Drakeardian Posted February 27, 2015 Share Posted February 27, 2015 Hello roleplaying forum! I am just as confused! What do I do to get this moved to a more suitable place? I say ask the Moderator for some clarification. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted February 27, 2015 Author Share Posted February 27, 2015 Well this wasn't exactly the way I wanted to get to 100 posts :T but I pm'd DEDanielle and we'll see what happens from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[DE]Danielle Posted February 27, 2015 Share Posted February 27, 2015 My apologies all! Got it mixed up with another thread I was moving. Moving to Fan Zone :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakeardian Posted February 27, 2015 Share Posted February 27, 2015 My apologies all! Got it mixed up with another thread I was moving. Moving to Fan Zone :) No worries Ma'am/Sir, we all have our moments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicandroid Posted February 28, 2015 Share Posted February 28, 2015 I am enjoying this. Your characters are proving to be very well developed, even the ones with the short screen time. More please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted February 28, 2015 Author Share Posted February 28, 2015 I am enjoying this. Your characters are proving to be very well developed, even the ones with the short screen time. More please? Of course! These next few chapters are going to get kinda complex for me though, so I'm going to be taking quite a bit of time to make sure everything at least partially makes sense. Still going to come out with a chapter a week at the latest tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 3, 2015 Author Share Posted March 3, 2015 Chapter 10 is up. Things are being set in motion that cannot be reversed, and as the Tenno make their debut to the Empire, they will soon learn the meaning of leadership, strength, trust, and sacrifice. And as such, I am scared as hell that I'm going to mess these next few chapters up...but get ready for action! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicandroid Posted March 4, 2015 Share Posted March 4, 2015 I have this love hate relationship with cliff hangers... *turns the hour glass and waits.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 If you kill Rilla I swear to god... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted March 6, 2015 Share Posted March 6, 2015 *squeals like a girl* OH MY GOD! You get better and better. Try to keep it up and improve more and more! The pacing was really nice this chapter, but the conversations, while tons better, still have to improve(all of us amateur writers have this problem) and so does the fluidity as you shift from subject to subject, alright? Still, Amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 6, 2015 Author Share Posted March 6, 2015 Alright so, since these next few chapters are incredibly complex, and also since I'm going somewhere where I will lack access to a computer for a week, there will be no update next week. That being said, I am always thinking about this story. Currently I'm working on the next 3-4 chapters all at once to make sure they'll all flow smoothly. I promise that as soon as I am back, I'll pick up the pace because hopefully a week of thinking about this story will make it pump out much faster. "I'll write the chapters! I swear it!"-Koda Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lankander Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 Hey man! we haven't heard from you in almost two weeks, any news on the next chapter? im dying to know what happens now, hope it's all well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 17, 2015 Author Share Posted March 17, 2015 I'm here.....slowly sinking...so much IRL work to get through, but I do have a first draft of the next few chapters ready. To be completely honest with you, I won't be able to get out another chapter until next week, unfortunately. However, I will promise that if i don't have anything out exactly a week from now, then I'm straight slacking. So by this time next week I am determined to have a chapter posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 Good to know you're still out there :P For a fic this good I'm willing to wait *joins seething crowd of waiters* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 Good to know you're still out there :P For a fic this good I'm willing to wait *joins seething crowd of waiters* *crowd seethes* SEEEEETHE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 18, 2015 Author Share Posted March 18, 2015 Sheesh, so many people counting on me...guess I gotta deliver :T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 Sheesh, so many people counting on me...guess I gotta deliver :T Don't push yourself too much, Hun. Irl comes first. Our amusement can wait! *hides detron* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 18, 2015 Author Share Posted March 18, 2015 *squeals like a girl* OH MY GOD! You get better and better. Try to keep it up and improve more and more! The pacing was really nice this chapter, but the conversations, while tons better, still have to improve(all of us amateur writers have this problem) and so does the fluidity as you shift from subject to subject, alright? Still, Amazing! Also, I wanted to ask what exactly about my conversations I can improve upon; I forgot to respond immediately to this post. But yeah I could see that shifting subject to subject was kinda awkward. Fortunately, most of the next chapters is straight fighting, so I don't have to worry about it as much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 Also, I wanted to ask what exactly about my conversations I can improve upon; I forgot to respond immediately to this post. But yeah I could see that shifting subject to subject was kinda awkward. Fortunately, most of the next chapters is straight fighting, so I don't have to worry about it as much... The transition between dialogues, that is linking the dialogues together smoothly. For most new or amateur writer this is the biggest problem because conversations become awkward. It's gotten a lot better, but there's still a lot of way to go :) Fight-o! Fight-o! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 24, 2015 Author Share Posted March 24, 2015 I will lead them to victory. Protect the empire, destroy the Sentients. I don’t want to die. None of my friends are going to die—not this time. I won’t be a burden to Hayden and the rest. If I succeed, then I can save this ship. It’s time to heat things up. I'm going to become stronger. Just you watch, Newt. I will protect her. I swear it. I guess I have a promise to keep...Chapter 11 is coming out tomorrow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanescent Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 I will lead them to victory. Protect the empire, destroy the Sentients. I don’t want to die. None of my friends are going to die—not this time. I won’t be a burden to Hayden and the rest. If I succeed, then I can save this ship. It’s time to heat things up. I'm going to become stronger. Just you watch, Newt. I will protect her. I swear it. I guess I have a promise to keep...Chapter 11 is coming out tomorrow! HYPE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krios_99 Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 Looking forward to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicandroid Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 *incomprehensible screeching* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiveHours Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 (edited) I'm happy I found this. A pleasure to read. Edited March 24, 2015 by TheDeathofThem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROSING Posted March 25, 2015 Author Share Posted March 25, 2015 Man, now I know what DE feels like with these deadlines you set for yourself. Chapter 11 is out. As there has been a break, please let me know if this chapter is crap compared to the others. Apart from that, things are picking up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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