she shouldn't have been back yet ether. Uh oh, somebody's assuming things~ First, Lusith had announced that she would take a moment to herself. Not leave entirely, you made it seem like she was leaving entirely and not returning. That was a simple little thing that bothered me for some reason. Second, Jinx and Cordia had this long-a*s exchange of a story and such basically in like two posts. Lusith just took a quick minute to catch her breath, I mean, how long do you think she was going to sulk out there? Half an hour until the testing was over? Ha, no. She went back in at the right time, which was after both Cordia and Jinx finished speaking. You're assuming she re-entered mid speech, and it doesn't take over a minute for the brief exchange Heckel and Lusith had, as Heckel had left basically as Lusith did, spoke a few words, and then Lusith in exchange, all of which should have taken no more than two minutes in total for the event, in which Lusith re-entered directly after. Given the length of Jinx and Cordia's own dialogue, the timing is just fine. Edited January 22, 2015 by WingedCrusade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temperance000 Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 To be pedantically accurate, Winged, Jinx and Cordia spoke a total of....9 sentences to each other. 7 of those were Cordia monologuing. It was a very, very short exchange. I personally don't have an issue with the timing of Lusith's re-entrance, since time tends to be a bit plastic IC, but I would urge you to pay close attention in the future, just to avoid any possible mishaps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingedCrusade Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 (edited) Okay, actually, I did re-read... It turns out I'm just Grandiose and very very stupid, and have caught my mistake. Well, can't fix it now being that is has been solidified in by other posts already. We'll just say that she re-entered after Cordia replied to Jinx and Arthur then, because that's how it happened in my own head anyhow. I really wish my phone's screen was bigger. That, and now I feel like the a*s after already having said what I did, without reading first. To be pedantically accurate, Winged, Jinx and Cordia spoke a total of....9 sentences to each other. 7 of those were Cordia monologuing. It was a very, very short exchange. I personally don't have an issue with the timing of Lusith's re-entrance, since time tends to be a bit plastic IC, but I would urge you to pay close attention in the future, just to avoid any possible mishaps. Seeing my mistake, I wish I had caught it earlier. I get anxious because I guess I just have more time to post than most others here since everyone else probably doesn't have a phone that they can check on constantly like I do. It's also probably not good I constantly check my phone in the midst of doing school work and chores, either. >.< Edited January 22, 2015 by WingedCrusade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnaleKing Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 If I may, Winged, I have something for Lusith. Cruel, by St. Vincent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingedCrusade Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 (edited) If I may, Winged, I have something for Lusith. Cruel, by St. Vincent.If it's not rock / acoustic music or electronic I probably won't like it."Admin, where's your sense of culture?" With the Orokin. I'll look it up when I'm not on a school laptop later. New Post; Luckily Lusith has her helmet on, otherwise the feels and blush would be showing. "She's nice..." Lusith, your red is showing. New Post; I feel absolutely afraid to post now until Viper and Fish do. Just waiting on you guys. .3. Edited January 23, 2015 by WingedCrusade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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