GoldenxHawk Posted February 26, 2018 Share Posted February 26, 2018 (edited) [EDIT] So, it didn't do so well on the workshop at around 50-50%, so I've gone back and updating it. Here it is in it's current state. Teaser: Here's a teaser image of the finished skin. https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1378675061 Sculpts: Spoiler Original post: Spoiler If my stuff is received well, this is where I'll post update pictures throughout the process of each helmet/skin/etc. To start things off, here's a submission I made a long while ago that didn't quite make the cut for a few reasons: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1092347026 I have every intention of getting this thing out in one way or another... updates below. Edited May 22, 2018 by GoldenxHawk Progress Update (added images) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lukinu_u Posted February 26, 2018 Share Posted February 26, 2018 Before reading, note that what I will say is MY of view and can be inexact, so don't take as "what you must" do, especially if it break your concept from your point of view. I will rapidely explain what are the main problems and then, show a rapid draw on how I would change it. (my photoshop decided to crash during the draw and I didn't save, so will probably do it again tomorrow). First, it's too angular and straight to fit the Tenno aestetic. It need to be more organic with curves like other warframes and Tenno weaponary does. The overall design lack of tertiary details to give a good finished look. If you want it to fit the initial Rhino body, try to inspire from the neck, shoulders and elbows. The detailing on material (rougthness, dust, etc...) don't fit the body, giving a weird final result. To achieve this result, you will need to use a 3D sculpting software such as Zbrush or Sculptris to give the organic and try to give a semin straight look to parts that need by smoothing them a lot. This require a lot of time but the result will certainly look more Warframe after some practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted February 28, 2018 Author Share Posted February 28, 2018 (edited) I sculpted until my eyes were sore and all I could think about was sleep. Here's the [obviously incomplete] result: Spoiler I expected to hate it, but I'm pleasantly surprised with the direction it's heading. Hopefully others can agree haha :) The breastplate specifically needs some work, especially because it is the main focal point of the armor. I like the way the back looks however... More to come Edited March 5, 2018 by GoldenxHawk Fixed images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)OmegaSlayer Posted February 28, 2018 Share Posted February 28, 2018 I like your Gears Of War marine but that's not Rhino anymore...if you get what I mean. Lukinu was very technical, I'm very simplistic and blunt. One thing might look awesome but not fit in the universe he's going to live in. Unfortunately there's no rule of thumb on what is ok and what not, I think there has been tennogen stuff not deserving and some cool content rejected, but your concept sways too much away from Warframe, unfortunately, because it looks cool, much cooler than some ideas that are out there imho, but doesn't look Warframe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted February 28, 2018 Author Share Posted February 28, 2018 (edited) 16 hours ago, (PS4)OmegaSlayer said: I like your Gears Of War marine but that's not Rhino anymore...if you get what I mean. Noted. I personally would like to see a bit more variation in the options for skins that players have, and I've heard a lot of mixed opinions from the community on skins that stray from the art that already exists, but then again, some people are asking for dikbutt skins, so maybe they aren't the most reliable source lol What I struggle with most is at what point is something 'Rhino' or isn't it, and isn't the idea of having skins to be able to shift that idea around a little bit? I feel like the dynasty skin for Chroma would be rejected on the grounds that it isn't 'Chroma', but that was made by DE themselves if I'm not mistaken. I'll do some more research and tweaking and see what I come up with. -Cheers! Edited March 1, 2018 by GoldenxHawk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koldraxon-732 Posted February 28, 2018 Share Posted February 28, 2018 (edited) 6 hours ago, GoldenxHawk said: Personally the style you're going with this looks viable for both a Grineer and Corpus theme, if properly executed. Bursa/Raptor styles would accommodate this skin, as well as a select number of Grineer units. Edited February 28, 2018 by Koldraxon-732 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted February 28, 2018 Author Share Posted February 28, 2018 (edited) 2 minutes ago, Koldraxon-732 said: Personally the style you're going with this looks viable for both a Grineer and Corpus theme, if properly executed. Bursa/Raptor styles would accommodate this skin, as well as a select number of Grineer units. I hadn't seen the connection before. Thanks for pointing it out! I'll try and get some more reference images for inspiration. Edited February 28, 2018 by GoldenxHawk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted March 5, 2018 Author Share Posted March 5, 2018 (edited) [More] Organic breastplate, and a little bit of work on shoulders and thighs: Edited March 6, 2018 by GoldenxHawk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted March 8, 2018 Author Share Posted March 8, 2018 I got bored with the old sculpt and started over. This design is much more Corpus-ey now... Opinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)OmegaSlayer Posted March 8, 2018 Share Posted March 8, 2018 I like the horn idea, but I'd made it a little less round and more squared. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted March 8, 2018 Author Share Posted March 8, 2018 5 hours ago, (PS4)OmegaSlayer said: I like the horn idea, but I'd made it a little less round and more squared. The helmet I'll probably need to rework entirely if I follow this concept, so I definitely agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)OmegaSlayer Posted March 8, 2018 Share Posted March 8, 2018 21 minutes ago, GoldenxHawk said: The helmet I'll probably need to rework entirely if I follow this concept, so I definitely agree more or less like the "nose" area, but I think you understood me already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted March 12, 2018 Author Share Posted March 12, 2018 A bit more work. Just found out the deadline for round 12 was March 19th, and unfortunately I won't be able to make it because you'll never guess; I'm out of town until... The 19th. Anyway, here's the tiny bit of work I was able to do on the airplane and in the terminals: The following arrows point to areas needing further attention (concept wise, the whole thing could use some polishing) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(PSN)airec02 Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 i like the helmet. A lot. but the skin need to have slightly more detail and refinement. good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted March 22, 2018 Author Share Posted March 22, 2018 I started playing around with alternate helmets. Not terribly happy with this but maybe someone with fresh eyes sees potential where I don't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted March 23, 2018 Author Share Posted March 23, 2018 Much happier with this alternative: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
True_Naeblis Posted March 26, 2018 Share Posted March 26, 2018 Maybe angled vents of some sort along the jawline of the helm? I know you're not finished with the details by any means, just something that could give it character and make it a bit different from any of the other helms out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted May 4, 2018 Author Share Posted May 4, 2018 (edited) I've been silent on this for a little while because I've been busy with EVERY DAMN THING. But here's a teaser image of the finished skin. I'll put a link up to the steam workshop page when I put it up. Edited May 4, 2018 by GoldenxHawk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted May 5, 2018 Author Share Posted May 5, 2018 (edited) I posted a custom skin via the tennogen viewer, and I can find it if I go through my personal account, but it's not showing up in the official warframe workshop. I've done it before because I have an item on the workshop, but this one won't show for me 😕 Here's my thread for the skin so you know what I'm talking about: Edited May 12, 2018 by GoldenxHawk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swaggernaut64 Posted May 6, 2018 Share Posted May 6, 2018 In the upload tab, what's the visiblity set to? If its on private, then it wont show on the workshop until you change it to public Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted May 12, 2018 Author Share Posted May 12, 2018 On 2018-05-06 at 7:04 PM, Swaggernaut64 said: In the upload tab, what's the visiblity set to? If its on private, then it wont show on the workshop until you change it to public It was set to public from the moment I hit upload. It's live now, I think it just took some time to process. Like a day or so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenxHawk Posted May 22, 2018 Author Share Posted May 22, 2018 So, it didn't do so well on the workshop at around 50-50%, so I've gone back and updating it. Here it is in it's current state. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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