FiveHours Posted April 6, 2015 Share Posted April 6, 2015 Touché, Rosing, touché. A nice wrap-up to the action and an enjoyable read before bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkfire336112 Posted April 6, 2015 Share Posted April 6, 2015 (edited) Aww, why'd you have to kill HER? I'm building her right now... T.T well, at least if she's the frame I think she is... Edited April 6, 2015 by sparkfire336112 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted April 6, 2015 Author Share Posted April 6, 2015 (edited) Aww, why'd you have to kill HER? I'm building her right now... T.T well, at least if she's the frame I think she is... Getting this out of the way now, she's not any frame, sorry to say. Not everyone here will be a Tenno. :T At any rate, I don't plan on being George RR Martin...(I don't read or watch GoT anyways) but a well known literary device is "murder your darlings," so... Edited February 7, 2016 by ROSING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkfire336112 Posted April 6, 2015 Share Posted April 6, 2015 I thought she was Valkyr. dammit. She seemed to be her, being all brawler and stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted April 7, 2015 Share Posted April 7, 2015 (edited) *sharpens scindo* Someone is going to have one less head, no matter how much I like that...particular...someone...... Now, story feels much much better. That conversation between Rilla and Koda-that was so natural, so llifelike! Can you follow? If you compare with earlier extracts I think you yourself will notice as well. Keep it up! Edited April 7, 2015 by Evanescent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brokenrune Posted April 7, 2015 Share Posted April 7, 2015 The feels T.T Well done Well done :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToxicTroublermaker Posted April 8, 2015 Share Posted April 8, 2015 I loved the whole bit describing Koda's(Ash's) bladestorm/teleporting attacks on the sentients. Gave me goose bumps from how good ot was to read about such badassery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted April 30, 2015 Share Posted April 30, 2015 Will you continue this story, ROSING? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted May 1, 2015 Author Share Posted May 1, 2015 ayyy....Hi guys.First of all, my bad. Finals ran into me and that was part of why there's been a very long break. Aside from that though I make no excuse. I've put this off for longer than I should and I need to get back into the habit. Before I had most of the story pretty well figured out, but after the Sentient attack I need to figure out where to go from here. It certainly will be challenging, but that's the reason why I started writing this. Dang, I really did put this off for a while...time to make a deadline for myself again. Expect something this Saturday. Think of it as season 2 or something. I don't know. Whatever, LET'S DO THIS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 I'm guilty of this myself, no worries. Finals are more important anyway, and sometimes you just need a break. At least you're back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 As someone going through their finals too, I fully understand. IRL is more important. Go rock them finals, girl! We'll be here, waiting, no problem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicandroid Posted May 1, 2015 Share Posted May 1, 2015 Agreed, finals are more important. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brokenrune Posted May 2, 2015 Share Posted May 2, 2015 (edited) Good luck :D I know how you feel. Edited May 2, 2015 by Brokenrune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted May 3, 2015 Author Share Posted May 3, 2015 Hello? Hello?Hi. I sure left a lot of loose ends to wrap up, and this chapter wasn't even enough to tie them all. I'll have more stuff, like how Koda is doing, next chapter. But after an intense battle like that I hope this chapter does it some justice, especially since I haven't posted in a while. Also I exceeded the word limit on post 9 so I had to move the chapter to the next available post: post 10!Hope you enjoy, and as always feel free to tear me a new one if you got any feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 I'm interested as to how you will incorporate newer frames and the primes into this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavakaku Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 This is getting even cooler! Teshin, the actual warframes, possibly Nyx appearing soon? (I'm predicting a Nemesis shoutout.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaIthazar Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 I'm more curious on how you are going to implement multiple tenno having the same powers...Of course, training them will be easier because Hayden will already know how to.. But still wondering what the scientific explanations will be for 2 people having identical powers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brokenrune Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 YES! I likez it. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted May 5, 2015 Share Posted May 5, 2015 Sentients are jelly of your soldiers, Lotus XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted May 6, 2015 Author Share Posted May 6, 2015 I'm interested as to how you will incorporate newer frames and the primes into this. I'm more curious on how you are going to implement multiple tenno having the same powers... Of course, training them will be easier because Hayden will already know how to.. But still wondering what the scientific explanations will be for 2 people having identical powers. Oh I already have a few ideas... You shall see! However, the multiple Tenno is pretty far off, I don't know when I will get to that point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 Get Ford or someone to copy blueprints of the Warframe systems, helmet and chassis, and then string these three together into one Warframe. C'est simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
agunlogisteam Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 is this the end?NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLSSSSSSSS NOOOOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted May 8, 2015 Author Share Posted May 8, 2015 Oh I'm just getting started (I hope). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicandroid Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Oh I'm just getting started (I hope). It's hilarious how often we writers end up saying that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Oh I'm just getting started (I hope). Just getting started, are we? You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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