psychicandroid Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 Man, now I know what DE feels like with these deadlines you set for yourself. Chapter 11 is out. As there has been a break, please let me know if this chapter is crap compared to the others. Apart from that, things are picking up! This is why I never say when something is coming out XD It was an awesome read, as usual. This will sound weird, but I'm really glad to see that some of them are actually freaking out. They're scared and some of them are showing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaIthazar Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 you forgot to close the spoiler, just sayin.. good chapter though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 25, 2015 Author Share Posted March 25, 2015 you forgot to close the spoiler, just sayin.. good chapter though Got it, fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToxicTroublermaker Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 Ch 11 feels a bit short but a good read nonetheless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 Conversations are at a much better quality now. They flow really well and feel real. Pacing is really nice as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted March 25, 2015 Share Posted March 25, 2015 DAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYMMMMMMMM S#&$ is about to get real. It's gotten real. The team is freaking out. I do hope the Loki (I think his name was Jason... can we get a quick list of who's assigned which powers? XC) can RD the sentients. HOPEFULLY it wont backfire and RD the crew and Tenno as well, but... well, for a first try disarming EVERYONE would be better than accidentally destroying everything vaguely weaponisable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 25, 2015 Author Share Posted March 25, 2015 DAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYMMMMMMMM S#&$ is about to get real. It's gotten real. The team is freaking out. I do hope the Loki (I think his name was Jason... can we get a quick list of who's assigned which powers? XC) can RD the sentients. HOPEFULLY it wont backfire and RD the crew and Tenno as well, but... well, for a first try disarming EVERYONE would be better than accidentally destroying everything vaguely weaponisable Hayden-Excalibur Jason-Loki Gregor-Rhino Miyoko-Mag Darren-Frost Jolla-Ember Joul-Volt Koda-Ash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brokenrune Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 GIVE ME MOARRRR! :D This stuff is seriously good. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 I could've sworn Nyx was one of the first 8... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Huh...rhino as gregor reminds me of gregor clegane from GoT.....i guess the name has a powerful ring! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 She'll be like Imp from Worm: Mind-controlling everyone into forgetting about her and not knowing how to turn it off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaIthazar Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 She'll be like Imp from Worm: Mind-controlling everyone into forgetting about her and not knowing how to turn it off Maybe, maybe that's actually what happened.. She is in this story, but nobody knows she's there because she keeps accidently mindwiping them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 30, 2015 Author Share Posted March 30, 2015 Oh look, the update's one day early. Chapter 12 is out! They're starting to get their S#&$ together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lankander Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 I had the biggest nerdgasm when Hayden charged at the Sentients, nicely written, i could almost see it in my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Gregor is turning out much nicer than the standard stomp-happy Rhino stereotype Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaIthazar Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Gregor is turning out much nicer than the standard stomp-happy Rhino stereotype Ahem... I take offense to that as a Rhino Main-er Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fakeBOSHI Posted April 1, 2015 Share Posted April 1, 2015 Super addicted since you first posted ch1. Can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted April 2, 2015 Share Posted April 2, 2015 Really cool to see the Tenno in their first battle! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkfire336112 Posted April 4, 2015 Share Posted April 4, 2015 Oh, I found one of the weird references. Joul is how you measure work in physics, and with a distance turns into power, which is measured in watts, which is the electric thing. so that's definitely a hidden reference. I'll edit if I find more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted April 4, 2015 Author Share Posted April 4, 2015 Oh, I found one of the weird references. Joul is how you measure work in physics, and with a distance turns into power, which is measured in watts, which is the electric thing. so that's definitely a hidden reference. I'll edit if I find more Dang, you have used your first post in this thread. Congratulations, forumite. Anyway， yeah, I was a bit lacking in creativity there and so I shaved off the e in Joul and called him as such. His brother's name is also a shortened form of Newton, but don't expect too much significance from that. Maybe their parents were really into physics...(I sure am). Anyway it's looking like the sentient attack will end with this next chapter! Stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkfire336112 Posted April 4, 2015 Share Posted April 4, 2015 Oh, Newt is Newton shortened? I figured that newt was like a form of hydroid that was related to Joul, since ya know, newts are amphibious... Oh well. That makes sense too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted April 5, 2015 Author Share Posted April 5, 2015 Chapter 13 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted April 5, 2015 Share Posted April 5, 2015 Goddamnit, the feels!! the story is progressing nicely, and its nice to see them managing to fight back competently, but not so over-competently that its like ingame. Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lankander Posted April 5, 2015 Share Posted April 5, 2015 I KNEW IT, I. KNEW IT, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO ALL GEORGE RR MARTIN ON US, WHAT HAVE WE DONE TO ANGER YOU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaIthazar Posted April 5, 2015 Share Posted April 5, 2015 please don't try to be Game of Thrones Rosing.. We already have a Game of Thrones It's called Game of Thrones.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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